I don't know if I've reviewed before, but I CERTAINLY owe you at least 2 dozen reviews. I print the chapters and read them at bedtime and I absolutely LOVE this story! The first chapter had me in tears and ready to kill Sesshoumaru. As a matter of fact, I wanted to kill him until he turned up to help Kagome study for her exams. You've created some wonderful original characters and I love the adult Shippo and I've even forgiven Inuyasha for being a jerk.
You're doing a wonderful job of writing this, really, not too many errors at all. And an even better job of imagining the story! I gotta tell you, the Naraku incarnation really came at me out of left field. I never guessed, never expected it. This is really a wonderful story and I want to thank you for going to all the effort to write it out and share it with us. I am with you to the end!
TruGemini (Chapter 69) - Mon 15 Mar 2010
Cool! A naraku throwback and we see Shippo help save the day. I loved it! That was a great battle scene. Awesome Job!
firehauke (Chapter 69) - Mon 15 Mar 2010
I think I'm with Mary on this; feels as though there's something else coming down the pike.
Good chapter though! One minor point of discussion - when Kagome follows Shippo and Sesshomaru with her bow and arrow, she should be sighting along the arrow, not the bow, unless she holds the bow in a horizontal fashion (which is possible, I think). But of course, you can ingore this piece of advice :) The chapter works well regardless.
mary (Chapter 69) - Mon 15 Mar 2010
oooo wicked fun. however, i think kouro isn't truly kouro. i think something else is up your sleeve.
Kanna37 (Chapter 69) - Sun 14 Mar 2010
Wow. Battles... hopefully they are over. But that was a really good one - well done!
Amber
Excellent Chapter!!!
Indie (Chapter 68) - Tue 09 Mar 2010
Oh wow! I have been enraptured with this tale for the past three days. You are one powerful writer, able to envoke so many emotions in your readers. From the beginning I felt such sadness at the predicament thrust upon Kagome, and by extension Sesshomaru. The way you have spun this, drawing out the details, and the flawless flow of dialog and story line makes this one of my favorites by far. Please continue. I eagerly await more.
So that was unexpected but makes a heck of a lot of sense... I have just noticed how convenient of an excuse it is to say "It was Naraku" since it really does work. He is the bane of everyone's existence and a very big thorn in everyone's side. I am curious to find out if the giant spider is Naraku reborn or just an incarnation. I look forward to the Inutaichi killing Naraku. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
o.O why was you in the hospital?? are you okay?? what was wrong?? im glad you're feeling better though
but what happened that kagome wished she hadnt looked O.o omg that makes me really want to know now, this chapter was so well done i loved the descriptive ness in it...great job as always
Hope you are ok!
mary (Chapter 68) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
oh my, riveting.
Sokai (Chapter 68) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
i do hope no one is dead. I do though have a bad feeling about Kagome going to Kouro
REDWOLF (Chapter 68) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
Naraku was always in control over the ones even Kagome thought were dead. This would be terrible if Kouro is still possessed by Naraku. Naraku is like poision ivy, he never stops being an itch!
CLIFFHANGERR!
Gahh! That was really exciting! Please keep up the great work XD I can't wait to read the next chapter! :O
What happens next?!
TruGemini (Chapter 68) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
Man...another cliffy? LOL! I am very happy to hear you are well and out of the hospital. That is really good news. I love your story and cannot wait to see what happens next. This is so exciting.
Ahhh the suspense is really killing me!! Turn after turn this story just gets more awesome with each chapter. I'll be waiting patiently for the next one :)
Ewwww, I hate spiders....well, unless they are pretty Tarantulas.
Squish that darn thing.
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