Reviews for Moon Palace by Scar

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 11) - Tue 26 May 2020

Great story.


Lauren (Chapter 11) - Tue 05 May 2020

Scanned this chapter, and I'm glad it wasn't all upsetting 

 

This chapter was posted twice. 


Lauren (Chapter 10) - Thu 23 Apr 2020

Welcome back!

Poor Kagome... Here is hoping they can arrange training or something productive to assist in the transition back to normal life.


I hope you are staying safe! Happy pre-Friday~


SmilingFool (Chapter 10) - Mon 20 Apr 2020

I do adore this story, thank you for updating.  Wow such a heart breaker....  I do hope Sesshomaru get to kill and revive the ones responsible for what happened to Kagome.  So she was found in the north in their dungeons for the eleven years, I was going to suggest Naraku but I don't know if he is in this story or if he is even a villian. 

I don't like the Myu the third wife to Toga you stated that she is human but her brother is a hanyo are they half siblings?  Could both Nobo and Myu be in on why Kagome went missing, knowing somehow she knew where the fabeled jewel was?  Not enough clues except the echo of Kagome's name being called.  Oh how I was some clues....  

Oh just a thought the word you have youki is actually spelt yoki, and is the power of a yokai and jyki is the aura of the yokai I just thought you should know... Gods I don't even remember which chapter I read that part in...  Oh well, I hope you put the knowledge to good use and there is a whole lot more just look it up if you don't find it under Inu Yasha information page on characters then look at it all you be surprized at what you find on the sight.

 

Again thank you for updating.  Stay safe....  And yes being indoors is a moot point... Just stay safe.  Update soon.


Orchidaceae (Chapter 9) - Sun 29 Mar 2020

Update please!!!


Sammyjams (Chapter 8) - Wed 06 Nov 2019

Poor Kags - hopefully it comes back to her soon!


Goldie Fawn (Chapter 8) - Wed 06 Nov 2019

Aaaaw Shippo.is so sweet ;_; I wonder if she'll ever remember Sess.


Sammyjams (Chapter 6) - Tue 08 Oct 2019

I gobbled this story up so far! I can’t wait to read more!


Goldie Fawn (Chapter 6) - Sat 05 Oct 2019

I have so many questions! Poor Kags and Sess ;_;!!!


candy (Chapter 6) - Sat 05 Oct 2019

Wow 


Huntress11 (Chapter 5) - Sat 17 Feb 2018

This makes me sad. Love it but sad.


candy (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

Poor Kagome I hope Sesshomaru can heal her 


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

Ah nvm lol this isn’t THAT story! But Damn ten years Lagome was held captive!? Jeez! That’s shitty . Sesshoumaru is going to kick ass


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

interesting! Dark but awesome! I was totally expecting the you know what story you showed me before ???? or is this it?? Can’t wait to see what you write next  Steph!


princess of the western lands (Chapter 3) - Wed 31 Jan 2018

Great story. The updating schedule does work because it gives you a deadline or something to look forward to. Some authors do short chapters or long ones. Personally I'd rather a good short chapter than a long wordy one. Some authors do a part one and part two chapters when they are still working on ideas or just posting one chapter. Maybe updating with one or two short chapters a week is better for you or one very long chapter a week. 

 

Try out a schedule and see what works for you. Also if you aren't on time and you post a day or two later don't worry about it, we have patience. Please continue your story. It's getting really good and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


Rinlovesyou (Chapter 2) - Sun 29 Oct 2017

OH MY LORD. WHY ONLY 2 CHAPTERS? I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.OMLLLLLLLLL I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINUE


Ameakis (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Sep 2017

I loved reading Liberation and can't wait to read more of your latest story.


Chiikyuggi (Chapter 2) - Thu 14 Sep 2017

Wow. Intense.

I'm very interested in this story, I hope you continue it.


Nicole (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Sep 2017

Interesting. You have raised my curiosity and I want to know more. 


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