Finally. I like the way this is turning with the whole Kenji thing at the end. Too bad it's impossible for a member of the gaurd to betray Sesshoumaru. ...hmm, unless, does t matter if they see it as a betrayal ro not, or is it if sesshoumaru sees it as a betrayal that they die? Oh well, even if that was going tohappen it would be a helluva long way from happening. Nice job by the way having Kagome put the bitch in his place.
Wow! Kagome's speech to Kenji was POWERFUL! That was strong, very strong. I still feel so sorry for Inuyasha, though, he's really screwed his life up and doesn't even realize how much. As for Kikyo, she's a boil on the ass of the world. And Sesshoumaru really isn't much better. Actually, the two of them are on par. To tell you the truth, you're doing such a good job of character development that I would like to bitch-slap a number of your characters! LOL.
I don't know how anyone could think that Kagome is becoming complacent, she's caught in a trap and, at the moment, has no recourse. She is learning what she can of her situation and trying to survive with her soul intact. At least she tells Sesshoumaru exactly how she feels. And every time he complains about her unhappiness fouling her scent I just want to tell him to Eat S--- and Die! You are doing such a good job of creating this believable world that I get really riled at some of the characters.
I found somethings for you to check out, typing a little fast, were we? Trying to get this done so you could post it? LOL. I found the following as I read, and believe me, it wasn't easy.
I think you meant distance here, and a comma after Inuyasha: "Despite still traveling with Inuyasha, they insisted on keeping their difference from their once friend and his new mate."
" I shouldn't have just let him take her like that."
Sesshoumaru’s banners blew freely in the wind sporting the Western Lord’s banners.
Holding his hand up to halt his troops
“The prophesy is ancient. So old that few know of it.
All of this…all of the fancy clothes, the expensive jewelry, the servants, the palaces…none of it means anything to me.”
The only true difference between you and me, Kenji, is that I do not condone rape and torture.
I look forward to your next update, but don't rush it.
Neo-Crystal (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009
Hm! You let him have it, kagome!! I'm hoping that Sesshy will be gone long enough for kaome to go thru her pregnancy and have bonding time with her baby, before Sesshy enters the scene. But more then likely your not going to do that. This story of yours makes me feel so many different emotons and most of the time my heart clenchs a few times during the chapter. s kagome gonna have any complacations with her first pregnancy? since she is carrying a full demon.
Your stories are awesome!! I can go back and read some of my favorites parts in any of your stories and I still always have my heart clench at certain parts, no matter how much I go back and read it. Keep writing!!
Wow this story got really intense and I love the interaction between Kenji and Kagome. I think that's somehow providing some insight to them. Please continue <3 I really really love this story and i want to know what will happen to her : )
Thank you so much!
OMG! I can't convey how much I love this story, or your other stories. I'm so happy for this new chapter, and I will try and review more often for support.
Very riveting chapter. I loved the way that Kagome told the guard that in her time that youkai were all but forgotten. I love the way that she gave him something to think about... and I am fairly sure that he WILL do some thinking. I am eager to read the next chapter.
autumngold (Chapter 14) - Wed 18 Nov 2009
I am so, so glad that finally someone listened to Kagome. I hope he takes her words to heart and really thinks about what she said. I know it won't change him, and he will still answer to Sesshoumaru, but maybe he can help Sesshoumaru see what he is doing is wrong. Will he believe Kagome when she tells him she cares for her baby? Won't her actions prove her words? Maybe when he sees this he will start to believe in the other things she has told him. Thank you so much for another wonderful update! Inuyasha makes me sick, great time for him to think about what he Should have done. Where was he when Kagome was being raped and brutalized? He was right, he just gave her away. I hope he never gets her back, he certainly doesn't deserve her! Please don't let him believe Kagome asked for this! I really hope he finds out how Sesshoumaru has used and abused her. All of this because even though Inuyasha knew what a wonderful person she was, he didn't care enough about her to keep her safe. I hate him! He has no excuse for what he did! Please post more soon! I can't wait!
Another great chapter! I know that Kagome won't be winning friends in the elite guard but I kinda hope that she eventually earns a friend in Kenji. She really needs someone besides Rin while she's trapped by Sesshomaru. Does Sesshomaru know about youkai in the future? I would think that is proof that he and his sons do not conquer the world with their power of the kamis. Or is he planning to change the future that Kagome is from to something she won't even recognize? Please update again soon! :)
Yeah! You go Kagome! It's good she told Kenji how it is. I hope she stirs up the same courage to say that to Sesshomaru. As for Inuyasha, it's good that he's realizing he made the biggest mistake in his life in giving Kagome away to Sesshomaru like that. No wonder why Miroku, Sango and Kirara are keeping their distance from him, especially with that conniving bitch Kikyo in the picture. And yes, the baka has a lot of groveling to do if he ever gets the chance. Maybe a few hits with the Hiraikotsu will do him good after Naraku is defeated.
Man, I hope everyone finds out what an evil conniving bitch Kikyo truly is. Secrets have a way of coming out. I hope Sesshomaru doesn't come out of this unscathed either and that his role in this comes out as well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Kanna37 (Chapter 14) - Wed 18 Nov 2009
OHHHH! Score for Kagome! I loved that part where she told him Kenji where it's at! Excellent chapter.
Amber
Why have i never read this before? *smacks heaad onto table* this is amazing! i love it! thanks for the read.
Ja ne Aimee-chan.
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