This story was so fun to read. The fights (verbal and physical) fights were awesome and I swooned over the love expressed between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Bravo. I can't wait tonread this again :)

Host Club! Yes! At first, I recognized the Hitachiin designer reference, so at that point I wondered if there was going to be a crossover, then when Hilary and Kaoru were talking I was soooo happy! I hope I'll see them again!

This is a beatific story.   Clever to add the spider at the end.  Great work

Story was very enjoyable all in all and surprised at how both children would look so completely different but very cool. Great work altogether!!

it boggles my mind that instead of leaving a dangerous scene to check on her own son and trusting her mate to handle the situation, she always needs to disobey and throw herself at deaths door. Its ok if my kid is motherless and uncleness if everything went wrong right?

Wow Kagome really doesn't take any threats seriously to the point its ridiculous. She is pregnant and assassins are after her and a pending war and a building was blown up and she still thinks being aloof and joking about a stalker to her stressed and worried mate is ok? WoW!

Your writing style is great, very enjoyable.  The idea of the story is really interesting too, even though some of it is a bit hard to follow (how none of them could smell her illness...why Sesshomaru was so upset about her supposedly not being a virgin..), but holy crap he's unlikeable.  I know that you've written him as having believing he's got a method to his madness, but I keep hoping Kagome will just purify his ass and hold out until the helicopter comes back for her. 

It's hard to blame Kagome for doubting Sesshomaru's love.  He had an emotional affair only 3 months after marriage, "betrayal" or not.  I really, REALLY hope there's a scene where she gets to confront him about that.  I love this story and your writing is very engaging, but I can't help but wonder how neither Sesshomaru or Shippo were able to smell the cancer in Kagome?  Why was her virginity so important to him anyway?  I'm certain he wasn't pure and it's not like they were wed during the Feudal Era.

WOW! this was an awesome fanfic to read. the plot was polished and well balanced. it didnt feel hurried in any way. the grammer and pucntuation was flawless. i loved every word from beginning to end. the challenges they had to face were realistic to me. the love sesshy and kagome had made me feel like they were a real couple. i was glad that you included shippou and inuyasha in the story as a close net family as well. the part were sesshy's mom stood up for kagome and her pup was the best mil scene ever to be written. i will be looking for more stories from you. keep up the good writing. c'ya'

Wow! I loved this story! Even though it was long, the way you wrote and paced the chapters made it very enjoyable to read, it was a definite "page turner".  There is one thing that i wish would have happened, just to get a little bit more closure. I think having Houkaru make one final appearance, even if it were brief.  Maybe have verbal assurance from Kagome that she knew his actions were not his own.. I dont know it just felt a little abrupt after the whole situation being a rather large chunk of the story. 

I hope to see more from you and if this story is anything to go by, i know your future endeavors will be just as good, if not better!

you are an amazing writer!... I love this story!!!!

this is my all time favorite story to read. :) 

I love this story and it's very well written, but i did notice a small error that I thought should be brought to your attention even though you have finished this story. In chapter 59 you bring up that Kagome now has a small bump for where the baby is. In a previous chapter you said the baby kicked against Sesshomaru's hand. If she had just reached the small bump stage in chapter 59 then the baby would not have been big enough to be kicking. I doubt if his feet would have even been formed by then. I know that since the baby is a hanyo the pregnancy would be faster but the big bump, not the little bump comes before the baby starts kicking. Just thought I should let you know.

I have always held a fondness for this lovely story. It's so going into my favorites, and will be enjoyed(numerous times) to come. :D