Nice one! Then you cut us off without finding out Sess' reaction. Thank you for such a wonderful chapter. This story has definitely been missed!
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okay now that i got that out! i'm so excited about this update! and i totally understand real life being a pain! this is rather awesomesauce! and i cant help but be all OMFG UPDATE MORE!!!*wiggles c0okies at you* b/c i want to know what Sess is going to say, if he'll find out about her dreams, if kagome will finally be able to open herself up to him more! i cant wait!
REDWOLF (Chapter 26) - Tue 29 Mar 2011
Oh,I wish you could of gave us Sesshomaru's sxpression. Nevertheless, I will watch and wait for your next great chapter.
Nilee1 (Chapter 26) - Tue 29 Mar 2011
Wow, this was well worth the wait. I can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's reaction.
Gah! That is an evil cliffy!!! =( Please update soon.....
Have a great week!
~~Mizuko~~
P.S. I hope your job serch goes well!
Mlmonty (Chapter 25) - Sat 26 Mar 2011
I love the way this story is progressing. Kagome frustrates me at times but you've written it in a way that explians WHY she does/feels the things she does. Wonderful job.
Alex (Chapter 13) - Tue 08 Mar 2011
This is such a wonderful story! You do a great job of breezing over the unimportant scenes that might bog down the pace of the story (like Sesshoumaru buying clothes the second time and classes with him and Kagome) and get right back into the plot. :) One thing that intrigued me about chapter 12- stuck again....
There's the "scene" where Kagome is telling her mom that Sesshou doesn't need a bento anymore. She then walks to the (living room?) and asks Souta where he is and Souta says he's outside. Kagome then finds Sesshou outside doing various kata. How long is the chain at this point in time? Last I heard it mentioned it was the length of handcuffs. How could Sesshou have traveled that far from Kagome? LOL
Other than that I'm greatly enjoying the tale you are weaving!
Eiari (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Feb 2011
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
Congratulations, Chain of Love has won second place best romance for the 4th Quarter 2010 at Dokuga. You can find your winner banner here: http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/13/16/3033.png Congrats again and keep up the great work!
Hairann (Chapter 23) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
Congratulations, Chain of Love has won first place best lemon scene for the 4th Quarter 2010 at Dokuga. You can find your winner banner here: http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/13/12/3034.png Congrats again and keep up the great work!
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Feb 2011
Congratulations, Chain of Love has won second place best canon for the 4th Quarter 2010 at Dokuga. You can find your winner banner here: http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/13/6/3151.png Congrats again and keep up the great work!
It seems like Sango is the only tachi member that walks in on scenes that she should not be walking in on. Forgive me if I do not make much sense, I am sick and my mind is fuzzy from the cold medicine. lol
I love this story. I pulls me in, and I can't wait for the next chapter. You have a great plot, and I think that you have made a lot of character development within this story, especially within Kagome and Sesshomaru. which was probably your intent. Excuse me for stating the obvios but as I have said, it is the medicine's fault. :)
You are a great writer, and your style is truly unique and beautiful.
Autumn (Chapter 25) - Mon 14 Feb 2011
Great chapter! I wish she wouldn't let the guilt over Inuyasha eat her and instead pay more attention to Sesshomaru.
I forgot to include my opinion on Miroku's advice. WRONG! I thought he was so knowledgeable in the love department. I was actually shocked at his advice. Ok, the part about talking with Sesshoumaru was correct but not the other. Any one with common sense knows that she's yearning physically and mentally for sex with her mate! She's rather naive in this department and does not understand what her body is trying to tell her. I thought surely to goodness, Miroku would understand this even if he was too embarrased to say so.
Will someone slap Kagome up the side of her head! She has no reason whatsoever to feel any guilt over Inuyasha. All throughout the journey, he was constantly betraying her over Kikyo, even before she was brought back. He's not truly an adult yet and it shows in his actions and words. She needs to really take a good look at what she has, then maybe she'll finish growing up herself and hold onto Sesshoumaru with every emotional fiber in her body. With the way he feels about her, he might just break down and embrace her in front of everyone after all. I'm just sad and frustrated that she's too focused on Inuyasha instead of Sesshoumaru.
Loveyaa (Chapter 25) - Wed 09 Feb 2011
At least there has been a return to some sembalance of normal or what used to be. I llike that you have it so that everybody isn't just jumping into everybodies arms and spouting love for the other. Although poor Kagome. She's kinda getting it from all sides, all at once as well. I wonder how this will change her relationship with Sesshoumaru and with the others. I can't wait to see what happens next though :)
Wonderful new chapter! I love the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. I was pleasantly surprised with Sango's involvement in this chapter. Love love love it!
Naomi (Chapter 25) - Tue 08 Feb 2011
Awww....so sweet~!
I'm so happy that Sango is finally accepting Sesshomaru.
Hehe, Miroku is so funny >.> the perv.
I'm glad that the tension between Kikyo and Kagome has been mostly resolved. Sometimes other stories tend to turn her into a real ***** and although it makes sense, it's really overdone.
By the way, there was a line where Sango saw Sesshomaru kiss Kagome on the brow and you wrote, "the scene that she had seen".
I just thought that maybe the two words, since they have the same sound, seen could have been replaced with 'witnessed' or something to get rid of the repetitiveness.
Otherwise I though it was done very well!
<3
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