Kagome needs to stop being so nice. It's obvious that Eri doesn't care about her at all, so Kagome should stop hanging out with her. Especially after the scene with the umbrella, that was just rude of both Eri and Sesshoumaru. Thank you for the update! I hope they can go back to the past soon. If only to get away from stupid Eri! Thank you for the new chapter!
Hello! I just found this fic today,and i read all of the chapters in around 4 hours, bathroom breaks and food. I found it by going to the Forums and then tosearching for a fic.... I liked what i read, so i read yours tory. It reminds me,slightly, of Sunset Miko's She who the prohpecy foretold, what with the way their relationship progressed greatly in her time. It is very different though too, in the best of ways! I like your fic much more actually. In hers sesshoumaru acted much differently, more modern. While in your story sesshoumaru acted modern, he also retained his feudal era self and thought pattern. And i believe i mighthaveread another story with a chain in it....in the listed oneshot story called Trapped, by sesshou_lover. Although, it isn't really a chain, but a strand of hair. Your chain is waay cooler though. This hair was pure evil in my book, while your chain is amusing and delightfully cunning, and also very nice to them, when it counts, this one was cruel.
Anyways, im rambling.... I really enjoyed reading your fic, and i hope another chapter is added soon! Fun note, you updated your story on my birthday! Thats right, my birthday was on the 15th! lol, wish i had checked the site on it, then i could have read this sooner! Well, good luck with both your fanfiction (this one preferably) and your outside life! Mine is slightly sucky, hope yours is better!
~Kira
MLMonty (Chapter 12) - Mon 16 Nov 2009
*hugs author and pets head* THANK YOU THANK YOU! You didn't go on and on about school and clothes, ect. Such a good author! I've unfortunatly seen several GOOD fics turn worthless when the couple go to the modern era. You added only enough to depict the frustrations they were both exeriencing without drowing us in mindless worthless dribble. You also touched on the slowly changing relationship between them. Well done!
I loved the ending of this chapter and look forward to seeing where you're going with it.
Dani (Chapter 12) - Sun 15 Nov 2009
What a wonderful chapter! I just knew the next one was up when I hit the bottom of the page. So much to my disappointment I am eagerly awaiting your next update. Love it!
Sala (Chapter 12) - Sun 15 Nov 2009
Oh My Goodness. You did not just strand them in the present! How will Kagome survive Sesshoumaru's rabid fangirls?
autumngold (Chapter 12) - Sun 15 Nov 2009
This is not good, this is not good at all. I can't believe that Sesshoumaru will be stuck with all of his fangirls! No one should blame him if he has to kill one or two of them, starting with Kagome's "friend" Eri of course. Poor Kagome. I can't believe what she is going to have to go through with him there. So many girls are going to hate her or try to use her because of Sesshoumaru. Hopefully they will be able to find a way to go back soon!
lmao. my g0odness p0or them. i wonder if they just mate and get it over with will it let them back through. >:3 i cant wait to see!
Uh oh. The portal is gone. Sesshoumaru and Kagome are trapped in the future. What's our poor daiyoukai to do!? Run from the screaming fangirls and attend school. XD But seriously, this is bad. The well doesn't work and now they can't get back. What's going to happen to the western lands in his absence?! But, I guess this could be a bonding experience. I can't wait to read more. I really like this story. Keep up the good work! ^^
- CA
Well, now theres a problem. Love this chapter and how Sessh and Kags seem to be connecting. Very nice :)
Oh No! Are they stuck in the future? With Sesshomaru's fangirls?!?!? How horrible!
Why would the chain trap them in the future? Doesn't Sesshomaru need to be in the past to mate and produce his 'much needed' heir? Please update again soon!
This chapter was awesome!! I was like, omg she updated! So I reading, thinking things like, 'Dang, he turned her down just like that! I can't believe her friend! If I sat behind him and flicked his hair, I'd probably attack! Aw, he got a hug! Lalalala, they're going to the Feudal Era and I wonder what's going to happen next? and then my next thought was NO PORTAL!!! Aw, that's just wrong. How are they going to get home? Unless they're going to be stuck in the futur forever!! I can't wait till your next update so i can see what happens next! :D
(Chapter 12) - Sun 15 Nov 2009
Oh bloody great chapter, you did a wonderful job with how you did Sesshoumaru's time in the future... really came across as believable with how things went.
Love the ending and can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Wispr
No portal? he he that mean sess is going to have to put up with even more agressive flirting from the girls in Kagome's era, i do beleive that if he snaps we're all dead! :3 Thanks for the read!
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