Great short :) loved the character growth at the end.

That's hot and sweet

very nice :)   i do wonder what happened to shippo though...

I really like it

I wish there was more explanation of what happened between Kagome and Sesshomaru after they left the den and how they learned to live with each other and how Kagome handled going from ningen to youkai so suddenly

Sesshomaru is  hiding from kagome .... ROFL!!

Great story it was HOT!!

Very, very amazing. I enjoyed it very much :] And I really hope to read some more as good as this in the future.

This was delightful, i loved the entire thing and especially the end (plus the hot lemon in the middle).

ME LIKEY ME LIKEY!!! OMG thats was awsome!!! I could almost use this story as reference material for my story if you dont mind. It's like a paranormal story tellers guide to Inu Romance. Those Names were beautiful by the way.

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! KEEP WRITING !

it was a great story keep up the great work ^_^

Damn rOo!  I had no idea you wrote this one... hot and heavy, lol! 

Amber

R0o! I luvs it, I was expecting more gutter but this was even better! I have to say.. I hope the r0o-sama sees fit to gift us with a sequel? *hint hint*

*huggles* MontiK

 I LOVED it. I loved it. I loved it. I loved it I love it. Did I tell you I loved it!!  LOL.  This was so awesome. Especially loved the part were Sesshomaru mentioned about running from Kagome. He learns well. I really enjoyed this and I would love to see more work like this.  It was very original and tasteful. I can't how much I enjoyed this.

I really like this but it does have some minor problems.  You're using dominate when it should be dominant, X is the dominant partner for example.  Also then is time related, you do ? now & then.  Than is ratio related, comparing 2 things like he is taller than she is & than is the 1 you should mostly use when writing not then.  I hope this helps.