Oh my goodness. Chapters 4 through 7 were very insightful but this chapter 8 was the BOMB!!!
The other Sesshomaru is so devious and manipulative, especially overpowering Sesshomaru and making him lose his instinctual control to go after Kagome. Trying to override her mating mark for his own but ending up getting a hand job from her. That was a brilliant idea of Kagome to bring him back under control.
Inuyasha losing his instinctual control and basically 'raping' Kagome getting her to show submissiveness in front of Sesshomaru. I think that is what the other Sesshomaru was going for to get both brothers to fight over Kagome thinking that Sesshomaru will end up killing Inuyasha and mating and marking Kagome, hence fullfilling the other Sesshomaru's agenda.
Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. Will Sesshomaru lose it after watching Inuyasha reclaiming Kagome?
Great story with an intriguing plot.
Excellent writing skills!
Cheers!!!
Omg!! That was the most brutal chapter ever. Kagome can't catch a break!! I'm really loving this story, can't wait for more!
Wow...just wow. Is all I have to say. Thanks for the update.
Hope everything's okay, and finals went well can't wait for the next chapter ???? also happy holidays!!
R (Chapter 7) - Fri 14 Dec 2018
Holy crap...this is intense! That last chapter left me feeling absolute drea. What an awful situation the three are now in. I’m trying not to anticipate the horrors! I love this piece; it’s so well written. You’ve put together wonderful dialogu, a great pace, and have really pulled the reader in with all the emotionally provocative writing. In short: you’re awesome! Thanks for all the time you’ve taken to write this fantastic piece. I’m really looking forward to future updates!
Koree (Chapter 7) - Wed 12 Dec 2018
Sighhhhhh future Sesshomaru is just making bad choices left & right , now he’s messing with s whole different Kagome who has already seen what her future self has been through so her emotions are like 20 fold * face palms * this won’t go over well . Great chap
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