Wow, I love the story! Please continue to write more ^^

This was such a good chapter!I can't wait to read more!=^.^=

OMG! I knew he was holding back! Oh, poor Kags, the poor baby! Sess should have known she was coming, he is suppossed to be like all powerful. WTF! Arghhh, GOD! I am kind of done with my rant. Please don't wait too long to update. I am begging you, please!

love your stories!!! this one is soo different and awesome!! its a such a different twist on the "love", SESS KAG BATTLE!!! BATTLE i say BATTLE!!

Finally! The suspence from chapter 2 is almost over. I have got to know what will happen. On how this story is going so far I really dont want Sesshomaru and Kagome to be together because on how he is treating her, unless Sesshomaru sacrifices something BIG to prove himself to her. Please update soon.

I love it! I should have the next chapter edited and back to you tonight or tomorrow :) Keep up the great work. This story is wonderful

It is said that the key to well-written modern verse is in the phrasing. One must know when to end a line and begin a new one. I suppose this applies to chapter stories as well. Having said as much, I must say that you have 'phrased' this chapter well and ended with the required level of suspense. Good work!

breathtakingly beautiful n' sad. well-done

I love it...I'm glad that they're somewhat recognizing their feelings. Poor Sessh, the things he's willing to go through in order to get Kagome. I hope he learns that relationship goes both ways...he can't just force someone to love him. I'd offer myself to be your beta but I probably wouldn't be the best person to be one. Feel free to pm me if you need any help. Please update soon.

I really love it. A couple mistakes but easily remedied in my own head lol. Even though you cut the elders short it was done very well! Simple and to the point. I liked it. The last scene really touched me.

oh man its so sad but yet i understand both there points. hope you have altest a good ending planed. please update as soon as you can. cant wait for the next chapter.awsoem story you got going by the way. ")

there relationship will never be happy until he lets go of his pride. looking at it from a realistic point of view. you cannot have a relationship without being honest. the story is a good story. I like it. I would rather him lose her to death than to win her with lies. For me his disrespect of her hurts. and until he changes and starts to hear Kagome out Sesshomaru doesn't deserve a baby.

I've been following this story since the beginning and I'm in love with it. I'll admit it was going a little slow but I understand. If you can't find a beta I'd be happy to offer my services. I recently submitted a story here. That could be used as my demo. Lol.

I really like your different approach to the pairing, I've read tons of fanfics and never read this particular story line. And just curious, what are your first and second languages?

Hey, wonderful story! I'm really enjoying how Sesshomaru loves but he doesn't even know whether what he feels is love, even though unconsciously he admitted that he did! Don't worry about how slow everything is going, it's better for things to have sufficient time to develop than for you to speed everything up! Quality vs. Quantity! :D Oh, and if you want I could be you beta! Just send me a message at nancy_t94@comcast.net and I can edit your chapters! Yay!

Nice new chapter. I really enjoyed it. Please update soon.

What can i say im in love with the fic. It fantastic and the slow progression of Sesshoumaru changing for her is so sweet. I just wish Kagome would wake up and realize that Inuyasha sucks and that Sesshoumaru rocks. Yeah yeah yeah i know theres a master plan that you probably have for the story but... *Wiggles with impatience.* Iim so impatient. I mean really she should figure out that hes really trying here pretty soon. Not mention when he finally tells her how he feels it should warm her farther towards him. any who, i hope that you post a new chapter soon.

The story is admittedly compelling -- a page turner. However, the Sesshomaru in this story has done truly dastardly, horrible, probably unforgivable deeds to our favorite heroine, cultural differences notwithstanding. Thus far, despite my fangirl fascination, the author's characterization of Sesshomaru has failed to capture my sympathy. Once again, like countless fanfiction before this, Kagome's Stockholm syndrome is being peddled as real affection. In my view, it will require an equally great sacrifice on the part of Sesshomaru for any relationship between them to be convincing to me as a reader.