This is at least a start... Sesshou does have a lot to make up for. I wonder what Shippou and Inuyasha will say when they find out that Kagome and Sesshou have both been hiding something from them? I wonder how Sesshou will help with her studies? Will he help her find a job? I hope you won't make it very easy for Sesshou to get back on her good side. Keep up the good work and update soon. :P
Okay, I just read this whole thing and wow...
I love this story. First of all, the premise is great, and things like that do happen. People end up getting really hurt, and it doesn't get fixed because communication can be so hard when the parties involved are in pain. I really love that you're making them go through sort of the natural healing process of being angry and being stubborn, and just struggling to get passed it, which they have to do in order to get that clean start they both want.
The second thing I love is the way you write. You are so awesome! You really put all this complex and twisted emotion together in an understandable, not-to-angsty way. You've made their pain a part of the story, without making their pain the story itself, and that's really rare in fanfiction. Usually, when people are hurt in fanfiction, the story tends to revolve around that emotion as the main focus, and your focus is on their relationship.
I love this, keep writing, it's amazing!
stars (Chapter 24) - Wed 03 Jun 2009
please updata fast
Adriana (Chapter 24) - Wed 03 Jun 2009
I like how Kagome isn't letting him win very fast and how she's making him kinda start to play by her rules. lol and the sexual tension at the end wasn't too bad either. ^_^ update soon :)
Wow! I actually like this new patient Sesshou that is willing to do whatever it takes to get Kagome back. He even got things straighten out w/ Shippou... But I wonder what Kagome's family would say when they find out the truth about Kagome's life? I wonder what Kagome will say when she finds out that he had her followed? I look forward to see how Kagome will react to Sesshou's assistance with studying. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Adriana (Chapter 23) - Tue 02 Jun 2009
I thought he wasn't going to do something like that!!
lol although it was a briliant way to tell her that he knew about her going to school. ^_^ update soon
stars (Chapter 23) - Tue 02 Jun 2009
love it, please updata
Wow this truly is an awesome story...Keep it up....Cant wait to see what Sesshoumaru tells Kagome on how he knows she was in school......Keep writing:)
MidnightStar
sunset in love (Chapter 23) - Mon 01 Jun 2009
so cuteeeee.... oh, i realy... really love it, caught in a white lie huh, brilliant, i feel sorry for what kag had to endure due to sessh unreasonalbe pride... but now the table has been turned huh, update soon, it was so kawaiiiii....
stars (Chapter 22) - Mon 01 Jun 2009
please updata
Adriana (Chapter 21) - Sat 30 May 2009
lol Roses. how romantic. ^_^ update soon
Can't wait to see how dinner goes, that should be interesting!
stars (Chapter 21) - Sat 30 May 2009
love it but is there going to be a bad guy
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