I mean this in the most loving and teasing of ways but this has turned in to a soap opera. Something keeps happening every couple of chapters. When will it end?! Aside from my teasing i love this story and i can't wait to see what happens next in this never ending fanfic that i love to death.
I love it! Never a dull moment! Are you going to take this to a full 100 chapters??? I'm game if you are...
I noticed a couple of little things:
It would open up even more opportunities once she [competed] completed it.
"[ ]persevere." Take out the space between the quotation mark and the 'p'.
Actually, I would punctuate that sentence like this:
"Then I suppose we must…" he searched his memory for one of his father's favorite words[.], "persevere."
"Then I suppose we must… persevere." <-- this is actually one sentence, not 2, if you think about it.
I have enjoyed this story sooooo much, I wish it could go on forever, but you would probably like to have your life back. But ya know, at 76 chapters and nearly 238,000 words, when you finish this I think you would qualify for the Finishers Federation - you even get a banner, I think. I wrote all the stuff and I can't remember it - brains are toast! Here are some links so you can look into it:
http://www.dokuga.com/forum/10-off-topic-discussion/56438-hey-have-you-heard-about-the-finishers-federation
http://www.dokuga.com/forum/25-the-finishers-federation/56430-rules-and-what-we-are
http://www.dokuga.com/component/groupjive/index.php?option=com_groupjive&groupid=23&Itemid=0&action=gj.core.members.showmemberlist&limit=5&limitstart=10
I've really enjoyed this story and think you are phenomenal for keeping it going and if you finish it, well, you deserve a cookie at the very least, but a banner would be appropriate too!
Sala (Chapter 76) - Tue 18 Jan 2011
"Sheepskin is a modern euphemism for a diploma."
What region are you from? I'm just curious, since I've never heard this phrase before...
MidNigh (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Jan 2011
Dang!
Oh I am so glad that you updated! I've been waiting quite a while, but I always know that what you give us is well worth the wait. Akihiko is so adorable. He's just like Sesshomaru. Oh wow, an earthquake and Mariko is in labor: that spells trouble! Thanks for the wonderful chapter. Until next time....
Awesome! Did I ever tell you how much I love to read this story over from the beginning every time? I love it! Thank you so much for the update!
Welocme back, I loved the chapter. I've waited so long to read another chapter and what do you do? Make a cliffy...... Oh my gosh that chapter was totally awesome. I loved it. I hope Sesshomaru make it in time. Never thought an earthquake would happen.... Damn this was a cool and fun chapter to read. I want more...... Update soon. I beg you from the bottom of my keyboard to my mouse.....
So glad your back! I love this story! But what'a time to go into labor.... *eek*
Well damn! More tension and drama for this story! Hope you get to update soon.
Rosalind (Chapter 76) - Mon 17 Jan 2011
you live! and aww, akihiko is soooo CUTE!! i adore him, cool that mariko's having a baby too, and yay that it's a little girl, maybe it's akihiko's future mate, that could be interesting and yes i am an irrepressable matchmaker
an earthquake?! gah! i really hope that the girls will be okay- i know the guys will be, they're demons, but i admit to freaking out slightly over the girls, particularly mariko, maybe this will let kenta inadvertantly unlock some of those lost dragon traits?
really looking forward to when you next update!
LMAO, i would add more when he was unaware and cover the whole list. I loved this story, it took like three days to read all of the chapters so far and i can't wait till more show up. This story is awesome!
lmfao i have been MIA from this story in a minute but i love how hitomi is just sticking up for kagome and accepting her and i love how mariko and kenta are going to court its about time and i cant wait to see whats going to happen between those two
dayna (Chapter 75) - Thu 14 Oct 2010
Finally!!!!!! I have a chance to review. Man when I say that I love this story, no words can even express the way I feel. I passed my this stoy so many times without reading it and man was I missing out. Honestly I can even give a proper review because they story is just that amazing. I honestly can't wait for another update. Hopefully some new twist and turns will be in the near future.
ginny_sak (Chapter 75) - Tue 28 Sep 2010
i love you fic!! please, next chap soon!! ~~ ^0^
rosalind (Chapter 75) - Fri 24 Sep 2010
oh Inuyasha, serves him right for cursing so much, especially around the baby
love that kagome and her mom-in-law are getting along and interesting that mariko and kenta are finally going somewhere suddenly kinda hoping that some of the lost draconic magics might be rediscovered and also really hoping that somehow ayame and her group might show up, or maybe kouga's reincarnation? really sad that he's dead
wonderful story, looking forward to when you add more
haha...the necklace was a perfect touch lol...love it...only wish I had one for my father in law :D
LOL I loved the end of the chapter! Please keep up the good work! :D
Sala (Chapter 75) - Thu 23 Sep 2010
I wish I could have a few of those necklaces for some choice acquaintances...*laughs*
Inuyasha's new collar made me laugh so much! But I have to agree with Kagome: It would have been even better if she could have chosen more than one word!
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