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Lady Lynn (Chapter 10) - Mon 22 May 2017

I wonder what InuYasha plans to do.  I hope there is no seal on the well if Kagoms has the jewel shards with her, it will be counter predictive on InuYasha and kikyo' s part.  If that were the case I hope Santo and Miroku fight InuYasha and kikyo until Kagoms returns.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 May 2017

Another wonderful chapter. I'm glad Mrs. H shared with Sessho that journal of what happens to Kagome in the past when they go back. It gives food for thought so now that he has a taste of the cold mask that Kagome has placed on he does not like it because it is not her real self and it ultimately leads to her death.  So I wonder what he is going to do about it now that he knows what happens back in the past. Is he going to confess his true feelings for her or not? She would be the perfect mate for him and together the two would produce strong and powerful heirs for the west whether they be hanyou or full blood youkai. Sessho can change the fate of Kagome's life or will he? Will he stay with the pack or leave like he originally planned? Those and more questions will be asnwered in the next chapter, I hope. Lol  Great job!!!


Adrianna (Chapter 9) - Sat 13 May 2017

ahhh!!!! I'm soo excited for more of this story!! ???? Update soon! 


Mia (Chapter 9) - Sat 13 May 2017

Aaaaawwweeeeee!!! Puppy!!!!  <3


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 May 2017

Wonderful chapter. I love the way this story is evolving and the interactions that are going on with Sessho and the Higurashi family. Shame on Ji-chan for burning the scroll that will help Kagome and Sessho. Maybe there might be a duplicate somewhere, ne?

I also think the ultimate sacrifice is death. I think that Kagome might give up her life in protecting him and then the spell will be broken and if he has Tensaiga on him then he would use it to bring her back to life. I envision something horrific would him in harms way and Kagome being who the type of person she is will react without thinking and saving him at a cost of her life.

Why is Sessho refusing to call Kagome by her name? Does he not respect her as an equal or does he think that calling her by her given name would make his feelings for her more real for which he seems to be trying to avoid? What a conumdrum for these two.

I like the little tidbits that you give for the next chapter. It makes me more excited to keep reading on, not that I would stop anyway, because I enjoy reading your, oh so, excellent writing. I am so looking forward to the next chapter --- I hope you have it already written and just waiting to post it. lol  :)  (just wishful thinking).


GreyEcho (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 May 2017

O_O ! I just read everything and the preview. ack cliffs and I can't believe he burned it. I really like your fic and their interactions. . I'm interested to see how things play out. Can't wait to read the rest. :)


Aniahs (Chapter 8) - Wed 10 May 2017

This story is moving along really well! Good job, and keep the updates coming please! I'm drinking these chapters down like water! :)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 8) - Wed 10 May 2017

Another good chapter. I liked how Kagome kicked that gang's butt, too bad she got hurt in the process. But at least her and Sessho got over their misunderstandings and are back being friends again. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it going cindygirl! Oh and thanks for the updates, they are great. :)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Sat 06 May 2017

This was an excellent chapter. It delved into the emotions of Kagome's family and  Shessho got to understand Kagome at little bit more. I like his beast and he is going to push Sessho into eventually mating Kagome when the time comes. As powerful as Kagome is I think she should be able to full blood youkai pups and she would make an excellent Lady of the West and asset to Sessho.

Wonderful writing as usual and I love your stories and enjoy reading them. You are such a fantastic writer. Looking forward to the next chapter.


Mia (Chapter 7) - Sat 06 May 2017

I absolutely love this story and how in-depth you get. Please update soon and as often as possible.


cassandra (Chapter 7) - Sat 06 May 2017

I loved this chapter.  The way she handled her unruly brother and basically knocked some sense into him was awesome!  And she was right when she told her grandpa that in order to get respect you have to earn it. That's one lesson my parents instilled in us growing up.  Anyways, keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! 


Mona (Chapter 6) - Wed 26 Apr 2017

I hope to read more soon, this is awesome.


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 5) - Mon 24 Apr 2017

My only criticism would be that you need to pay attention to weather you are using past or present tence. You often switch between then with no pause. Past that I am enjoying you story and will wait for your next chapter.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Mon 24 Apr 2017

Wonderful chapter. I loved this so far. I have not reviewed in a while and sorry about that. Your writing skills are so enchanting and wonderful as usual.

I can't wait for the next chapter, it sounds exciting. I hope Kagome does take Sessho to her time. They may even find a cure for his curse. I think it is about time Sessho starts to gain his size back soon but I know it is going to take some time. I hope that Sessho asks Kagome if he could court her while he is still small because I think it would mean more to them. I wonder what would happen if Kouga shows up making his claim on her again and how Sessho will handle it. Will Kagome do as Sessho suggested in handling those who try to dominate her and what she will do? I think she should challenge Kouga and kick his ass and make him look like a wimp.

I was just thinking that if Sessho goes to the modern era, maybe being away from his era and away from Naraku's shinanigan's might change him back to his normal size. Just a thought if it makes sense. I was also thinking that those scrolls that Jii-san gave to Kagome to read about Youkai and especially Inus actually came from Sessho when he finds out from where she really comes from and he did to help her knowing the things that were going to happen to her and he wanted to prepare her. They were either already mated or about to become mated when he wrote the scrolls for her future self. The scrolls sounded to precise and her learning how to fight may have come into play some way by way of Sessho also.

Great work!


Toni (Chapter 5) - Sun 23 Apr 2017

just finished reading all of your chapters   looking forward to more   really enjoying it 


princess of the western lands (Chapter 4) - Sun 16 Apr 2017

Oh wow! Excellent chapter as always. I thought sesshomaru might temporarily over come the curse with the extra power but what happened was even better. How and why does kagome's jii-san have such scrolls on youkai? How will the two of them act and interact now? Will sesshomaru recognize his father's lesson or just think he's had it within him all the time? What will naraku say when he finds out his strongest enemy is now even stronger and it wouldn't have been made possible without him cursing sesshomaru? Can't wait for the next chapter. Wonder if Inuyasha and kikyo will try again?

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


Katrina Kee (Chapter 3) - Sun 09 Apr 2017

I can just see a Barbie sized Sessy in my mind's eye right now......and he is just sooooo cute!!!!! I wonder if the spell will eventually wear off or if it will have to be broken? I can't wait to find out. I hope that Sessy becomes nicer to Kags. I hate it when she is sad because he says hurtful and rude things to her.


princess of the western lands (Chapter 3) - Sun 09 Apr 2017

Great chapter, i love how your taking us every step of the way. With kagome getting stronger and not by some trick or getting this sudden power boost. You've explained everything and taken time with each major situation so far. I also like the pace thus far, with the tachi when miroku wanted to help but not because he thought kagome couldn't do it. Also it looks like kagome has a lot to learn still with letting her pack help her. I wonder if kaede or kagome's jii-san will be able to break or know about the curse. Will they find rin on their travels and will Inuyasha try to kill sesshomaru again? Is Inuyasha under kikyo's spell?

 

Update soon

 

Ja ne


roberta. (Chapter 3) - Sat 08 Apr 2017

Loving this story.well written. Can't wait for next chapter.


Natalia (Chapter 3) - Sat 08 Apr 2017

The thing with healing tears was a nice touch. Incorporating fairy tales is a interesting twist! And yep sesshoumaru is stubborn and prideful, let's see what happens next.


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