What a wonderful chapter. Too bad for Jaken. He should have stayed and fight. I love the scene with the daughter of the north Subeta who challenge Kagome for the mating rights. What a wonderful job with this chapter.
I have really enjoyed reading your story, but I have one question. Why does Inuyasha get to have a separate set of rules from everyone else? Kagome was ready to kick Miroku out of the pack for his embarrassing behavior. Then she was ready to kick both Sango and Miroku out when they made a mistake in battle that endangered Rin. Jaken was killed for running away in a battle. While all these things are bad, none of them even compare to what Inuyasha has done and yet he gets a pass. He actually physically tried to hurt the pack and had every intention or raping Kagome even after Kikyo's spell was broken. His actions were way worse then Miroku, Sango, and Jaken. Why was he not killed or at the very least banished?
Another brilliant chapter. Jaken got what he deserved for desrtion and being a coward in the face of battle...his death. I guess he couldn't snivel his way out this one, too,too bad.
Kagome has proven to be a great lady of the west and much loved and respected by all the people of the shiro. I loved how she kicked that northern demoness's ass and then turned her to ash. Kagome doesn't play around, she gets down to business. She has proved how powerful she is and Sessho couldn't be more happier and prouder of her. I almost feel sorry for Inuyasha because now he sees what he lost to his brother but at least he still has a family and friends now.
Looking forward to the last chapter. Excellent writing job!!!
I am trully amazed at the way chapters 29 and 30 turned out. They were brilliantly written. I am so looking forward to the last two chapters of this fantastic story.
I would never had crossed my mind that it would have taken Kagome's death to break Sessho's curse. I find that very curious and interesting because it was the twist in the plot...very good. I can't wait to see what Sessho has in store for Jaken and how he will snivel his way out of this cause Sessho is so pissed off at him.
Excellent writing job.
Yes they finally mated. I am so happy for Sesshomaru and Kagome. I was surprised that Inuyasha had submitted to his brother. I hope that he grows up and stop being a fool. He had his chance and he blew it all away. I totally forgotten about Jaken. I wonder what will Sesshomaru do to him when they return to the castle. Superb job with this story.
I just wanted to let you know that I am a big fan of your stories and very much enjoy reading them. Thank you for taking the time to write these wonderful stories.
WOW!!!!!!!. I did not see this coming. Naraku got exactly what he deserved. I did not expect Kagome to die and come back because she figured out how to make Sesshomaru normal again. You had so many surprises in this story that I actually jumped up and down with excitement. I still do not trust Inuyasha. I think he is up to something. I hope he get his butt whipped again by both Sesshomaru and Kagome. Awesome story.
awesome I am sure between sessie and Kags that they can finally defeat Naraku. then to see about the curse. : ) looking forward to more. and hoping it will come soon. thanks for sharing.
Awesome chapter. It seems that Sessho and Kagome came with an idea to finally break the cursed spell. I hope Inuyasha really gets what is coming to him for what he did to Kagome's well. That was just low down and dirty. He does not deserve to live, if he is allowed to live then he should get something that he will never forget for the rest of his life but of course the chapter is most likely already written and my rants are just empty rants.
Jaken...Jaken...Jaken that little swarmy coward. He better hope nobody saw him slither away and besides how is he going to explain himself to Sessho when he comes back to the shiro and finds Jaken there without a scratch on himself, also how would he explain that he was no where around during and after the battle.
Excellently written and looking forward to the other chapters to come. Great job!!!
Getting good. Sounds like Sesshomaru broke the spell
Amazing. Simply Amazing. I truly enjoyed the battle scenes. I hate that Inuyasha had destroyed the well. Jaken is such a coward. I hope that Sesshomaru deals with him. I can't wait for the next update.
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