Amazing story! Update soon Please! I am waiting on the edge of my seat!

Only on chapter three, but I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your writing style. It's very clean and precise, almost clinical, but in a very good way. Granted, doesn't really fit Kagome, but I like your Kagome better I think.

I know, I haven't reviewed in awhile but I just got caught up on my reading. I'm without a computer so now I gotta read and review from my phone but anywho- I'm sooooooo in love with this story as you probably can tell by the amount of o's in dat so. I mean it's 4 in the morning and I'm still up reading, dats how good dis is. You are some talent my friend, dis story is very much deserving of dat award (congrats by da way). Your writing flows like poety and the characters are very much in character but as odd as dis may sound I atually feel sorry for Inuyasha. Shocking I know but I can't shake the feeling. I mean c'mon Kagome's acting like his opinion doesn't matter at all except when it came 2 her test. When Sesshoumaru first joined the group he kinda had da right to be mad and he acted well.... Inuyasha...ish and Sesshoumaru proclaiming her alpah like dat she should have known he'd act that way

Sorry 4 blabbing on like dat but I'm trying to summarize everything since I missed sum chapters but that Inuyasha thing is what stuck out da most 2 me and like I said dats very odd 4 me. It just seems like Kagome's being more of a mother dan a friend just telling him what 2 do like dat, he's still a part of da group and a very big part and should have input even with Sesshoumaru in da group now. Sorry again, I usually don't leave dese big comments but what da hey I needed 2 get everything out. But I'm waiting ever so patiencly 4 da next update, your story has me on edge and I can't wait 'till da cats outta da bag with detective Shippo on da case lol. Well I'm off 2 bed and I am sorry 4 my rant being so long but you are so welcome and have my 100% support 4 dis amazing story =) it is amoung my favorites, keep up da good work! G'nite

Sorry 4 blabbing on like dat and dis but I'm trying to summarize everything since I missed sum chapters but that Inuyasha thing is what stuck out da most 2 me and like I said dats very odd 4 me. It just seems like Kagome's being more of a mother dan a friend just telling him what 2 do like dat, he's still a part of da group and a very big part and should have input even with Sesshoumaru in da group now. Sorry again, I usually don't leave dese big comments but what da hey I needed 2 get everything out. But I'm waiting ever so patiencly 4 da next update, your story has me on edge and I can't wait 'till da cats outta da bag with detective Shippo on da case lol. Well I'm off 2 bed and I am sorry 4 my rant being so long but you are so welcome and have my 100% support 4 dis amazing story =) it is amoung my favorites, keep up da good work! G'nite

You're welcome, the most important being that your fic is worth all the praises it got (does this sentence make sense? Anyway... -_-) Cute chapter. But I always thought Shippo was a smart kid. He's a fox after all, and even if he's still small, I assume he's like 80 years old or so (I don't remember where I had this information though...) Keep on the good work! Dewa mata

You are right, that was short. However, it was nice to receive Shippo's perspective. He is one of my favorite characters and I think he is one of the smartest.

i cant even explain to you how much i love this story, i feel as if u have bestowed upon us a wounderful literary gift. i have already bookmarked this masterpeice and will be checking ragulerly for updates please continue ill be waiting with baited breath

i cant even explain to you how much i love this story, i feel as if u have bestowed upon us a wounderful literary gift. i have already bookmarked this masterpeice and will be checking ragulerly for updates please continue ill be waiting with baited breath

Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June08/bestromancefiction3rd1.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association

Kyeeeeee! Shippo is such a cute little fudger. Seriously. Whenever I see him in the anime I just want to pick him up and squeeze him until he pops. You know? That feeling you get when you see a soft cuddly kitten and you just want to hug it ..VERY HARD. *Spasm*

Let me tell you, this whole virginal thing reminds me of myself In more ways than one i am i like Kagome I know i know random but let met tell you this story Guy: Janelle, come give me a hug bye (I normally dont touch people) Me:Kay I literally reached around and gave the dude a one arm pat pat... then he said Janelle two arms, so i gave him a two arm pat pat Random, but comming from a girl who doesn't get any action (IM not uglu, lol. Here's my myspace www.myspace.com/lilcous) i thought i would put some input But, i love your story!

Hey, he supported her! This is good... Love the whole Shippou "Great Fox Detective". He is so cute!

First of all, this title is super cute "Shippou the Great Fox Dectective" ^_^ Love it! Even though the chapter was short, it was awesome; you have a knack for keeping my short attention span amused :) Congrats on your FA nomination :wink: You definitely deserve it! [p.s. I really don't post *that* much...I've been quite lazy recently ;)] Great job!

Thanks for the answer! I can't believe that Sesshomaru did that! If I had been Kagome, I might have keeled over and died..

LOL, that was probably the last thing Kagome was expecting him to do. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Kagome is soooo virginal. Sesshoumaru must have monumental control. The last chapter was certainly in character for Kagome. I like "watching" the interactions of the group as time progresses. Well written.

Just a quick clarifaction: Sesshomaru does care for Kagome, right? He loves her? It sort of sounds like he is using her for physical pleasure only...but then, he was worried...

i hate cliffhangers with a passion!!!!!!!!!!!!

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