Good overall, you do seem to have a habit of using on when in would be a better choice though.
autumngold (Chapter 9) - Sat 19 Sep 2009
I feel so bad for Sesshoumaru. I don't understand how he will even be able to fight when there is only 6 inches between him and Kagome. Why don't they realize that if saying bad things about each other makes the chain shrink, maybe saying and feeling good things about the other will make the length longer? Love the update! Can't wait to read more!
Lilith (Chapter 9) - Sat 19 Sep 2009
:3 6 inches? wow. that's... everrryyy evil. ^-^ i likes it. lol
and *rubs back of head* i forgot that Sesshy only had one arm in this... Oh the irony... lol
Yay, I'm glad you posted this here, too!
I so enjoyed this chapter. I am soooo loving this story. Please, please continue writing. LOL..have to say that if as much I already love Sesshoumaru, Kenichirou is quickly catching up. I love this character. Cannot wait to read more.
About the Chained to You thing if you didn't know of or read the other fic before coming up with your idea I wouldn't worry about it. There's a lot of overlap in the fanfic world & 2 or several people will all get a similar idea at different times & more often than not they get accused of plagiarism even when it's not. Since you're not copying the other fic in whole or in part I wouldn't worry about contacting the other author, especially if she hasn't updated anything in several years, she's probably gone just like so many other authors.
I've made it up to chapter 5 already & am really enjoying it although you do have some odd turns of phrase here & there & extra words in your sentences all over the place.
stars (Chapter 8) - Sat 29 Aug 2009
please updata sooner
awesome chapter update as soon as you can :)
stars (Chapter 7) - Sat 08 Aug 2009
please upadata
YAY! I LOVE IT! and your own characters. >.< Can't wait to read more. *now sleeps again*
*laughing with tears in her eyes* Still reading but I loved kagome doomed ranting.
"But we're doomed! Doomed I say!"
lol. Well back to it. XD So addictive.
I had to stop here...since I had to sleep BUt I wanted to say that so far I LOVE your fic. Can't wait ot read the rest! :D
Adriana (Chapter 7) - Thu 06 Aug 2009
I like the prince of the east. :) he's funny. update soon
I absolutely loved the interaction between Kagome and Kenichirou. I almost choked on what I was drinking, I was laughing so hard. I really enjoyed this chapter. :)
wow!!
That was fantastic!! I am loving every moment and although I am new to your story, I am egerly awaiting the next chapter!!
Keep on keepin on and I hope to see much more of this charming story in the near future.
TPIDO
Awesome story :) i love it :) i can't wait to see what happens and how it all pans out :) update when you can :) really good story :)
I am so loving this story. Please, please hurry with the next installment. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I am really enjoying it. I laughed my way through the entire thing. I love the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. LOVE IT! Please let me know once you have updated it. I would really, really appreciate it.
Sala (Chapter 6) - Fri 31 Jul 2009
Although the matchmaker said it would take a long time for Sesshoumaru and Kagome to realize their true feelings, I hope that it won't take them *too* long. :) This fanfic is excellent and I can hardly wait for the next installment.
loveless (Chapter 6) - Fri 31 Jul 2009
Wow! I love what you are doing with this story. It is so entertaining. Please update soon. I NEED more, More, MORE.
Sokai (Chapter 6) - Thu 30 Jul 2009
Silent, but Angry. I think that Sesshomaru secretly apprecaites what Kagome did
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