I’m really happy Sessh got to see what the other Kags was going through. It helps give him an idea of what to avoid in the future! 

Learn from that fools mistakes Sesshomaru. Don't be like that evil twin!!!!

Ohh cannot wait to see what happens next!

Wow! What a revelation for him. Fight fight fight... I doubt it st this point but I wonder how he will react now that he knows about the other Sesshoumaru's actions. Thanks for the explanations and the update. Super excited for this story and its future chapters.

Wow! More please!

Sesshoumaru on Sesshoumaru fight?  The dream sequence confused me till I realized which one was having the dream.  Might want to clarify if not like it are to come,  but I'm enjoying the story thus far.  Maternal kagome with the pups had me going Awww. 

Impressive, it's so dark I like it lol. Leaves me curious on how this plot will play out.

Holy moly! Your writing is so well done! Please continue! 

Hello,

I really like where you are going with this story so far! The small kids were just adorable! But my favourite is Takehiko. He needs his mother the most. And I do hope that you will invest in some bonding time between him and Kagome.

I can imagine how the other Sesshoumaru will react when he will see his pups with Kagome. This is how it should have been. His mate and his children together. And it is his fault that he can't have that.

I also like that you put some flashbacks in every chapter. So we learn about the past while the present occurrences are still progressing.

What I do miss are the reactions of Sesshoumaru. He is holding too much back. Sometimes I even forget that he is there. Takehiko referring to Inuyasha as mutt was just hilarious. Though there is something I didn't quite get: Takehiko stated that he didn't know who Inuyasha is, yet later he explained to the twins that Kagome mated that mutt who is Sesshoumaru's brother.

I'm looking forward to your next update.

This is so angsty but something I want to see through to the end. I can't even try to predict what is going to happen. Please update soon.

Dang yo~ I guess this reality has his stresses, but I found it amusing that ome minute I'm feeling that self loathing from his flashback and punishment and the next he's back to livid....is this Sesshomaru crazy? 

Nooo that ended to soon, this story literally makes my week thank for writing and I  know you were busy but i hoped you had an awesome Halloween. Also cant wait until the next chapter shit is going down like way down i wonder what past sesshomaru thinks of everything thats happening and inuyasha too, 

Uh oh! The next chapter’s gonna have some drama! Can’t wait for it!

This story is sader and sader, please update the next chapters quickly!

Thid is sader and sader, please update the next chapters quickly!

Oh I like this story. Cannot wait for more!

Omg!!! Love it! I was so excited to see another chapter posted! Love the fact you gave a bit of back story as well. I can't wait for the next update!

I'm so conflicted. I love the story and Kags and Sesshomaru but I feel bad for rooting for them because he's done such horrible things to her. I'm also rooting for the other Kagome and Sesshomaru because I just want them together. Sorry, Inuyasha. 

I don't actually like dark stories but I do read them when the writer draws me in with their writing skills and this one has done that.

I am curious as to how this story will play out with the direction you may take it.

I feel badly for the 'other' Sesshomaru and Kagome.  Their children seem to be suffering also.  Is the 'other' Kagome in that much despair that she has emotionally neglected her children?  Has she become that mentally and physically weak?  It is understandable due to the circumstances that she has had to endure all those years as the 'other' Sesshomaru's mate.  Well, he seems to be suffering himself...he reaped what he sowed.

Excellent writing...keep it going.