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I don't feel like you are moving the story too fast, nor the relationship with Sess and Kags...I mean come on, Sess has had feelings for her for so long now and who can really deny Sess what he wants!!!! lol As for the story when you have a villian you can only drag out the outcome for so long. I love the pace you have set out for this story and look forward to more in the near future!!! Please keep up the good work and update soon. I know my Kags will make it to the boy in time to save him and kill the sadistic bastard that has him. Can't wait to see who the villian really is in this!!!!
this is amazing and creepy all at once, and i dont think its moving all that fast! it feels like a movie i loves it!
Ok I love the story and all but COME ON...you are being cruel and unusal with your punishment of this cliffy....please update soon and hopefully it is no body part of her missing boy.
What what what!!!!!!! what is it????? omg is it a human body piece PLEASE UPDATE SOON MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!!!
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A cliff hanger? Really? This is what you give your adoring fans??
;) You did well on this. I am suprised this is your first scene like this. Since I have no experience besides forensics shows and fanfiction, I will leave any pointers to people who know what they are talking about :)
KEdakumi (Chapter 18) - Tue 09 Mar 2010
I avoided this story for away, not being really getting into the whole "alt universe" stories. I have to say though, this story has really captured my attention. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Addy (Chapter 18) - Tue 09 Mar 2010
Oh dear. I'm sure the little boy, or at least a part of his body is rotting insode. XP
So what could it be? Fingers, an eye or two? It is some body part, of that I am sure, it could be a foot as well since it is a shoe box. As for the clues, why the specialty shop? could it be someone with money tht could afford shopping there? A former employee maybe that was loosly connected to some in her life? This is definitely exciting! Also depending on what was found, is it possible the kid is dead, or...on ice in a sense? I mean, caurterizing the wound to stem the blood flow and keeping them on an IV....maybe? i've watched too many movies, sorry.
Eeew, I bet it is a severed body part! Now, since Naraku is Kagome's supervisor, I guess he can't be the guilty culprit, though it could be. It doesn't seem as though InuYasha is into Kagome enough to do anything involving that much EFFORT, so I guess it's not him. Maybe Jaken has a huge fixation on Sesshy, and wants Kagome out of the picture! I will sit back and enjoy as you reveal the true facts of the matter, keep up the good work! And seriously, don't let rabid reviewers slow you down. I have a super nasty chick who insists on reading and reviewing my stories on MediaMiner, who is just frothing mad, and at first I let it get to me. But you've got to figure a person like that has a lot of mental problems, which have nothing to do with you or your writing, so just blow it off...
ka-ren (Chapter 18) - Tue 09 Mar 2010
omg i feel bad for the poor kid TT.TT
O_O oh ho ho! I'm thinking like the movie se7en dark!
joyouki (Chapter 1) - Tue 09 Mar 2010
oooh! I am so excited to keep reading. I was shocked about the hair cut on Kags. I just cant imagine it and Sess actually being interested in her looking so hard.
And to also read that Inu has a fiance now! What a flippin jerk!
elise (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
First of all, I would like to say that I am sorry that someone was so blatantly direspectful of your story. Reading what you said in your most recent chapter, even I was offended. That being said, I would like to tell you how much I am enjoying "Unable to Commit". It is by far one of the most well written fics that I have read, easily within the last 5 years. While I can understand some reader's desire to keep Kagome inside some specific box, I am really enjoying the amount of characterization that is going on with her. It is completely refreshing to read a fic in which Kagome can be completely different from the cannon character, but at the heart of it all, still be who everyone identifies her as. In your fic, she has buzzed hair, and was kind of chubby, and after a terrible break up, she decided that she wanted to change her life for the better and be happy with who she was. I don't know anyone that couldn't relate to that. It is the mark of a good writer to be able to create and write about characters that readers feel like they know. It is what makes the work so enjoyable. That being said, yeah Kagome is a little different than she is represented in the Anime/Manga, but not in a way that makes her unrelateable and coarse. She is still the headstrong, caring, and selfless character with immesurable strength of will and heart that everyone is familiar with. I think that your story has been very successful at being refreshing and inventive, while still being able to capture the essence of the characters, Sesshoumaru specifically. He is still the Daiyoukai that we all know and love, but he has miles of depth added to him by your characterization. It really is a joy to read. I look forward to your updates, and I'm sorry that someone was so offended by what you write. I agree with you, if you simply don't like a story, you don't have to read it. It's not like any of the writers or readers of fics do this for monetary gain, even though, there are terribly talented writers around(like you), you guys do it for the pleasure you get. I hope for their sake, people take your words to heart and stop being jerks about your writing. For the most part, we're all adults, and I hope some readers start acting like it. Keep up the amazing work on this story, and I look forward to all future chapters of this story, and future fics. It is by far one of my favorite stories on Dokuga.
I want to kill this mystery man grrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toniabonya (Chapter 17) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
I'm not much of a reviewer, but I do hope that you continue this story! The frequent updates are awesome. I love when Kagome is a strong person in a fanfic. So what if you have a few mistakes involving grammar. Please do not let others discourage you.
I've been reading this story, and I find it one of the better ones out there. I LOVE a strong Kagome, and while it's a bit sad that she cut off all her hair, I can certainly understand why she did so.
See, in the military and police, women are requested if not out right required to keep their hair short and/or manageable. Long hair is a target in a fight.
Heck, I'm surprised you aren't getting flamed for cutting Sess's hair! (I caught that in a chapter...) 0.o
I've got nothing to mention about the plot as it seems to be doing well. I look forward to continuing this journey!
Corin (Chapter 17) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
I really hope this story isn't on hiatus that long. It's an awesome story and it keeps me wanting more when the chapter ends. Don't let people get to you to much. :)
Awesome Story and updates!!!! Can't wait to read more about the happenings of Kagome and her evil stalker!! Though I seriously thought that it would be Inuyasha but I guess not. Will Kagome be able to protect her boys and will Sess allow her to leave to do her job once Naraku releases her back to duty?!?! Please don't let idiotic reviews dampen your writing's flow. Idiots are every where and unforntunatly so are small minds!!! My motto is: "Don't hold strong opinions about things you don't understand" and "You measure democracy by the freedom it gives its dissidents, not the freedom it gives its assimilated conformists." Though it is more political it also goes for creativity!! Please don't put this wonder piece of work on hold because of small minds and idiotic views. I look forward to the next update, which hopefully will be soon.
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