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hikari hime (Chapter 13) - Fri 06 Jun 2008
Ah, poor Sango. That must have been a shock lol. Anyway, if she was close enough to see them, let alone to hear them... Then I find hard to believe Sesshoumaru didn't know she had been there. Or was she upwind? Was he too... distracted? lol. As always, very good job. I like your story very much. ^_^ Dewa mata

Wolfye P (Chapter 13) - Thu 05 Jun 2008
woohoo!! sango's a voyeaur! miroku would be so proud.... lol but i like how u complimented her character by her turning away so abruptly the second they started kissing. it's so... ionno, Sango-ish? i'm suprised u didnt make her turn beet red. can't wait for the next one!

blair (Chapter 11) - Tue 03 Jun 2008
ahhhhhh i cant wait :)

RadioActiveOrange (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Jun 2008
:O That made me all weepy-faced. I love how you made Rin yell back! I mean WOW I have never seen that in a fanfic before unless its AU and Rin is an adult. Neat-o! This is one of my favs for sure, LL.

Lizzie (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Jun 2008
*sobs, wipes eyes* Beautiful!!

hikari hime (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Jun 2008
Awwwwwwww!! after this very intelligent review, I will leave you to your writing... ahem... dewa mata

Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Jun 2008
Thanks for bringing this story over here...I"m so glad you're continuing it. This is one of those stories I was feening for...

hikari hime (Chapter 11) - Mon 02 Jun 2008
You got my eyes slightly moistered there. This story is really good and captivating, the emotions are reaching me like I was actually whitnessing the interactions. Keep on the good work, I look forward to more!!! (poor Rin... And poor Sess. I hope he'll find peace.)

iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 11) - Mon 02 Jun 2008
Awesome awesome awesome...AWESOME! I can't wait til your next chapter, you're keeping me at the edge of my seat!

ElegantPaws (Chapter 1) - Sat 31 May 2008
Kagome is between the proverbial rock and a hard place. Cannot wait for more.

Lizzie (Chapter 9) - Fri 30 May 2008
Wow. I mean...wow. So now she's stuck between two brothers who don't want her. Will she go home and mope? Will Inuyasha forgiver her and she forgets Sesshomaru? Will he forgive her and she DOESN'T forget Sesshomaru? Does Sess forgive her after she explains?! Does she explain?! And how on earth do they get the holes in Swiss cheese?! Will my questions ever be answered?!? (Hopefull the first few will, when you post the next chapter, hint-hint...) I think I'll go cry now...

FleetingDream (Chapter 1) - Thu 29 May 2008
Wow that really made me feel sad, but it was very well written and it drew out the emotions well. Keep it going, I really want to know what Sesshoumaru was thinking and what Inuyasha was thinking while Kagome was away.

chevonne (Chapter 9) - Thu 29 May 2008
i thought this was funny but all i have read so far in angst. this is a good story and do look forward to reading more

swasdiva (Chapter 8) - Thu 22 May 2008
Amazing insight into Sesshoumaru's character in this chapter, but it breaks my heart how messed up his perception is! I figured Kagome's reluctance stemmed not from her using Sesshoumaru in Inuyasha's place, but more that she felt like she was betraying Inuyasha for truly falling for Sesshoumaru. Dysfunction, indeed. It's never easy for these kids, is it? Another great chapter.

FleetingDream (Chapter 8) - Thu 22 May 2008
Another good chapter, please keep it up. I don't know who I pity more, Kagome for her mixed feelings and for how she is now being ignored by Sesshoumar or Sesshoumaru himself simply for how he thinks and what he's been though hmmm....much to think about

Lady Nefertiti (Chapter 8) - Thu 22 May 2008
hey- thanks for updating soon. I love this fic and I hope that Sesshomaru realizes that Kagome's not so bad after all and that he doesn't leave her 'for the dead' so to speak. take care and update soon! -Lady Nefertiti.

AndesCat (Chapter 6) - Wed 21 May 2008
Aww poor Kagome... I wonder what's gunna happen now if she does return to the group and what would the others think of her stay. :P Really enjoy reading this, good jobs so far. Though when scolding kagome he seemed a little OOC to me

FleetingDream (Chapter 7) - Wed 21 May 2008
I just read your entire story and I must say I'm impressed but you cannot just leave it at that, this is far too good so write like the wind bulls-eye lol

Wolfye P (Chapter 7) - Wed 21 May 2008
aww dammit! would u be posting what was going on thru Sesshy's head too? cus i'd REALLY like to know... /evil grin. damn cliffhangers... >_^ love the work!!!

hikari hime (Chapter 6) - Tue 20 May 2008
I really like how this story is turning. Your flow is good, as always, and I enjoy the way you depicture emotions. The characters are not OOC, even if Sess is looking a bit... How to say? Amiss with his own emotions. Well, I think it is quite easy to know why he could be a bit puzzled about his own feelings. He seems to have missed affection too. He needs a good Miko hug. (another one I mean lol) ^_^ Keep the good work ;) dewa mata

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