I loved this so much. Honestly wasn't expecting to cry as much as I did, but it was all for a purpose. But poor Shippo. Also, I loved how creative the whole premise of this was. I never would have thought of any of that! Incredibly well done and great characterization!
Woahhhhh this is quite a good fic, I'm ugly crying when I'm reading this. I mean, in the end, they both still aren't technically together.... It's kinda sad...
Just read the entire thing through loved it!
Well you made me sob a little so thats like a 10 gold star review from me.
Thank you for this chapter. Love this story.
Loved the update a sad tale indeed but ever so loving to the end... Thank you for updating.
This story was wonderful and I enjoyed it!
Happy Valentine's Day!
This story was wonderful and I enjoyed it!
Happy Valentine's Day!?
I like the cliff hangar but is this the final chapter? The demon of mass destruction has been temporarily thwarted & they realize they want each other? No offense but this chapter is slightly anticlimacti. Well written but anticlimactic
susie (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Apr 2020
I miss this fic! I really hope an update is in the cards! Love your work.
Please say there is more! Has the evil truly been vanquished or is it biding it's time until the right moment to strike?! So suspenseful!
That was really well done! Bravo! Sometimes the bittersweet stories can be just as heartwarming. There is always little pain in our lives. It's never all sunshine and roses. Thanks so much!
Oh no! Shippo! I knew there was going to be some death but I hate it when it's a character I love. But, he did save her and I think he knows that she'll watch over his sons. You are breaking my heart.
Oh boy! This is bad.
Ah...that was beautiful. Thank you.
Lovely chapters. Ah...these two. That is quite the dance they are in. The back and forth is agonizing!
He did kind of blind side her. She. Needs a little courting. Or maybe a lot...
I guess it would never occur to her that he loves her. Nice chapter.
His beast is really jealous. She just knows something fishy is going on.
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