Aaaaah... the possessiveness of the act is soooo much a Sesshomaru thing to do... you keep him so in character that it's thrilling. That... thing he did to her, I didn't really see it as something 'sexual', as us humans see it, but it was an act of power, and we all know the youkai is all about power and possession.
Nonetheless, it's heating up, isn't it? And I must admit, I was sooooo happy to see you'd updated that I did re-read the story in its entirety. I'm a faithful reader, and when I find a writing that I like as much as I like yours, I never quit reading, even if there are months in between chapters. (well, I have two stories in hiatus, so, I don't want to be the kettle calling the pot black... lol)
So, well, I look forward to your next update, but still, live your life in peace. Creativity is not something forced, it's something that comes when it has to, just like love.
Take care
Dewa mata
| wow, 22 chapters and i've only noticed this amazing story now! i read it straight through, barely taking a break because i was captivated with the story. you did such an amazing job, and the last chapter was... totally hott. o.o; i hope to see an update soon! keep up the great work!
OMG! That was so good! I mean i just stayed up three hours reading it schools gonna suck tomorrow but i don't care it was worth it! please don't take long to update!
Love the dominance.
| omgosh i love love love your story please update soon.....
void goddess (Chapter 22) - Sun 11 Jan 2009
| Hey, I remember this story! I love it! Hopefully you will have time to give us another update soon!
| DAMN ITs been so long that i completely forgot how the story line goes i remember a few bits and pieces here and there but i have to read it over again..but thank goodness its about time you updated sheesh..but its also understanding with school and everything and your energy being drained..but please CONTINUE SOON THIS TIME
LC Rose (Chapter 22) - Sun 11 Jan 2009
| YEAH! YOU FREAKIN' UPDATED!!! You have no idea how long I have been waiting for one and WHAT a chapter you gifted me with. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Please now give me more.
| Inuyasha goes from one extreme to the other. Kagome is so kind and wonderful or Kagome is a whore. The truth needed to come out. The girl's behavior reeks of innocence. How could anyone think she has been sneaking off for sex?
| O My Gosh No! How Could InuYasha Say Something So Terrible?!?! Sesshomaru Is Rightfully Angry! I Just Hope He Doesn't Kill Him! That Wouldn't B Very Good. I Wonder What Kagome Will Do 2. Will She Just Let Sesshomaru Beat Him Up, or Will She Intervene? He Said Some Really Nasty Things There....Hm. Anway, Please Update As Soon As U Can! Thanks!
| you were right, it might have been short but it was a good ending for the chapter...hrmm will sesshomaru actually kill inuyasha this time...ohhh i hope i find out when you continue...PLEASE
FleetingDream (Chapter 21) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| Short, yes but also amazingly sweet. This chapter was perfect, you got all the characteristic's right on key and I'm just so happy you didn't make Kagome get too self defendant because in all honestly she would feel bad and this chapter just made everything feel so real. Inuyasha blew a fuse, realistic. Sesshoumaru attacked Inuyasha for said insults, believable. Kagome felt remorse and wanted to talk things out, realisticly Kagome. *sigh* ahh this really did the heart good and you did all this in such a short amount of words, wonderful!!! :-D
anna (Chapter 21) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| Wow. Intense...Loving it.
Possessed (Chapter 20) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| It's o.k. that it's short, when it is this good! I'm glad you gave us this, I really enjoy your writing, your character portrayal, and your story. Thanks!
| I'm sooooooo happy!! In a heavenly bliss!! -dances her happy dance while giggling like a mad cow under the influence of catnip- I missed your talent so much!! This chapter does not bode well for our puppy-eared friend, but well... he had it coming ^_^° . Take care. Dewa mata
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