This is depressing. He actually killed her. I dont think I ever hated Sessh in any fiction before. He has no honor at all here. I hope you dont want to make kagome love him. It would be extreemly ooc.

But its a well written story. It makes us really feel :D

bravo b ravo    I like  this  story    it  is  bravolish

update soon please

What a magnificent story!!!!, I just found your fantastic story today and I think it's so GREAT!!! I love how you write the main characters specially Sesshomaru. You're an awesome writer. Keep the marvelous job. ;)

Not that anyone invited my nosey comennts here but...

I really like hte point of view in the story(where, in his head, Sesshoumaru thinks that's the right way to get her love) and the crash it makes with Kagome's morals. Poor her. Maybe a bit of a softer treatment? maybe she can stop talking to him completely -just mind-escape him or something so to...hurt him?

mah...i'm not good with ideas. I think you're doing a great job at this. Well, you wanted to go on this story faster, ne? that's a chance. you can just put it like, it's been some weeks and he  still is loooking for a way to do that; meanwhile KAgome can have a bit of a brake and...a friend? somene? Sessh would just get more jelous and 'she's mine' over anyone who gets near her so that would be a way to push his buttons.

I liked the phrase you used of 'Begin the madness' -i know it was long ago but not-accounted readers couldnt review before so  i'm just talking all out.

Nice to read a not-love storie...it's just creepy and mid-depresing but it puts things on angle..Now i'm just rambling so I better just post this and get done.

OMG he's turning into a psycho! So much so he actually killed her because he lost it, but at the same time if he just told her why he wants her by his side she might loosen up around him. Always forcing her aint gonna get him anywhere, if anything it ill just keep pushing her away!

I think its good Sess is going to talk to the elders, he needs to talk to someone before he really does hurt her and not even Tenseiga will help. But i did love the seven deadly sins, and i thought the way you wrote gluttony and sloth was well done, i agree it would be hard to picture a lazy, always stuffing his face 'killing perfection' LOL!

The talk with the elders could go either good and they have all this advice and enchantments to help him with keeping Kagome, or it could go bad and they start saying negative things about him taking Kagome as a mate and all that other stuff. Then again it could also be another scenario altogether, but either way i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

Hummm... I think the elders' should be furious that he took a human mate, even though she is a Miko. Obviously he wont listen to them... Mayba Rin drops a hint, or Kaede? Someone he would normally NEVER go to... Love it so far! ^_^

I love the length of the chapter...I think you kept Sess in character and you wrote his POV very well.  Please update soon.

I personally enjoyed this chapter so much. It gave us that extra side of sessh that we normally don't understand. You did a great job with it! I think the elders could go one of two ways. One being tieing her life to his where she will never be able to leave him or kill the hanyou...lol Till next time :)

Another powerfully written, compelling chapter.  I loved the ideas of the deadly sins.  What will the elders tell Sesshomaru?  You think of things I could never come up with.  Would they fear the offspring of a being like Kagome and a powerful demon like Sesshomaru?  Would this cause them to take some kind of action to stop him from giving her a child?  I eagerly await the answer...

oh poor kagome and inuyasha...

usually I'm a sess kag fan but in this case I have to say I am really rooting for inuyasha and kag's love to prevail; it's so beautiful and pure - the fact that she is willing to sacrifice so much just to try to save him. (I know the likelihood of that happening on this site is so very low, it's near zero, but yet I feel the need to write my support here nonetheless).  Maybe it's b/c the idea of kag falling in love w/ sess who is essentially her rapist is so disturbing to me, but I think it's even more the fact that I can't forget inuyasha in limbo all alone and stuck to a tree again...

I'm sooo glad your mind didn't go blank on the "bath room" scene. I looove it *Shiver* oh yes, another brilliant job. I have a feeling that in the next chapter your going to fast forward a couple months on us... Just because, well its Fluffy. Uber dominate thing that he is, it's going to take awhile to understand our little ol' kagome. Hmm... now I'm really curious! If you ever need help or a sharp stab of a knife for motivation give me a yell. Till next time :)

Beside the few Gender mishaps, saying "Kagome narrowed his eyes", It was an amazing read.   Poor little Kagome!   Sesshomaru and Kaogme just have a <i> minor</i> miscomunication.  I know there is love in Kagomes heart for Sesshomaru, it maybe be accross the broder to Hatred, but its there.   

Good luck

Another great chapter, and thanks for the authors note, I admit as you say it is getting frustrating because they seem to be going round in circles, but ill be patient and bare with ya!!

I'm guilty of not leaving reviews in every chapter.  I hope Sess will try to understand her soon...I love the premise of this story.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.