Reviews for The Breeder by Texanlady

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autumngold (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

Will the well allow Kagome through while she is carrying a demon child?  I know, stupid question, but I have read so many stories where it wouldn't.  I can't wait to see how Kagome's plan works.  Does she even know where the well is from where she is being held?  It seems the worse thing Kagome could do was wander off without her powers.  She has to know they are expecting her to try to escape.  Especially after Sesshoumaru's warning.  Nice update!  I can't wait for Naraku to get killed and Inuyasha to find out the truth.  I just hope Sesshoumaru doesn't let Kikyo hold the jewel for even a second.  I wouldn't trust her at all.  Hope you post more soon!


REDWOLF (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

Kagome is just to nice and kind for all of them!


stars (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

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Dani (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

I'm so glad Kagome got Kenji thinking.  I wonder if he will start to treat her any different.  I am not worried about Kagome becoming complacent.  I love how you are writing this story and everything is playing out. Please don't change no matter what any of us say, even me. I love you!


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~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

Kenji is STUPID lol of course they r wrong i mean sesshomaru is RAPING kagome so yes yes that is very wrong...... I was 15 i was at a football game when one of my "supposedly" called best male friends forced me 2 give him oral pleasure (thats 1 of the reasons y i dont understand y i like this fic usually i cringe and cry when i think about rape cuz of my experience with it) however i keep reading and reading and i actually like this fic cuz i know that even tho its dark and gruesome that everything will be ok in the END i do love this fic really ..... tho on parts it brings back unpleasant memories.... i cant stop reading it n i dont want to because i know that kagome can survive just like i survived ....... SURVIVORS R STRONG WE CAN GO ON...... Its the motto my theropist gave me to use (well when i was still seeing that phsyco lol i dont n/e more ...... he called me a whore BAD right seeing as i was just raped wat a jack ass well it is safe to say he doesnt work as a theropist n/e longer lol) well i loved this chapter n the ending im glad that kagome has got Kenji thinking about what it truly is that sesshomaru is doing im glad that finally sum one understands that it is not an honor it is dishonor and that rape is HORROBLY WRONG!

 

I loved it!

 

Update again really soon

 

 


Ava 365 (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

I'm really intrigued. What will trigger Sesshomaru's change towards Kagome? Many ideas come to mind, and probably none of them will be what you have planned. At first I thought that at some point their children would protect Kagome. But now I think that perhaps something will happen to make, first, the youkai around her change the way they see her and then Sesshomaru change too. I even thought that she, at some point, with the aid of Inuyasha, escape and go back to the future. And Sesshomaru will have to wait to see her again 500 years, and during that time he will change the way he sees her. I really can't wait to see what happens. I hope she doesn't have to endure the physical pain Sesshomaru puts her through, the human mind can not endure it for too long before going crazy. Fortunately she heals fast but that only makes it worse for her mind.


Silverkitsune26 (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

Another wonderfull chapter. It's good to see that I'm not alone in my belives about right and wrong, life and death. Kagome really gave Kenji something to think about and yes, she is right, they are wrong.

Pleace keep ut the wonderful work work, and update soon.

Oh yeah.......... I think I found something wrong, but I'm not shure. In Inuyashas internal monolouge is it I should have just let him take her like that. ore should it be I shouldn't have just let him take her like that.


Ameire (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

Finally. I like the way this is turning with the whole Kenji thing at the end. Too bad it's impossible for a member of the gaurd to betray Sesshoumaru. ...hmm, unless, does t matter if they see it as a betrayal ro not, or is it if sesshoumaru sees it as a betrayal that they die? Oh well, even if that was going tohappen it would be a helluva long way from happening. Nice job by the way having Kagome put the bitch in his place.

Tahnks for the update~


Rowdys girl (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

Wow! Kagome's speech to Kenji was POWERFUL! That was strong, very strong. I still feel so sorry for Inuyasha, though, he's really screwed his life up and doesn't even realize how much. As for Kikyo, she's a boil on the ass of the world. And Sesshoumaru really isn't much better. Actually, the two of them are on par. To tell you the truth, you're doing such a good job of character development that I would like to bitch-slap a number of your characters! LOL.

I don't know how anyone could think that Kagome is becoming complacent, she's caught in a trap and, at the moment, has no recourse. She is learning what she can of her situation and trying to survive with her soul intact. At least she tells Sesshoumaru exactly how she feels. And every time he complains about her unhappiness fouling her scent I just want to tell him to Eat S--- and Die! You are doing such a good job of creating this believable world that I get really riled at some of the characters.

