wooow.. Go Kags! use that sword! woot! ^_^ well, they are in a pickle. lmao. At least they are not killing eachother, or well, harming eachother... WOO! cant wait until next chapter!
Riku~
Sokai (Chapter 5) - Sun 26 Jul 2009
no dont stop there i want to read more!! no not just want need!!!
Eru (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Jul 2009
More Please.
amanda (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jul 2009
I'm in love with this story!<3
I way hope that you update soon!
bayouhime85 (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jul 2009
hi there i love this story...in fact so much so that this is my very first review!!! anywayz i just wanted to give a bit of input on the "this Sesshoumaru" business. It is the way anyone of royal or exceptionally high status refer to themselves. I have seen it in a few different circumstances and when i googled it that is what it told me lol(yay for Wiki). I hope that kinda helps give an understanding...and please please update soon, cuz this totally rocks!!!! i love the concept!
Yamiyo (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jul 2009
no the "I, sesshoumaru" is a fan thing the "this sesshomaru" is the right translation. its like how Rin talks in the manga she only say "Rin's name is Rin" kinda stuff sometime in the anime too, yet in fandom she either uses it all the time or none of it.
Sala (Chapter 4) - Fri 10 Jul 2009
I can hardly wait for the next installment!
Paradisis (Chapter 4) - Wed 08 Jul 2009
poor kagome! Update soon!
JA NE!
chevonne knowles (Chapter 4) - Tue 07 Jul 2009
this is getting really good.
I can't wait for your next update.
loveless (Chapter 4) - Tue 07 Jul 2009
This is interesting. I wonder what will happen when they meet up with Sesshomaru's mother. I can't wait for more. Please update soon.
Paradisis (Chapter 3) - Mon 06 Jul 2009
Lmao! So- how long is the chain? And Sesshomaru still has only one arm, how will he fight?! Update soon!
JA NE!
I really like how you made it so Kags clothes go right through the chain, it was something i was thinking about when Inu went to get some more supplies for her. I'm also assuming because their heading back towards the west, and the kitsune matchmaker visited Sess's mother after she changed them, that we'll be seeing her soon. Can't wait to see how that turns out and if his mother tells him the truth about the chain!
Thank you for the update as i truly enjoyed this chapter, and look forward to the next one!!
I've always hated that part of the anime that took his arm and never gave it back to him until the manga. So whenever I read a story where he has only one arm, I ignore it and imagine him with two. Otherwise, I'm enjoying this cute story. That was a neat idea of the chain being invisible to clothing.
nagirouge (Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Jun 2009
ur fic is refreshing! u write very well and d plot, though not new, is coming out w/much creativity. everyone is in character-
i'm juz a lil disappointed w/rins; i don't know if its juz me but according 2 both d anime & d manga, rin has always struck me as an extremely intelligent lil human girl & i've never heard her refer 2 herself in d 3rd person, shes very mature for her yound age yet she does have bouts of normal child behavior like her love of flowers, running w/arms spread out as if flyin, etc. i don't understand why a lot of writers tend 2 write her in this way.
i can't wait til ur story progresses n c d interaction btween both sess & kag & i'm looking 4ward 2 uncomfortable moments btween them after noticing each others attributes! update soon!
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Jun 2009
One question if clothes can pass thru the chain can other objects pass thru it as well??
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Jun 2009
That is too funny! I was wondering how she was going to get dressed. This is a great story. Keep it up please.
MLMonty (Chapter 2) - Sat 27 Jun 2009
I wouldn't worry about the whole chain thing being used before. It's been used several times in the Sess/Kag fandom and many times in other fandoms like Granger/Snape. It's a well written story with your own take on it and I look forward to more updates!
this story is great! ^^
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
please, update as soon as possible!!!!
Shokuyume (Chapter 2) - Wed 24 Jun 2009
Lmao! Poor Sesshomaru...! But Kagome isn't that bad. Update soon!
JA NE!
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