My only criticism would be that you need to pay attention to weather you are using past or present tence. You often switch between then with no pause. Past that I am enjoying you story and will wait for your next chapter.
Wonderful chapter. I loved this so far. I have not reviewed in a while and sorry about that. Your writing skills are so enchanting and wonderful as usual.
I can't wait for the next chapter, it sounds exciting. I hope Kagome does take Sessho to her time. They may even find a cure for his curse. I think it is about time Sessho starts to gain his size back soon but I know it is going to take some time. I hope that Sessho asks Kagome if he could court her while he is still small because I think it would mean more to them. I wonder what would happen if Kouga shows up making his claim on her again and how Sessho will handle it. Will Kagome do as Sessho suggested in handling those who try to dominate her and what she will do? I think she should challenge Kouga and kick his ass and make him look like a wimp.
I was just thinking that if Sessho goes to the modern era, maybe being away from his era and away from Naraku's shinanigan's might change him back to his normal size. Just a thought if it makes sense. I was also thinking that those scrolls that Jii-san gave to Kagome to read about Youkai and especially Inus actually came from Sessho when he finds out from where she really comes from and he did to help her knowing the things that were going to happen to her and he wanted to prepare her. They were either already mated or about to become mated when he wrote the scrolls for her future self. The scrolls sounded to precise and her learning how to fight may have come into play some way by way of Sessho also.
Great work!
Toni (Chapter 5) - Sun 23 Apr 2017
just finished reading all of your chapters looking forward to more really enjoying it
Oh wow! Excellent chapter as always. I thought sesshomaru might temporarily over come the curse with the extra power but what happened was even better. How and why does kagome's jii-san have such scrolls on youkai? How will the two of them act and interact now? Will sesshomaru recognize his father's lesson or just think he's had it within him all the time? What will naraku say when he finds out his strongest enemy is now even stronger and it wouldn't have been made possible without him cursing sesshomaru? Can't wait for the next chapter. Wonder if Inuyasha and kikyo will try again?
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
I can just see a Barbie sized Sessy in my mind's eye right now......and he is just sooooo cute!!!!! I wonder if the spell will eventually wear off or if it will have to be broken? I can't wait to find out. I hope that Sessy becomes nicer to Kags. I hate it when she is sad because he says hurtful and rude things to her.
Great chapter, i love how your taking us every step of the way. With kagome getting stronger and not by some trick or getting this sudden power boost. You've explained everything and taken time with each major situation so far. I also like the pace thus far, with the tachi when miroku wanted to help but not because he thought kagome couldn't do it. Also it looks like kagome has a lot to learn still with letting her pack help her. I wonder if kaede or kagome's jii-san will be able to break or know about the curse. Will they find rin on their travels and will Inuyasha try to kill sesshomaru again? Is Inuyasha under kikyo's spell?
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Ja ne
Loving this story.well written. Can't wait for next chapter.
Natalia (Chapter 3) - Sat 08 Apr 2017
The thing with healing tears was a nice touch. Incorporating fairy tales is a interesting twist! And yep sesshoumaru is stubborn and prideful, let's see what happens next.
Wonderful chapter. It is getting to be exciting now. Beautifully written and I can't wait for the next installment. Great job.
Your story sounds good so far. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Personally, if I were the rest of the group, I would leave InuYasha since he doesn't care the conditions of the group. In fact he was too busy thinking about Kikyo to even notice an attack from behind. Plus he'll continue traveling at a fast past for the humans to barely keep up with. Not only that, he'll continue to degrade them for what they are. Kagome does need to spread her wings to get stronger and better control of her powers...maybe Sango could help her with some fighting skills and Miroku can farther help Kagome with her powers, plus Shippo doesn't need that bad influence either.
I love your stories. They are always so full of detail and uniquely spun from great ideas. I love the long chapters. Alright now for questions. How did kagome know sesshomaru was in trouble or where he was? Earlier it was said he was a good distance from them. Did they sense or smell naraku's three around the area? What will inuyasha do once he sees sesshomaru? Is kagome alone saving sesshomaru?
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
Very interesting story. It is nicely written and I am being drawn into it. It has been a while since I have read anything from you. Welcome back. Your story 'Her Destiny' is still one of my favorite stories. I still read it ever so often.
Hmm, I think his saviour is Kagome. lol
Looking forward to the rest of the chapters to come. Well done as usual.
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