oohhhhhh how i looove this fic, i can't wait for the next chapter...... wooohooo so freakin excited for the next story!
Kagome357 (Chapter 39) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
So he lost his arm again? I don't get it - why would he have lost his arm? Awww...bummer. The scene was very touching and tender. I've been tempted to find the Tales online but I've held off until your story is finished. You're a great writer. Thanks.
Rosedream (Chapter 39) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
I was really dissapointed that she didn't remember any of her many years on the island. I think it gave her a grounded nature that seems more in keeping with her personality than that of a slightly whinny teenager. I also think that it would have been nice because the many lessons she went through gave her experience to draw upon when she reaches the real world. Maybe she will remeber it all later??
Sala (Chapter 39) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
You are a cliffhanger sadist. But I must be a cliffhanger masochist, because I love 'em! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. :)
Aisaii (Chapter 39) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
I'm not to sure if it was read correctly since there was a part where Tenseiga and Tokijin was handed to Sesshoumaru by Kagome and then it was stated he placed them back within their silks.
FleetingDream (Chapter 39) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
Oh I'm so hooked onto this story. This was a good chapter-so love the extended lenght- I kinda, like most I'm sure, wanted Kagome to remember but then again I didn't. Confusing, yes I'm weird but I wanted her to remember the skills she'd learned but not entirely the loneliness she endured. And I say not entirely because I'd like her to mantain her Kagome innocence but then on the other hand it would be nice if she could relate to Sesshoumaru with her loneliness-confused? I know I sure am lol.
FleetingDream (Chapter 39) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
You know what, just because I don't wanna be left out, I'll ask a question- how self centered is that? And no that wasn't the question. Does the swords still have their same aura in the scolls? Because in this chapter Kagome picked up Tokijin so I was wondering because I thought no one other than Sesshoumaru could even touch the sword.
Why does Sesshomaru choose not to tell her what happened? interesting...
my favorite part was when you said he felt the distinct need to put his pants back on after having two naked women throwing themselves at him in one day. lol. more please!!
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Great story! I love the way you write! By-the-way, you when Sess was dressing in chapter 39, you left out him putting his swords back in place. Not sure if that was on purpose since his socks were mentioned. It just makes the flow of the dressing a little weird.
Jessica (Chapter 39) - Sat 09 Aug 2008
At first I was nervous about Sesshoumaru actually sacrificing his years for her but then I remembered that chances of him completing the stories would be pretty slim without her. I really hoped that she would remember what happened to her, well at least the part where she could fend for herself or maybe her calling Sesshoumaru Inuyasha and him responding to it, oh what a good source of blackmail that would have been...then again maybe not Sesshoumaru has killed for less... How much longer do you think this story will be? If our two naked dudes in the spring show up, I think it would be nice for Otohime to make an appearance haha.
Okay, since I already left an incredibly annoying review on ff.net, I wanted to mention that I had noticed a few slips in this chapter. Some constructive criticism. : )
First, the swords being forgotten (though as I glance down you've had several already mention that), and also there's this part where Kagome first sees the box and says, "A vox". That was really jarring--took me out of the story completely. She also goes on a bit of a rant where she's asking a ton of questions, but for some reason, mid rant, there's an end-quotation right before she asks where her clothes are (I believe), but then in continues on as if she's asking the questions still.
Those were just three of the ones I noticed. I'm glad you posted it! : )
omg please update O_O im so hooked onto this
aah!! don't stop there!! i'm soo glad he opened the box but please hurry!!
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Yudelle (Chapter 38) - Tue 05 Aug 2008
Nice job. I trully love your fanfic. Keep up the good work.
Yes !! he opened the chest!
As usual, great chapter! Can't wait for next chapter =)
What a relief! He opened it!
I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is getting more and more exciting!
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