Please update soon, I’ve always loved law enforcement & feel a great repsect for what they deal with day in & day out. You’ve combined the feudal era with modern law enforcement & I want to read more. What’s going to happen between Sesshomaru & Kagome? Will love blossom or will they keep things strictly professional? What will Noborou think of next? Does he fancy himself cunning like Naraku? What are noborou’s true intentions? Anyway, you get the idea, so many question..... Please update soon
Astara (Chapter 10) - Tue 13 Aug 2019
So wonderful to see you back at it! As always brilliant work and incredible storytelling. I'm eagerly looking forward to more!
love love love!! I can't wait to see what comes next and what Noboru is after. Update soon!
Toni (Chapter 9) - Sat 10 Aug 2019
one of my favorite stories please update again soon can't wait to see where this goes
thanks for a great story
silence (Chapter 9) - Sat 10 Aug 2019
I'm so glad to see an update. I really thought this story was abandoned. I liked the suspense you put in this chapter.
Orotami (Chapter 9) - Sat 10 Aug 2019
That last section was beautiful! He now knows he won't be alone forever! Gosh I'm crying tears of joy over that. He needed to hear that.
Faith (Chapter 9) - Sat 10 Aug 2019
Interesting twist.
So Noburo can create puppets too...hmmm
Great story so far!! I hope you put more up soon! This is developing into a very interesting story!
Kirara (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Feb 2019
Love it! Please, publish some more chapters! Please update soon. So interesting and fresh.
Not at all what I was thinking the isolation room was!
Hopefully you will update soon!
Update soon!!
Pearl (Chapter 8) - Thu 15 Nov 2018
I was very surprised by the Isolation room. Considering most of the division are youkai I would assume they would get the bodies out in a few days instead of weeks or months.
Alashia (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Nov 2018
Very interesting. Can't for the next update.
silence (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Nov 2018
Good story, but I do wish you weren't developing Sesshomaru's feelings so soon. How long has Kagome been working for him? A few days? I think it's too soon to start having feelings for her already. I was hoping that his feelings would slowly start developing after spending more time together. Then maybe, something happens to Kagome where she nearly looses her life, and that's when he realizes his feelings for her. Just a thought. You don't have to listen to me, you can write your story however you want. I was just surprised that Sesshomaru was having these feelings already very early in the story. Well continue writing, because I really am enjoying it.
I only wonder thatbif they are youkai, why not purify them to ash...or is it since they are dead there is nothing, no soul, to purify? But then again she took a jewel shard from that scorpion demon in the show and it purified. Isolation room rules: no purification?
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