I agree with the few people here that say this is horrible. Mentioning Sesshomaru eventually falling in love with the woman he tortured and raped, and Kagome submitting and apologizing to *him* multiple times all throughout the story? Kagome supposedly being so powerful but can't figure out how to remove a collar? Kaede just leaving without actually helping her? "Beauty & the Beast" really did a number on a lot of you.

I know you said that Kagome wouldn't turn her children against their father & that they'd love both their parents, but I can't help but feel like they'd eventually find out what their father did to their mother all on their own & that it could create a confrontation between them.

Personally, I don't understand why Inuyasha can't find someone else to birth a pup. Sesshomaru is able to have sex with his concubines still despite being mated to Kagome, so surely Inuyasha can find someone else.

Hello,  I've read this story a couple of times n u r a very talented writer. 

Please update soon. I am a huge fan of Inuyasha n would very much like to read both Inuyasha's n Sesshoumaru's hard roads to redemption.  I really really want to see Sesshoumaru punished for his transgressions but also see him be redeemed.  Thank you for your wrk n hope u r well

Can't wait to see the whole Kagura and Kikyo dig themselves in! 

I hope your doing well and staying safe. 

great story and hope to read what happens next!

Is this story abandon? It's so good, that makes me so sad!

Painful and awesome at the same time! I think he needs to meet Kagome's mom even for a few minutes.

If that doesn't work a 3-4 month training for her and a duel between Sesshoumaru and Kagome needs to happen for her to beat the pain out

 and for him to finally understand her power and why the collar must come off.

I hope you are staying safe. 

As with any story, ever, involving a Hot, Ultimately Redeemable Redeemable Rapist, this is trash lololol

do you eer plan to update?

I KNOW I perhaps shouldn't but I couldn't help but laugh as a madman when he PEED on her. Damn he's a dog alright ???? Also i have to say that I love the darker stories and I'm happy to have stumbled across this story which comes close to pleasing my somewhat sadistic desires. I'm really happy with the promises of it getting worse and part of me genuinely wonders how there can be love at the end of this ride but oh well... it's those two we're talking about so I guess everything is possible. Wonderful story. I like it so far. It's sad how you have to keep explaining to some people how this is a dark story, but I guess some just don't understand the title ???????? Also this is my first review since joining this site a few weeks (I think) ago. I hope I'm doing it right, there's still much I don't understand about this site

Hello!

So I just read NYCSnowbird's latest post from your shared blog. It was quite a piece of news, and apparently you've received rather much hate for the way you treated her. And I have to admit I feel sorry for Snowbird. The situation you left her in was unfair, so if nothing else I'd at least apologize to her if I were you. As a reader and a fan of your "The Breeder" fanfic, I'm not angry at you despite the information bomb I got. We've never known each other and I've just been in for your story(ies), that's the simple, blatant truth.

Considering the genre of the story (The Breeder) I totally understand why you'd want to remain completely unknown to everyone, even to your beta who cleaned all your stories. I don't know when you lied to her the first time (which again I can see as an attempt to protect your identity,) but unfortunately it seems that the butterfly effect snowballed your whole fabricated indentity out of proportion, and it didn't land gracefully as the story eventually came crashing down years later. The reasons why you decided to continue the lies are your own, but looking back now maybe they should've ended earlier. Maybe you could've come clean yourself without revealing your real identity, and softened the blast of the truth.

I do not hate you or your stories even though you presumably lied about many, if not all the things considering your real, private life. There's usually a reason why someone lies about something, and since there is rarely an intention for a writer to get to know their audience more personally, I as a reader really don't mind the lies in this particular case. It is NYCSnowbird who was treated wrong, though. Very wrong, actually. Her blog posts made us understand that she's genuinely been extremely concerned about you, mourned for your supposed loss and tried to reach you countless times to keep your readers up to date if the stories you've written will ever be finished. She's been nothing but devoted to you and your work, and didn't deserve the treatment she got from your end.

Everyone makes mistakes, and personally I believe in second chances in most of the cases. I don't know if you'll ever read this message, but I just want to let you know that there's always a chance to set things right as long as the people disputing are alive. Your relationship with Snowbird may end, but at least the apologies can be conveyed. You can simply tell your readers, us, that you're no longer interested or capable of writing fanfictions and/or finishing your incomplete stories. You owe us nothing and we have no right to demand anything from you, since fanfics are written purely out of the enjoyment of writing. However, should you ever get back to writing and possibly finishing your incomplete fanfics ever again, I'm more than eager to hear the rest of the story! :)

I love love this story!!! I soo want to see if sesshomaru wins kagome's heart. Are you planning to do a part two? I mean it just ends with Kagura and Kikyo planning her death? Did you intentionally do or did you plan to write more? I hope to read more soon.

You know I would love to see this fanfic updated. After visiting your blog I know it will never be updated considering how you lied to your beta of many years and your avid readers. I feel shame now for reading fanfic of yours that brought me joy, for I grieved at your supposed pain to only learn it's all false. Well I hope karma gets you and know that this will be my last time of me reading any of your stuff from your fanfic to your published work, you evil lying conniving woman.

update?

update please!!!! i miss this story.

This unfinished story did not age well.

Sesshomaru and Kagome having sex with their fucking baby in the room is disgusting ???????? for these parents forcing their baby to be a witness to their sex and rape is sick and it is child abuse.

By today's standards of 2020 it is a fact that Sesshomaru and Kagome are both horrible parents. ????

Also, this story puts so much emphasis on Sesshomaru and Kagome having a bunch of full demon sons, which is ridiculous now that there is a new Inuyasha series called Hanyou no Yashahime: Sengoku Otogi Soushi and Sesshomaru has 2 daughters that are half demons. ???? 

Wow great story. Got me hooked!