This fic is really inspiring and I can't tell what might come next. This second chapter definitely threw me for a loop. A good loop but I like that in stories. Update soon please
Oh. Man, I wonder how this'll shake down. I hope both Kagomes don't suffer the same fate, because it seems like that Kagome is dying because of sheer will. I know Sesshomaru may hate Kagome because he was forced to mate her, but what's his problem with his pups? It seemed like they fear him...has he lost his marbles??? You know what really bummed me out? I know Kagome is with INUYASHA, but based off of their information it seems like this Kagome and Seshomaru could be better suited
Alison (Chapter 2) - Sat 27 Oct 2018
Still Ship Sessh and Kags.
This story is so sad, please update the next chapter quickly!
Love the story
The plot thickens! Love this update! This is easily becoming my new favorite story!
I've always loved the idea of parallel universes and other realms, so this story really called to me. I love the darkness of it. I really like how our Kagome is into what seems to be light BDSM but she is now kinda faced with an open view of a life where it's not a chosen lifestyle for her 'other'. She's facing a situation where real harm has be been done and it makes me wonder if a part of her is worried that the other Sesshoumaru may be looking to do the same to her.
I'm really into the author's writing style. The flashbacks are easy to read and seem to flow well into what is happening in the present. I hope the author keeps with this dark theme and doesn't let some peoples' 'weak stomach' get in the way of some truly dark plot.
<3
Natalia (Chapter 2) - Fri 26 Oct 2018
You amazed me in a positive way. I planed on reading this more out of curiosity but I find myself engaged in the plot. There is a curse, Kagome isn't suddenly liking to be raped and thank god she is not in love with the jerk ...
And last paragraph what a trap for poor Kagome who loves children and those are literally her children ... Eh I know she will find a way .. And I also like Sesshomaru inuyasha interaction. I can even see a pact between the two to protect Kagome that will lead to Sesshomaru changing many of his views. Thx for the update Hope to see more soon.
Wasn’t sure I would care for a story like this, but decided to give it a shot. Glad I did, this is interesting. Update soon I want to read more
So goood I wonder if she'll pick up her daughter? What is going on in sesshomaru head? Where is other kagome
Wow. I just want to know one thing. Where is the Kagome there? I'm lo jbg this story. I think the current Kagome could break the curses. Or would she want to? I wonder if the other Sesshoumaru will try for her? Thanks for the update. In addition, possibly having italicized text for the past can be helpful to the reader
Wow that was intense! When I saw your update a little “Yes!” went off in my head ;p. I’m really enjoying your writing and your story! I can’t wait for more!
VS (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Oct 2018
Hello,
this concept is so awkward that it is great again! This first chapter was awesome. I especially liked the way Kagome and (new?) Sesshoumaru argued about the punishment of the boy, like it was natural, an everyday occurrence. Well done! My only fear is that it will be difficult to seperate Sesshoumaru and this new Sesshoumaru while reading. Hopefully you will find a practical solution for that.
I'm looking forward to your next update!
crystal (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Oct 2018
Wow. That's intense. Looking forward to another chapter
Keo (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Oct 2018
Can't wait fpr more!
Honey, this is popping! Finally a fresh new storyline! Yay! More, honey. More
Just wow! this was an amzing first chapter. I'm really looking forward to reading more!!
Lorena (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Oct 2018
Oh man, i am so excited for this! Bless this curiosity of yours, because I want to know how all if this went down. I wonder how much that lack of information will cost Inuyasha, but will it really matter since they are mated?
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