this tale is going to be fun to read. the monkey and bird fighting like shippo and inuyasha over food!

Haaaaappppyyyy dance! You updated yaaaay!

ACK! You ended it too soon! I like the two new personalities, and their names...very clever... ;)

like the new characters *^_^* update again soon

That chapter was way better than I expected it to be! Definitely worth al that waiting! Well done!! Can't wait for your next chapter!!

writ more soon please, like all the nice people tell you to.

Nice chapter! update soooooonnnnn...

Wow this was a long awaited chapter. But it was good and it was funny reading sesshoumaru being entangled by his own things. its interesting that the old couple knows whats goin on even though they're really imaginary people in a book. if these nice old couple is like that what if some evil villains in the story also know whats goin on? hmm, interesting. i look forward to ur next chapter.

Hmmmm, interesting chapter. It seemes that the incident on the beach holds more significance than I thought it would. I can't wait to see what it all means. I love you portrayal of Sesshoumaru in this story!

This chapter was quite good! I like the way you spin out their characteristics slowly, so you get to know them better as time goes on. I'm looking forward to where this goes next. All I can say is, sporlikity.

This is wonderful...ur story is an inspiration, the way ur incorperat the details of the original myths, and seemlessly integrat sess and kag into them along with a whole host of original characters. i absolutle love it. ur next update i will be eagerly anticipate. i absolutely love love this story...much love!!

Hee heee~~! I get giddy just after seeing the chapter titles. Much love for your rendition of Momotaro.

i love it i agree with possessed!

this story is awesome i'm so glad u updated *^_^*

I really enjoyed this chapter as well. I love the detail you include about the stories featured. I'm looking forward to reading more.

i was cracking up when the woman talked about sesshomaru. "...fine, loyal white dog to protect you and fight at your side." lol. as for the curse, i think it's got something to do with Shiro's lineage loving humans. be that love paternal, familial or marital. :D that's my guess anyway.

oh my god! I think this is the longest you've gone without updating! Im going through serious withdrawl now!

this is a really good story and i can't wait for the rest of it...very intresting... ^_^Kaghomaru^_^

Love this story CAN NOT WAIT to finish reading. It like A weekly thing I do now!

I have really enjoyed this story so far. I promise to review more often! I have been lazy! I love that you have incorporated these fairy tales into the plot, because it's like reading little adventures within the main story. It's almost like you've created a series within the series, and each story is an episode. I can't wait to read the next chapter.