OMG!!! Poor Kagome. I tried to tell her to leave the dragon king alone! Well, not really, but you know what I mean. Gah! I've got to see what happens to her next!
YEAH! Go Sesshy ! *does a happy dance* I'm SO relieved that nothing happened between him and the Goddess ! Can't wait for the rest now ! Especially since I went to see you illustration for the story and saw Kagome in her torn skirt... will he really be gone THAT long? the suspense is killing me =D
And so, the battle finally begins. I'm glad Kagome sees to be okay. I hope she learns her lesson about meddeling in other peoples problems though. ^_^
lunaticneko (Chapter 34) - Sun 06 Jul 2008
That was really... good, interesting, disturbing, amusing (from the last few chapters) Can't wait to see what happens.
Jenna (Chapter 33) - Sat 05 Jul 2008
I really love this story, so I felt obligated to leave a comment. I hope that you post soon. I have a book of fairy tales from around the world, and the story of UrashimaTaro is one of them, and also one of my favorites. I'm very glad that you included it. The princess character is good, but a bit more wanton then the real story I believe. Anyway, good job and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Sesshoumaru bouncing on a dragon?! HA! I love it! And the whole kiss conversation was great! I love the fact that he brought it up. Seems to indicate a mild level of concern. Hmmmm.
Great chapter! It may be wishful thinking at this point, but I believe that Sesshoumaru, is becoming slightly protective of Kagome. XD I love that your cover, has pictures of your OCs. It makes it a lot easier to imagine them as I read the story.
P.S. Darn that Kagome, and her never ending curiosity! I'm almost positive it's going to come back on her!
I don't know... I have a bad feeling about the next story. Off to the chapter I goooo!!!! XD
Ha! I knew his great grandfather was going to be involved in some way!
This chapter was so sad.
I should have known that Sess and Kag could only be together for so long, before someone had a clawed hand wrapped around her throat! XD
The end of this chapter was just too good! Naked taiyoukai, Yum! XD LOL!
Wow! This Chapter was so deep! I've got to see what happens next. ^_^
Wow! what's happening to Sesshoumaru?! 0,0
Awww, I'm going to miss Shiro too. And what was that kiss all about?! It was awesome, don't get me wrong, but I thought this was a Sess/Kag fic! LOL!
Dh7 (Chapter 33) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
Is Sess going to be raped by that women? And how on earth would the wife of susano end up there? Jeeze you know how to entrall people with every chapter, even if kags is missing T.T
L-desu (Chapter 33) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
and the plot thickens... w00t! i love what you're doing to poor ol' sesshy. now the question remains - will he be strong enough to deny himself her pleasures?
KAggie (Chapter 33) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
I have to say that your talent for detail in your descriptions is immpecable. :) I loved being sucked into a different world and being navigated through it. It really was quite the delight. :) And oh ho ho on Oto-hime's true identity. ;) I could guess what made her hubby angry, but I'll leave that up to you. :D
Oh please again soon!! I need more!!
LadySafire
P.S. Yeah Kagome really should have peeked! Hide his clothes Kagomer, Hide the clothes!!
I've seen this story before, but this is the first time I thought to read it. I can't believe this is your first story! I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'm already impressed. Very well written. Good job!
Ok, I just read the second chapter. Interesting stuff. Must read on.
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