Love love love this story!

update soon please....thanks

Please oh Please update this fic!!!

I love this story so far! The characters have depth, the plot is interesting, over all this is one of my favorite fan fictions so far. I can not wait till the next update.

Congrats on the kid. Hope he/she turns out what you've always wanted. Good chapter by the way

LOL Sesshomaru Sesshomaru~~!!! What a misunderstanding~~!!! ^O^

LOL Sesshomaru Sesshomaru~~!!! What a misunderstanding~~!!! ^O^

i'm loving this story! and i love how little shippou got introduced to sesshoumaru! hahaha! can't wait for the next chapter!!

oh my god,this story is so good i begin reading yesterday and i couldn't stop till i finished, so i going to wait for the next chapter i hope that it  very soon so till then.

So i have just stumbled upon your story and i must say that i am in LOVE!!!! Hehe, its actually quite intresting, at first when you mentioned Sesshoumaru having previous wifeys i was sorely tempted to just stop reading, however the concept of your story was intresting and in its own way unique so i persevered (yay me!! lol) and i'm very glad i did. I like how your story is coming together and even the portrayal of the characters is original. Overall i must insist on your updates!!!....well not insist......beg!! Well, i'm looking foreward to your next chapter! Hopefully its soon. Ciao!! :D

I think that if I were Kagome, I would feel a little put out and pissed.  Maybe even my feelings hurt over the reaction, no matter how instinctual.  Maybe even a few frustrated tears over the matter.  I very much like how the ending scene played out-it's very realistic that Sess would react that way.  Your writing style is very pleasing to me, and easy to follow.  You ought to be proud of your nominations, and very much deserve them.

Wow!  For Sesshomaru to show so much, I guess, affection towards Kagome in front of his wife and friend, he must really like her.  And to get upset at scenting another male on her shows so much.  I'm glad that Inuyasha had the foresight to get the kit and cat (chuckle) and bring them to the room and dispel, I am guessing, Sesshomaru's fear of Kagome betraying him?  Maybe I'm reaching.

It's funny, I was thinking of sending you a message to hurry your butt up and update, but you did, so I didn't have to!  You read my mind :)  Thanks for a great chapter and I know you can't rush creativity.  Writing is hard!

Hazzah! A new chapter! And so soon after your last update. ^o^ And more Inu-chan and Kanga-sama! *snuggles them*

Well, the note on this chapter being "mostly unedited" aside, this was a pretty good chapter. I feel just as bad as before about Kanga and Honaria. And I refuse to believe that Kanga would, especially after a plea and subsequent declaration like that, just leave Honaria high and dry to marry their best friend without an extremely good reason. Maybe Kanga went to their fathers and discovered something more serious that the political marriage would be covering up/fixing? Maybe there's a problem with him... There are a lot of possibilities.

Somehow, when you mentioned that the four (five including Kagome and Rin's daily "guest") of them made it a habit to bathe at night, I knew Kagome's little introduction wouldn't go as planned. And breakfast was going so well too...

There's nothing wrong with skipping time; especially when you make it a point to summarize what went on then (and because nothing of real importance was happening anyway). Time jumps only become an issue when you do them multiple times in a chapter and/or give very few to no details.

Thanks again for such an interesting chapter. I'm looking forward to the conclusion of this scene (you will finish it, right? Even a "review of my exhausting day flashback" would work) and more insight into our two favorite relationships. I'd also love to meet a few of Sesshomaru's other wives (as scathing as they'll surely be). I'm going to take a stab in the dark and say that the oldest of the pups won't be brought out/introduced until we're down to the last few candidates, no? And what happened to that bitch Sesshomaru kept around for saving Rin? He send her home yet?

Ay... So much left to cover. *bounces in anticipation*

Hope you're enjoying your summer!
~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

OMFG he threw her through a d0or!? what a mean puppy! seriously i could totally see her going miko bomb on him for that if he had hurt shippo! more please!

I barely got past the first couple of paragraphs, and already LOVE this story.

such a wonderful chapter! :D Update soon please!

I lllooovveeeddd this chspter. It was amazing. I am so loving Sesshoumaru in this story. I cannot wait to read what happens next. Please hurry with the next installment, Sesshoumaru was absolutely awesome in this chapter. Loved his reaction to Kagome and already believing she is his. more, more.

You're officially forgiven! :3 Can't wait to see more of this possessive Sesshou! ^-^ I know I'm like a broken tape, but: please update soon! :D

PS "Kagome and Rin would merely role their eyes and continue on.." I believe that they would roll they're eyes ^^

This was a wonderful chapter. The time jump issue was really not an issue at all. I liked that you were able to move forward a bit without having to really get into the exact things that happened over the weeks in too much specific. It helps the flow of the story and the feeling that things are happening. I was pleased to see that our characters are moving forward now a bit quicker in time. I wouldn't do this for the whole story though, just when your trying to fill a bit and get to what matters, if you know what I mean.

Kanga and Honoria are great characters and the work well with Kags and Sess. I think the interaction with Sess and Kag is good and that he is showing a bit of that dominant male alpha that we all have come to love. Hope to see that he starts 'getting it' when he realizes what has happened and stops being a dolt. He needs to go after her or she's going to up and leave on her own. Especially after what he just did to her.

There are very few errors in this chapter too. I wouldn't be too worried about it. This is coming from a beta too hon so you did a nice job. ^_^
Can't wait to see more as always and hope the above info is helpful in what you might be looking for from your reviews.

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Alpine ^_^