This chapter was awesome!! I was like, omg she updated! So I reading, thinking things like, 'Dang, he turned her down just like that! I can't believe her friend! If I sat behind him and flicked his hair, I'd probably attack! Aw, he got a hug! Lalalala, they're going to the Feudal Era and I wonder what's going to happen next? and then my next thought was NO PORTAL!!! Aw, that's just wrong. How are they going to get home? Unless they're going to be stuck in the futur forever!! I can't wait till your next update so i can see what happens next! :D
(Chapter 12) - Sun 15 Nov 2009
Oh bloody great chapter, you did a wonderful job with how you did Sesshoumaru's time in the future... really came across as believable with how things went.
Love the ending and can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Wispr
No portal? he he that mean sess is going to have to put up with even more agressive flirting from the girls in Kagome's era, i do beleive that if he snaps we're all dead! :3 Thanks for the read!
Sala (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Yay! Great chapter. Although it was very sudden, I am happy that Sesshoumaru has his arm back. It will make life much easier on the two of them, if he has a free arm to use while his other is chained.
stars (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
please updata
this was totally amusing! :3 i wonder what he'll learn while all this is happening. btw i was thrown off a bit, i ususally read this on FF but didnt see the update. :p lovely update it was btw!
(Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Awesome... you really did a fantastic job with how you wrote Sesshoumaru in the future... also congrats on the namination.
Wispr
(Chapter 10) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
YES... YES they're going to the blooming future... with how great your writing been I know it's going to be when heck of an adventure!
Wispr
(Chapter 9) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Oh you are very evil... love the new length, also wondering how are they going to handle bathroom moments? (EG)
Also wondering if Kagome is going to try to go home anytime soon, I can see her think that she will dissappear leaving the chain empty.
Wispr
(Chapter 8) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
I like your character Kenichirou, interesting and a nice change of pace from Sesshoumaru. So looking forward to the confrontation in Edo!
Wispr
(Chapter 7) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Oh I'm so looking forward to Kagome explaining to Inuyasha what is up. I like how Sesshoumaru is slowly starting to notice good qualities in Kagome, also that she is doing the same of him. Very nice buildup.
Wispr
(Chapter 6) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
I really like how you are doing their time together and the little slips that show's they're starting to not quite fall for one another but yet but are beginning to grow closer.
Love both the wake up hair petting scene... laughed out loud reading that and great work on the fight scene at the end.
Wispr
(Chapter 5) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
Oh bloody hell you have a wonderful knack of capturing the humor in a scene. Also love how you wrote the throan room... bloody funny.
Wispr
(Chapter 4) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
Awesome chapter and simply love how those two are interacting.
Wispr
(Chapter 3) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
I was wondering myself about her changing her clothing, again nice work with the personalities... keeping everyone very well within canon. I also like how you haven't made Inuyasha to be a villain or just plain mean to Kagome. Like so many Kagome/Sesshoumaru pairing stories have done.
Wispr
autumngold (Chapter 11) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
I'm so glad that you were able to update! What a fun chapter showing Sesshoumaru in the future. I have a feeling that Kagome is going to regret saying that Sesshoumaru is her cousin. Now all of her girlfriends, and every other girl in the school is going to be hitting on him. Poor Sesshoumaru! Nice chapter! I can't wait for your school work to be done so you can post another! This is such a great story!
(Chapter 2) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
Love how you are writing Sesshoumaru and Kagome actions and thoughts to the situation. Great work with how you did Rin.
Wispr
fluffysesshomarutail (Chapter 11) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
Alright, question.
It amuses me to think about it, and I do believe that most wouldn't, but how do they get their shirts on? If the chain is around their wrists... I don't know. It just confused me, is all.
Love,
Fluffy
(Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
Oh love how you wrote the Matchmaker and also like hte chain idea. Great work also on describing the people and scenes within your story.
Wispr
Adriana (Chapter 10) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
Inuyasha is such a jerk sometims. (all the time really..) And Sesshoumaru is starting to like Kagome, isn't he?? :)
Update really soon after all your essays and othe acidemic writing stuff is done! Please?
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