I loved this chapter because it was a little too close to the reality I live.
Well, I don't think I care much for Rin both past and present. The girl is a little jealous, trouble maker, or that is the way she comes off. Seems like she has been ploting against Sesshoumaru and Kagpme from the start. Looks like Shippo might have been a means to an ends to being able to live longer in Rin's eyes. But, I am just doing some speculation here. This story is fantastic.
(Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Mar 2010
Oh my gosh, I started reading this on Thursday and finished yesterday. I love it! It has a very good plot and has me wanting to read more. This is probably on of my favourite Sess/Kag stories to date! :)
what can i say, the story's good. i mean, well, the story's awesome, and the plot's really progressing. i like that Sesshoumaru is finally getting out of that shell of his.
Wow. I started reading this story this morning, and I can not WAIT for more! You, my dear, are a wonderful, creative person! More please!!
Oh Sesshomaru, for someone who holds a very high opinion of himself, he has much to leard. As I'm sure Kagome will teach him! Thanks for the update, it was good! Please update again soon, it's so hard to wait this long between chapters!
So I guess this is the start to how Kagome and Sesshou become Ao and Kin. What words of wisdom could Bokuseno provide to Sesshou once he has completely turned over a new leaf? I look forward to the day that Sesshou realizes how important Kagome is to him. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
mary (Chapter 11) - Thu 04 Mar 2010
wow, amazing. thoroughly enjoyed it. how do you do it? do you have a beta?
oh please,please,PLEASE update soon. this fic was AMAZING and so enjoyable to read! it was original and quite frankly one of the best cannon fics I've ever read! I cant wait till your next update which hopefully will be soon.
mary (Chapter 10) - Wed 17 Feb 2010
they're just so cute together. i mean who gets a chance to see how they'll come about? at least for us readers that is.
Wonderful! Thanks for the quick fix! Will the young Sesshoumaru eventually remember what happened? I wish I could draw because I'd do some fanart for you of the old Sesshoumaru kicking the young Sesshoumaru's ass! lol! :)
I am rather surprised to see the difference between past and future versions of Sesshou. I guess 500 years does wonders to remove that stick that seems to be shoved soo far up his ass. I really never thought about how much people can change given a certain amount of time. I am eager to see where things begin to change for the better between past versions of Sesshou and Kagome. And I love the mini battle of the Sesshous' and I wonder when Kagome will figure out that she is conversing with the future versions of herself and him. Keep up the good work and update soon. :P
So, apparently Sesshomaru passed out when Kin attacked him, but just before he did he recignized the miko and himself...right? Where did that go? Why doesn't he remember it now? I'm so confused!
Great chapter! I just love this story! I'm a little confused, though. Sesshoumaru realized that the elderly couple was actually him and Kagome ... then, he got knocked out ... when he wakes up to Kagome and Ao talking, does he remember that revelation or does he not remember???
Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! I have so many thoughts as to what his decision was! What does this mean?! I hope it's something juicy! Also, I love the way you show Sesshomaru and Kagome as an old married couple, it's so darn cute! I love this fic, you are very creative! Please update as soon as you can, this fic is fast becoming one of my favorites!
I really like this chappie. I loved how Ao gets to act silly during parties to find out secrets on the rival companies for Sesshou. And I find the whole seeing aura thing very interesting. But I do wonder why Ao doesn't change somethings since she finds things out as Kagome.... For instance, when Kagome finds out about the scheming Chihomi then couldn't she prevent her from marrying her son as Ao? Also, I love Kagome's response to "curiosity killed the cat."
Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Dani (Chapter 9) - Mon 25 Jan 2010
NO, NO, NOOOOO! I thought there was more! Ooohhhh and it's getting so good too! I hope you update soon becuase this is awesome!
mary (Chapter 9) - Mon 25 Jan 2010
wooo... a chance to do wicked things perhaps? *snicker*
although, i don't get how reading auras will help with this upcoming task. hhhmmm....
Oh wow. You did a lot of work on this chapter. So much happened. It looks like Sesshoumaru is getting ready to start using Kagome's abilities back in feudal times. Nice back story, or would that be 'front' story. ^_^ Ao was hilarious. What she was doing for Sesshoumaru was very sweet. I love your ideas about the side-effects of the bond and hope there will be more. ^_^ Thanks for all the hard work!
LOL! Terrific chapter! I love the p.s and 2 p.s.s notes on Kagome's invitation! :)
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