I'm surprised I have not read this sooner!!!!
Really, there are a few moments here that feel like you are coming close to a conclusion. Is this getting close to the end?!! I don't know how to FEEL about that!! This story has been rockin my world for sooo long, I can't imagine not having it anymore! lol Yet, I am enjoying where this is going.
Sessho's mother is one serious b-i-t-c-h!! Literally and figuratively! lol But I can't help but lover her! Her inteference is coming from a nurturing place. Slightly twisted, I must say that, yet nurturing. He has been holding himself back, hasn't he? It's so painfully obvious to her. He ignores himself to be happy? How does that work? It doesn't. Which is why she is the objective manifestation of a reality check that he so desperately needs. I agree with her, but I hate what she's doing. She's still too set in her own ways to realize that sometimes....change happens, and change can be a good thing. I mean the constant comparisons of Sesshomaru being like his father and Kagome being like Izayoi is the biggest hint of that. Plus, she loves gettin' her way, which makes this even worse for the two of them. Kagome proves her wrong, but she still needs the final word!! She's a handful and she brings something to your story.
Kagome is still broken? I believe this too. If she wasn't, then really what is truly holding them back? I question this. Only because of the personal growth she has experienced with Sesshomaru and admitting to her feelings about their life to come. It's almost Kagome and his mother are on the same wavelength. They BOTH want Sesshomaru to be happy and at peace with himself. Just one may know how to do that for him more then the other. Question remains, which of the two?
And the BEAST!! Way to bring him back. Maybe this is morbid, but I honestly miss the beast. His presence is unpredictable. He is that constant mysterious unknown. I have this feeling, he will make so much sense in future chapters that we'll be popping ourselves in the head goin' 'DUH!!' lol Or, maybe not. Again, mysterious unknown. Either way, welcome back BEAST.
Will patiently wait for you to update. Cliffhangers make with much uneasiness. Please don't leave us too restless!
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