I have past the last three day to read your story... I can't find the words to describe how beautiful it is, I couldn't stop to read!
Let me tell you, it's a masterpiece...I have felt so many emotions while reading it and now that I discover it, I can't wait to see how'll proceed!
all my compliments! and thank you for publishing such a wonderful story :)
Pebbles (Chapter 87) - Sat 22 Sep 2012
O Dear God... much more amusing an end then expected!! Thanks for that!! O man, the memories that resurface from reading that...lol I think everyone can relate on some level to this chapter =3
Pebbles (Chapter 86) - Sat 22 Sep 2012
If anything, I pray YOU never tire of writing this story. I selfishly hope it continues for another 20 chapters!! lol However, I'm sure that myself and many others will enjoy it till you see it fit to end it. I thank you for every chapter you grace us with.
Bloodstained has always been interesting because of the complex nature of their relationship. Then you try to place them in everyday situations that we all would take for granted and watch them agonize over every little thing!! That's not easy to do and keep interesting. Plus, there are so many variables that can be addressed that will keep you guessing. The introduction of Mizuki for example. There's a hint to what it's like for the Higurashi's to the new 'adjustment'. However, what is it like for the other side?
See? It's when you do things like this...I NEVER want you to stop writing it!!! lol
hmm... that last back and forth conversation with the beast really makes a good point. Still... I thought Kagome said she would love Sesshomaru regardless so if that's the case why is she continuing to separate them? :sighs: If only they could truly merge, both wanting/loving her as they apparently do so that their WAYS of doing so could also merge.
SessMom's being a closed minded bitch about this... even if I can't fault her for wanting her son happy. She's just letting too much of her bias from Izayoi flavor what would really make Sesshomaru happy. If she could see the bigger picture on THAT I imagine she could be much help.
Had to roll my eyes at Kagome's mom's advice. "If it's meant to be..." High Ones... I hate when people say that when things are tough. Sheep's response. So annoying.
Thanks for writing.
steph (Chapter 88) - Wed 12 Sep 2012
i've been reading your story for about two years now and i have to say that this last cliff hanger is by far the meanest of them all! there is no way i can sit and wait patiently for an update. you have kept me on edge through this whole story and i have re-read it many, many times. you are rivaling with "to wash it all away" in my heart. i am awaiting your next chapter eagerly!
mytra (Chapter 1) - Mon 03 Sep 2012
Everytime I read your updates they bring tears to my eyes thank you.
Eden (Chapter 88) - Wed 22 Aug 2012
As many have hopefully said, you absolutely DO NOT need to worry about your pace. I find NOTHING that needs 'dire' attention. I am in love with your story as few make me so. I can't stress this enough. I hope you understand what I'm saying. It is a window into your being and I hope to meet and read more like you. Thank you for reading.
You have made me say things that only my campanion's ears would ever have the chance to hear and understand XD.
Salnota (Chapter 88) - Sat 18 Aug 2012
Compliments:
I have tried reading this fanfiction a number of times and I finally got through the beginning and completely caught up. Now I understand why it has received so many awards. Thank you so much and please please update again soon! <3
Constructive Criticism:
I want to say that I really enjoy how realistic you are with Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship and that they did not just jump back into it and that Kagome did repeatedly hesitate. On that note though (please PLEASE do not take any offense, I'm just trying to give some creative criticism) there are some parts where their thoughts get a little flowery and wordy. So instead of speeding up the story maybe just cut down on some of the flowery language with their thoughts. Again, this is just some constructive criticsm so please, please do not take any offense. I absolutely love your works (I have read quite a few now). I also have to admit that I feel this was one of your best chapters when it came to the lengthy thoughts.
Uuuuuuuuaaaaagh! How can you be serious?! I start this story....catch AAAAAAAAAAAAAAALL the way up to the current parts...only to find that it's at a cliff hanger. Jesus.....
Anywho...I just wanted to say that this is a great story. Sesshoumaru's awesome, His mom's a bitch, and Kiyoshi is adorable. I shall eagerly await more......:D
OMG! Please update soon. This chapter had me on edge and that cliff hanger has me anxious for the next chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Sarah (Chapter 88) - Tue 14 Aug 2012
Wow, just wow. I'm completely blown away by this series and I'm thralled by you're story-telling. I know you have said multiple times that you are worried about the pace of your fiction but I do not think you should speed it up. A relationship like theirs takes time to overcome memories, wounds and learn and grow as an individual and as a couple. The only fault I find in this work is the grammar and technical writing, which I apologize for being picky, is not that great but acceptable enough. I love this series so much, I'd offer to review it all and fix the mistakes in order to make it truly perfect. Cannot wait until you release the next chapter and thank you so much for continuing to stick with this fiction.
Little Rin (Chapter 88) - Mon 13 Aug 2012
OMG! This is going to drive me batty. Your 88th chapter is a cliffie! Update soon please.....
REDWOLF (Chapter 88) - Mon 13 Aug 2012
Lord have mercy....kiss him, kiss him. Then, blast the heck out of his mother, show her who's the NEW Lady of the West, Ha, what a nasty mother-in-law she is!!
*cmone kaqs... Just do it.. Like I mean, I get it she's stl hurting and all, but o e way or another... You gots to face the music... Plus, the beast ain't so bad... He's done his redemption already...:) more please*
Pricila (Chapter 88) - Sun 12 Aug 2012
Quick. Quick. Next chapter!! Please let it be a good one; do it Kagome!!
BLuMyst (Chapter 87) - Sun 12 Aug 2012
I've been following this story from the beginning and normally I never follow stories this long but it's so good. This latest chapter is freaking awesome and it's exactly what both Sess and Kagome needed to finally wake up and take a good hard look at the elephant in the room. I'm so glad you brought his mother into the picture. She's finally forcing them to realize that they can't survive they way they were going and that kagome will either need to learn to accept the Beast or let Sess go. Bravo on another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
TenkiTenchi (Chapter 88) - Sun 12 Aug 2012
Let me start out by saying that i do not write reviews......ever........ But this was just too good for me not to write one. You are such a talented writer even though english is not your native tongue. i have been following this story since day one and each and every chapter has me litterally begging for more ^_^. i have never loved an author or a story as much as this one and it is because you know how to use language. your descriptions are phenominal and i REALLY cannot wait until chapter 89........btw the cliff hanger was evil lolol Please please please keep up the good work. -TenkiTenchi
GAHHHHH!!!!!! cliff hanger evilness!!! i LOVE this story. when i first started to read it, i was on the fence. im not too big into the whole rape scene but this story has sucked me in chapter after chapter. its beautifully written and so surreal. I love that you have sesshoumaru himself, in control and devoted, and the the "beast", who starts out fierce and contolling and seemingly uncaring to the caring thing he is today. He cares whether or not Kagome will be happy, if Shesshoumaru will be happy. And i love that your incorporating him more and more into merging together will the logical half. I cant wait for the chapter where Kagome proves everyone wrong and accepts all of Shesshoumaru. But im alil lost on Kiyoshi.....is he still in trouble from the jewel? Anyways, keep up the awesome updates.....im prepared to beg for a quick update......
Keep it coming.
Szira (Chapter 88) - Sun 12 Aug 2012
Oh the stopping! It kills me! <3 please update soon!
/teary face!
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