I like this story. But, I have a request. Can Kagome kill Sesshomaru? Pleaze? I am sick and tired of stories where Sesshomaru does some pretty horrible shit and in the end everything is fine and Sesshomaru gets off scott free. i think she should find a way to get that collar of torture him and then kill him. Maybe even marry another lord and disolve the western lands. Or maybe she should purify all of the demons or something. i just feel that in stories like these Kagome is a little pussy and gets taken advantage of. She should kill him after he realizes what he did was wrong. That would be some good justice.
"Do not expect Sesshoumaru to be nice in this story. In fact he's going to be down right mean. He will rape and abuse Kagome continually throughout my tale. The love between them will be slow coming."
The love between them? I have a question, can a love relationship bloom from one built off of rape and abuse? That's completely unhealthy and any emotions that can bloom from that, I wouldn't think, would be love no way you twist it, no matter how much he changed.
autumngold (Chapter 9) - Wed 28 Oct 2009
Wonderful update! Yet again Inuyasha proves how stupid he is. Not only does he give Kagome up to Sesshoumaru to be raped and mistreated, but he is going to mate Kikyo? Dumb move! Won't this upset Sesshoumaru, because he thought Kikyo wouldn't stay alive much longer? Does this mean the mating won't take, or that Kagome will have to worry about Kikyo's anger in the future? I'm probably a terrible person, but in your story I hate Inuyasha more than Sesshoumaru. Sure Sesshoumaru continues to use and abuse Kagome, but if it wasn't for Inuyasha this would never have happened to her. If Inuyasha hadn't broken her so much to begin with, Sesshoumaru wouldn't have been able to mate her. She would probably be dead of the injuries he has given her, but at least she wouldn't have to live with so much pain and fear. Also, if Inuyasha had protected her the way he had promised to Sesshoumaru would never have gotten his hands on her. I'm so glad that Kagome has been able to control her temper around the lords so far. I hope she will be able to continue this and not let her temper get in the way. Please post again soon!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! INUYASHA, DON'T BE AN IDIOT AND MATE THAT WITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TRUST YOUR INSTINCTS, MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I almost forgot about this one, especially when it's getting good. He should trust instincts. Even HE knows this is a big mistake. I hope he realizes it before it's too late.
Mandy (Chapter 2) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
i am really liking this story
i liked the story update soon. i cant wait to read a little more fluff so i will keep an eye out for ur update
Anonymous (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Oct 2009
I really enjoy this story in a sick, twisted sort of way. The way that Sesshoumaru acts and thinks is very realistic to the way he might act in life. Many times he is romanticized and I'm not against him turning into a good guy ,however, this story lets you see him in a light that isn't flattering. I don't support abuse in any way but this story is developling into something more than the average fanfiction. It is a creation that stirs your emotions to the point that you WANT to react. You want a happy ending even though you know it might not be possible.
Please don't give up on this story if someone discourages you. This creation deserves to be seen through the end, to be finished. And I heartily encourage you to continue writing. You have displayed an amazing talent and I hope that you update soon.
Renee (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Oct 2009
I love this story, it is different from most other Sess/Kag fanfics I've read. Please keep updating. ;)
akdf (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2009
Oh my! you have a very interesting mind. but in a good way. not to say that what sesshomaru's doing is good but what i mean is that you're very creative. It's good to have the dark stories every now and again instead of all the fluff. so good job! i do like this story and I hope that you'll update soon. My one hope is that if kagome does have sons that they'll kick sesshomaru's ass for what he's done to her!!
Edina (Chapter 8) - Tue 13 Oct 2009
I am quite liking how this story is making sesshoumaru a total masochistic ass, but yet it is in character.
please update soon. (i hope ur not dead lolz)
argus (Chapter 8) - Mon 12 Oct 2009
Okay, I liked this story until you brought Rin into it. You tend to give that girl a more important role than she has. I thought you wanted to keep Sesshoumaru in character but Rin is like a hime in your story.
He cares and protects that girl but nothing else. He ignores her most of the time and she had to search for her food herself but in your story she has a higher position than Kagome. Even if he sees Kagome as his whore, Rin´s station shouldn´t be much higher than hers. Everything else is OOC and I liked this story because of Sesshoumarus cold and cruel personality. It was different.
There is a reason why he left Rin in a human village even if she still has his care and protection but Jaken has that, too and he still travels with his Lord. Oh well, good luck with your story.
Sala (Chapter 8) - Mon 12 Oct 2009
Why such the long wait between this chapter and the next? I do hope that you're doing well and aren't ill, or something.
With such terrible trauma being repeatedly heaped upon her, is there a chance that Kagome will develop Dissociative Identity Disorder and create another personality to deal with Sesshoumaru while her own becomes buried in her subconscious?
... (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Oct 2009
um. wow.
stars (Chapter 8) - Sun 04 Oct 2009
please updata
Silverkitsune26 (Chapter 8) - Wed 30 Sep 2009
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH..................*GROWLS*...................... I really want to get my hands on Sesshoumaru and tie him to a bed and REALLY teatch him the meaning of torture. My type of torture, there are no pain in my kind only frustration and plasure. Poor Kagome I hope she can forgive and survive what he does to her and not become cold. You can survive ir but you will be scarred both in body and mind. You can easily become ice cold when treated that way. I can understand that he thinks differently beacause of the difference in species but there are limits. I'm so looking forward to your next chapter. Pleace update soon, this has fast become one of my favorite stories. ^_^
Very dark.....very brutal.....but interesting plot and story....One must be in a certain mood to read this one. I've only come across one other dark fic as good as this one on A Single Spark. Well done......waiting for the next chapter.
Poor Kagome. I applaud her for her spirit, for holding on and fighting, but I can't help but hear the little voice in my head screaming at her to give up. When you think about it, the life she's being offered isn't all that bad. But the Kagome we love has to fight back. Poor girl. Great chapter!! I can't wait for the next one.
D-lover02 (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Sep 2009
I like your story!
I like how your gradually allowing Sesshoumaru to be comfortable with Kagome and not like after 2 chapters hes in love her and all that crap. I mean dont get me wrong those plots are okay but not too realistic and can be nuseating at times. His attitude is indifferent and uncaring. I like that it real and i dont see him ooc at all other than him being a little more malicious than you would expect.
This is an abusive story and that is what potraied (sp?) in the story. I'll admitt it is a little uncomfortable to read at times but im interested in seeing how this story progresses. Please update soon!
Awesome Job! Keep it up!
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