So....who's the fat Tony wannabe? Greasy looking guy with rings? Sounds like some wannabe mobster. Thanks for the update, this was a great chapter. I can't wait until she confronts Inuyasha herself. That will be awesome!
Okay I don't know if the fat man was mentioned before, but he gave me the creeps and I wonder if he's involved. ANd I couldn't help but chuckle when Inuyasha called, all freaked out. It isn't any of his business what happens to Kagome anymore, I hope he can get that through his thick head one of these days.
Anyway great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Ooooohhhh! So, the press gets a hold of the story. Will it be leaked that she is staying at Sess' place? This could either turn a corner in her case, or make it even worse with the interference. Can't wait to see.
Go Kagome!!! Awesome update. Kagome is spazmasing!!! She's doing her job and doing it awesomely. But poor sessho. It's got to be killing him. He's at war with his instincts. The instincts to protect and the instincts to make his mate happy. I hope they can find balance if Kagome takes better care of herself. I loved the update, can't wait for the next one.
Indigo_Miko (Chapter 21) - Sun 18 Apr 2010
I cannot wait for the next chapter in this story! This is a wonderful piece of crime, romance, and mystery. It is one of my favorite stories and I ferverently hope that you finish it because if you don't I may be forced to hunt you down (complete with flaming pitch forks and angry mobs). No matter how busy life gets in the real world I hope you continue to write because you are a truely talented author.
YUS!!! I was hoping you hadn't forgotten the story, but I can also understand craziness in the outside world. Anywho, awesome job and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Hey, don't worry about having a life outside of fanfiction! Our normal lives should always be more important than these stories and other people's entertainment.
That said, great job on another wonderful chapter! It seems this story is far from over...and I cannot wait to read each new installment :)
Firstly, thank you for the update! I appreciate that you took time out being sick and all to update this story. Secondly, will the guy try to get at her while in the hospital? Is he working alone or with someone? This story is continuing to lead us on. I can't wait!
InuYoukai_Goddess (Chapter 20) - Tue 13 Apr 2010
i have sneaking suspicion tht onigumo is behind all this.....hmm...ill just have to wait and see for another amazing chapter!
omg omg omg I'm at the end GAH WHERE IS THE REST OF IT!!!!!! THis is an awesome story, I'm totally hooked so please update soon!!!!
Yeah they found the boy in time...though was there another riddle inside the first?? Hope Sess won't be too mad at Kags!!! Can't wait for the update
They found Otoko...yay! But I'm sure the creepy man is not too far behind. And Sess is going to freak when he finds out what happened. That confrontation is going to be crazy.
Addy (Chapter 20) - Fri 02 Apr 2010
Intense stuff. Semmed a little... off, though. I'm not sure why.
sux about the 'puter. bad 'puter! no BYTES! :D
Good chapter, I'm so glad they found Otoko! Now if they can just catch the baddie...
oooh, Sess is going to be beside himself when he finds out 'Gome got hurt on the job...*wince* But I bet he'll go ballistic on the info about the doorjerk.
Brandie (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Mar 2010
I really like this story and can't wait for the next chapter
Sakura-Biyori (Chapter 19) - Sun 14 Mar 2010
You are one evil author. Seriously. I mean it. I love the way that this fic is written, and I can't wait to read more off it. The stalker dude... I think he is that person who called Kagome a whore.
Sakura-Biyori.
Good chapter! It is sort of getting a bit boring for my tastes but I want to still want to read it. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
alex (Chapter 19) - Thu 11 Mar 2010
oh my gosh, why did you left it at that? awesome story can't wait for the next chapter.
KEdakumi (Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Mar 2010
And I agree with Pandora, I love the pace that you have set for the characters. Please don't slow down.
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