I've been really struggling to get through this because there are aspects I like but the misogyny is getting too much for me combined with the obsessive alpha/pack stuff and several other things. I commend you for writing an entire fic out. I know it's hard work. And there are several cool and creative ideas in this. Like the shrinking spell and the hair ornament sword and it being midoriko's sword and some of the spells and finding miko scrolls and her taking up sewing and just several things.
But I just can't. Every single character is completely OOC and just getting more and more OOC. One aspect I like about the OG work is how strong the main female characters were and how everyone recognized that they were strong and how much agency they had. Especially kagome and the way people she encountered changed their world view to see women as more equal despite the era instead of her conforming to their world view. And this constantly feels like she is just being a pick me girl "not like every other girl!!1!1" as if other girls are weak. Og kagome would argue women are strong not that she is a special case which means she is conforming to their world view. I just can't stick with it. Sorry
Jamesly (Chapter 32) - Wed 16 Jun 2021
That was one heck of a Rollercoaster ride and I loved it. There was some interesting OOC moments that made the story all the better. Thank you for your amazing work and for sharing!
I loved it from start to finish. Thank you for writing it.
Shelly (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Dec 2019
Grate start to your story. Sesshomaru is a jerk as always.
Shelly (Chapter 16) - Fri 27 Dec 2019
I like your imagination and how the story is moving alone. I'm one of those readers that likes Sesshomaru without a tail. I think, to put a tail on him makes Sesshomaru look like a normal youkai. I mean, that a lot of the youkai have tails or other animal body part. Sesshomaru having a MokoMoko-sama, gives him an air of other worldly to his look.
Thanks for writing your story. I'm really enjoying reading it.
Konokarei should have told Asumi that Souta is not his son, it's great that Souta knows the truth, but it's not right Asumi is living a life, lies is no a good thing in marriages! The story was amazing and the ending was lovely!
This chapter was wonderful!
This chapter was HOT! I'm glad Inuyasha finally learned his lesson, Jaken is about get whats coming to him from Sesshomaru!
Wonderful chapter.
Inuyasha got his butt kick!
I'm glad Kagome and Sesshomaru finally admitted their feelings to each other.
Koga got what he deserved!
Don't mess with Kagome.
Inuyasha is still delusional!
Another good chapter.
Good riddance to Hakudoshi!
The fight is on.
Kagome needs to stop doubting herself!
Nice chapter.
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