I found somethings for you to check out, typing a little fast, were we? Trying to get this done so you could post it? LOL. I found the following as I read, and believe me, it wasn't easy.

I think you meant distance here, and a comma after Inuyasha: "Despite still traveling with Inuyasha, they insisted on keeping their difference from their once friend and his new mate."

" I shouldn't have just let him take her like that."

Sesshoumaru’s banners blew freely in the wind sporting the Western Lord’s banners.

Holding his hand up to halt his troops

“The prophesy is ancient.  So old that few know of it.

All of this…all of the fancy clothes, the expensive jewelry, the servants, the palaces…none of it means anything to me.”

The only true difference between you and me, Kenji, is that I do not condone rape and torture.

I look forward to your next update, but don't rush it.

 

 

 


Neo-Crystal (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

Hm! You let him have it, kagome!! I'm hoping that Sesshy will be gone long enough for kaome to go thru her pregnancy and have bonding time with her baby, before Sesshy enters the scene. But more then likely your not going to do that. This story of yours makes me feel so many different emotons and most of the time my heart clenchs a few times during the chapter. s kagome gonna have any complacations with her first pregnancy? since she is carrying a full demon.

Your stories are awesome!! I can go back and read some of my favorites parts in any of your stories and I still always have my heart clench at certain parts, no matter how much I go back and read it. Keep writing!!


SakuraDreamHeart (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

Wow this story got really intense and I love the interaction between Kenji and Kagome. I think that's somehow providing some insight to them. Please continue <3 I really really love this story and i want to know what will happen to her : )

 

Thank you so much!


Running in Circles (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Nov 2009

OMG! I can't convey how much I love this story, or your other stories. I'm so happy for this new chapter, and I will try and review more often for support.


sesshys_jaded_samuri (Chapter 14) - Wed 18 Nov 2009
Very riveting chapter. I loved the way that Kagome told the guard that in her time that youkai were all but forgotten. I love the way that she gave him something to think about... and I am fairly sure that he WILL do some thinking. I am eager to read the next chapter.

autumngold (Chapter 14) - Wed 18 Nov 2009

I am so, so glad that finally someone listened to Kagome.  I hope he takes her words to heart and really thinks about what she said.  I know it won't change him, and he will still answer to Sesshoumaru, but maybe he can help Sesshoumaru see what he is doing is wrong.  Will he believe Kagome when she tells him she cares for her baby?  Won't her actions prove her words?  Maybe when he sees this he will start to believe in the other things she has told him.  Thank you so much for another wonderful update!  Inuyasha makes me sick, great time for him to think about what he Should have done.  Where was he when Kagome was being raped and brutalized?  He was right, he just gave her away.  I hope he never gets her back, he certainly doesn't deserve her!  Please don't let him believe Kagome asked for this!  I really hope he finds out how Sesshoumaru has used and abused her.  All of this because even though Inuyasha knew what a wonderful person she was, he didn't care enough about her to keep her safe.  I hate him!  He has no excuse for what he did!  Please post more soon!  I can't wait!


Sess Koibito (Chapter 14) - Wed 18 Nov 2009

Another great chapter! I know that Kagome won't be winning friends in the elite guard but I kinda hope that she eventually earns a friend in Kenji.  She really needs someone besides Rin while she's trapped by Sesshomaru.  Does Sesshomaru know about youkai in the future?  I would think that is proof that he and his sons do not conquer the world with their power of the kamis.  Or is he planning to change the future that Kagome is from to something she won't even recognize?  Please update again soon! :)


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 14) - Wed 18 Nov 2009

Yeah! You go Kagome! It's good she told Kenji how it is. I hope she stirs up the same courage to say that to Sesshomaru. As for Inuyasha, it's good that he's realizing he made the biggest mistake in his life in giving Kagome away to Sesshomaru like that. No wonder why Miroku, Sango and Kirara are keeping their distance from him, especially with that conniving bitch Kikyo in the picture. And yes, the baka has a lot of groveling to do if he ever gets the chance. Maybe a few hits with the Hiraikotsu will do him good after Naraku is defeated.

Man, I hope everyone finds out what an evil conniving bitch Kikyo truly is. Secrets have a way of coming out. I hope Sesshomaru doesn't come out of this unscathed either and that his role in this comes out as well. Can't wait for the next chapter.


Kanna37 (Chapter 14) - Wed 18 Nov 2009

OHHHH!  Score for Kagome!  I loved that part where she told him Kenji where it's at!  Excellent chapter.

Amber


Aimee Blue (Chapter 13) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

Why have i never read this before? *smacks heaad onto table* this is amazing! i love it! thanks for the read.

Ja ne Aimee-chan.


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