Awesome chapter. Kagome's first mission went rather nicely I thought. Her and team worked in tandem as if they had always been a team for like forever.
Masaru seemed liked a little lost boy that needed his family back and glad Kagome really had no trouble in bringing him back home.
Jumping out of that window took a lot of courage and trust in Hikaru to catch them. It showed the anount of faith she had in her team, also.
The last few sentences gave us a hint to how Sesshomaru may feel about Kagome and what may develope between them later on.
Keep up the good writing. Loving this story.
Looking for more updates soon!!!
blommie8 (Chapter 5) - Fri 02 Nov 2018
great as always...
sorry for the last typo coment, i mean SSA not SAS.
Ankita (Chapter 4) - Thu 01 Nov 2018
Thank you for updating
Nallely (Chapter 4) - Thu 01 Nov 2018
Oh my, I just love the story. Really like the base idea of the police force and the possibilities. I hope you keep bringing more chapters.
R2A3 (Chapter 4) - Wed 31 Oct 2018
Ooh, looking forward to more :D
Orotami (Chapter 4) - Wed 31 Oct 2018
Very intense! And curiosity all over the place. Really can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe we will get lucky with a super long chapter!
Love this chapter. I think it is very nicely written and a nice way to introduce Shippo into the story.
Wonderful story so far. You are such an excellent writer and one of my favorites. :)
Anxiously awaiting the next installments...wish the chapters were longer but I can't complain.
Thanks for taking the time to update.
Cheers!!!
blommie8 (Chapter 4) - Tue 30 Oct 2018
im glad to read your story again. it's been a long time since i read your story. im one of your fan. thank you SAS
blommie8 (Chapter 4) - Tue 30 Oct 2018
im glad to read your story again. it's been a long time since i read your story. im one of your fan. thank you SAS
I am soo loving this! After a long time I am back reading a fafic and this definitely caught my attention. I just looked at the summary and decided to read thinking "Hmm this looks very interesting plot". I love your portrayals of Kagome and Sesshoumaru alot. Then I went back to check the name of the fanfic cuz I never mangae to remember the names and saw the author name n was like "No wonder I like the writing style and the plot". You are one of my favorite authors XD
Raje (Chapter 3) - Sun 28 Oct 2018
I need more TT This is so interesting!
Faith (Chapter 3) - Sat 27 Oct 2018
Who will her team be? What is the mission? How did Sesshoumaru find that history book? How did he know it was hers but not know she was from the future?
Still so many questions...I can't wait to find out.
VS (Chapter 3) - Sat 27 Oct 2018
Hello,
I like the concept of this story so far! Your portrayal of Kagome and Sesshoumaru seems authentic. I especially like that you didn't let Kagome be this super strong woman from the beginning. She fell back into the role of someone who needs protection and not someone who can provide protection. You let her work hard instead of turning her over night to super woman. Well done!
I love your idea with her history book! It's something I have thought over myself a lot of times. Is Naraku and the jewel really the only reason why she was brought to the past?
I'm super excited for this story! And I might have an idea about who Kagome's team members will be. ;)
I'm looking forward to your next update!
lonny (Chapter 3) - Sat 27 Oct 2018
I like it.
This is so well written omg I LIKE IT! I can't wait for the next chapters
What can I say but Wow, that was a great chapter however I wished the General would have scoled the Commish berating the miko. But then again it would prove to much. Anyways update soon and make the story a bit longer....
Mona (Chapter 3) - Fri 26 Oct 2018
I really hope to read more soon.
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