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Ryo chan (Chapter 14) - Fri 09 Jun 2017

I can't wait for the next chapter hot spring times was hot, also that's what mikoku gets lol 


GreyEcho (Chapter 14) - Fri 09 Jun 2017

Yay update and lol miroku'a punishment.

 

*blush* hot spring times.

 

so will kagone use the protective tailismen she gave him to make him appear his normal size again?

 

love this story

 


critique (Chapter 5) - Tue 06 Jun 2017

Hello, I have read up to chapter 4 and had to stop. There is a lot of unnecessary sentences that describe a characters actions and then has to explain said action. It ends up feeling like you have repeated sentences. For example, you would mention kagome thinking of something and then repeat what she was thinking into her saying it out loud. Also I think it's pointless to write every single thing a characters does. Unfortunately when I read, it makes it very easy to just skim over paragraphs that describe those every action. But I do enjoy the plot and hopefully you keep up the good work.


FireDragon (Chapter 13) - Sat 03 Jun 2017

Awesome I love this story so far. Looking forward to more.


GreyEcho (Chapter 13) - Fri 02 Jun 2017

Just gets better. Glad they are on a better page and he knows what he wants. Can't wait to read the next chapter. No rush. Love it!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 13) - Fri 02 Jun 2017

Execellent chapter.  Kagome was awesome and so was Sessho. They were protecting each other. Why would Kagome tell Sango that Sessho is not interested in her when she heard what he whispered to her when he thought that she was asleep back in her time? She was all happy when she realized that he may be interested her...so what changed now. She is always under estimating herself and Sessho which is becoming annoying. lol.

I would think the ultimate sacrifice would be giving up one's life for the good of one or all. I think that is going to have to happen to break the spell. I think it would be Kagome giving up her life since that is in her nature to be self sacrificing or it could be Sessho for Kagome out of love for her.

Looking forward to more chapters soon. I just love this story.


Lady Lynn (Chapter 13) - Fri 02 Jun 2017

What did Mikoru do to piss off Sesshomaru like that?  It must have been really bad for the eyes to go red like that.  Now things in chapter 3 makes sense.  Kikyo knew of the spell that was used on Sesshomaru, and I would not be surprised if she suggested that spell to Naraku.  Now the true question is what is the sacrifice needed to break the spell?


cassandra (Chapter 13) - Fri 02 Jun 2017

Awesome chapter.  Why do I get the feeling that miroku tried peeking in on the girls and sesshomaru caught him? I can't wait to find out! 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 12) - Sun 28 May 2017

Nice chapter. Of course it is very well written. You give us nothing but the best in your stories.

Finally, Kagome  and Sessho are moving ahead with their soon to be relationship. I am excited and can't wait for their confessions of love for one another or at least express their interest in each other.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent job!!!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 11) - Fri 26 May 2017

Very enjoyable chapter and very well written. I noticed your computer probably doubled the chapter because at the end it started all over again. But that was no problem in reading it. Doubled the pleasure in reading it again. Lol.

Man, Inuyasha and Kikyo are pieces of trashy works. They are worse than Naraku times two. I would not be suprised if they were working for him. This why Sessho and kagome are my fav pairing. You really know how to manipulate these two couples into either you love them or you hate them. In this story, Inu and Kikyo are the villans of the piece and Kagome and Sessho are the heros.

I'll be glad when Sessho grows back into his normal self. When they were back at Edo in spirit forms, Kagome did something to make Sessho look like his normal self, can she use that same spell to make him grow to normal size?

I just love your writing and imagination for storytelling. Keep up the great work and keep it going. Looking forward to future chapters.


TeaAngel (Chapter 11) - Fri 26 May 2017

Love the chapter can't wait to see what happens next. Evil inuyasha and Kikyo is cool. I love how powerful you make kagome, but at the same time keep some of her insecurities about herself.

Inuyasha did so major damage to her self-esteem made her doubt herself a lot. In the show it's wasn't intentional but he did do it. Sango and miruko, shippo helped to build it back, but i think it was really Sesshomaru who made her realize she wasn't weak.

Again keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter to come.

P.s you repeated the chapter twice he same on one page.


Lady Lynn (Chapter 10) - Mon 22 May 2017

I wonder what InuYasha plans to do.  I hope there is no seal on the well if Kagoms has the jewel shards with her, it will be counter predictive on InuYasha and kikyo' s part.  If that were the case I hope Santo and Miroku fight InuYasha and kikyo until Kagoms returns.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 May 2017

Another wonderful chapter. I'm glad Mrs. H shared with Sessho that journal of what happens to Kagome in the past when they go back. It gives food for thought so now that he has a taste of the cold mask that Kagome has placed on he does not like it because it is not her real self and it ultimately leads to her death.  So I wonder what he is going to do about it now that he knows what happens back in the past. Is he going to confess his true feelings for her or not? She would be the perfect mate for him and together the two would produce strong and powerful heirs for the west whether they be hanyou or full blood youkai. Sessho can change the fate of Kagome's life or will he? Will he stay with the pack or leave like he originally planned? Those and more questions will be asnwered in the next chapter, I hope. Lol  Great job!!!


Adrianna (Chapter 9) - Sat 13 May 2017

ahhh!!!! I'm soo excited for more of this story!! ???? Update soon! 


Mia (Chapter 9) - Sat 13 May 2017

Aaaaawwweeeeee!!! Puppy!!!!  <3


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 May 2017

Wonderful chapter. I love the way this story is evolving and the interactions that are going on with Sessho and the Higurashi family. Shame on Ji-chan for burning the scroll that will help Kagome and Sessho. Maybe there might be a duplicate somewhere, ne?

I also think the ultimate sacrifice is death. I think that Kagome might give up her life in protecting him and then the spell will be broken and if he has Tensaiga on him then he would use it to bring her back to life. I envision something horrific would him in harms way and Kagome being who the type of person she is will react without thinking and saving him at a cost of her life.

Why is Sessho refusing to call Kagome by her name? Does he not respect her as an equal or does he think that calling her by her given name would make his feelings for her more real for which he seems to be trying to avoid? What a conumdrum for these two.

I like the little tidbits that you give for the next chapter. It makes me more excited to keep reading on, not that I would stop anyway, because I enjoy reading your, oh so, excellent writing. I am so looking forward to the next chapter --- I hope you have it already written and just waiting to post it. lol  :)  (just wishful thinking).


GreyEcho (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 May 2017

O_O ! I just read everything and the preview. ack cliffs and I can't believe he burned it. I really like your fic and their interactions. . I'm interested to see how things play out. Can't wait to read the rest. :)


Aniahs (Chapter 8) - Wed 10 May 2017

This story is moving along really well! Good job, and keep the updates coming please! I'm drinking these chapters down like water! :)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 8) - Wed 10 May 2017

Another good chapter. I liked how Kagome kicked that gang's butt, too bad she got hurt in the process. But at least her and Sessho got over their misunderstandings and are back being friends again. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it going cindygirl! Oh and thanks for the updates, they are great. :)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Sat 06 May 2017

This was an excellent chapter. It delved into the emotions of Kagome's family and  Shessho got to understand Kagome at little bit more. I like his beast and he is going to push Sessho into eventually mating Kagome when the time comes. As powerful as Kagome is I think she should be able to full blood youkai pups and she would make an excellent Lady of the West and asset to Sessho.

Wonderful writing as usual and I love your stories and enjoy reading them. You are such a fantastic writer. Looking forward to the next chapter.


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