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Mutnodjmet (Chapter 24) - Sat 19 Aug 2017

Wow I love how Kagome took take care of Inuyasha, she kicked ass. Of course he is not going to give up so I think she might have to take him out. She has already warned him that she might kill him if he comes back.

I wish that Sessho just go ahead and tell Kagome how he feels about her and of what his plans for their future. He told her in the dream realm. Just because he is small does not make any difference and he should know it will make Kagome feel good and give her hope. I think he is letting his pride get in the way...now that is being selfish.

Excellent chapter. Looking forward to more chapters soon.


Annie (Chapter 24) - Fri 18 Aug 2017

WOW! WOW! WOW!. I am so happy for Kagome. She is such a fierce Alpha. I am glad that she told Inuyasha that he is no longer welcome in their pack. It served him right. He was never a true Alpha only a selfish man who only thought of himself. I'm glad that she doesn't  trust him. I can't wait for the next chapter.  You are an amazing writer. Please update when you have the chance.


Lauren (Chapter 11) - Tue 15 Aug 2017

The concept of this story is great, and the characterizations are only a little exaggerated (for the type of story this is), but the story definitely needs to be proof read. Your tense usage is off, and there are several portions of the story, so far, where the reader can tell that you jotted down notes but forgot to insert dialogue in the plac of the notes once you began writing.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 23) - Fri 11 Aug 2017

Wonderful chapter. Things are moving along quite well considering the circumstances. Glad both packs are together now and hopefully Kagome and Sessho's relationship in the real world will be a little more telling now that they had their talk in their alternate reality.

Since their dreams are more than likely an alternate reality and Kagome's mating mark is starting to show in the real world, if she became pregnant while in their alternate dream world then she would most likely start to show signs of the pregnancy in the real world and would imagine that if Sessho has not returned to his normal size yet this could become a problem maybe for the couple? Just a thought.

So when Inuyasha returns he is probably going to try to re-insert himself back as Alpha. Kagome is not going to be backing down and will have to either subdue him or take him out...lol. Either way Yasha is not going to have his way...el baka...lol

If Sessho was able to break the spell that was placed on Kagome's returning soul why can he not break the curse on himself in the same way he did hers?

Love this story and looking forward to more chapters soon. Excellent writing.


cassandra (Chapter 22) - Thu 03 Aug 2017

Yikes, looks like they really messed up this time. I hope kagome forgives them and decides to let them stay! Although I can understand why she was so mad. I know  I would be mad if my kid got hurt on someone else's watch! 


SammyJams (Chapter 21) - Fri 28 Jul 2017

i hope all the incarnations die!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 21) - Thu 27 Jul 2017

Sorry I meant my previous review for chapter 21.  LoL  :)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Thu 27 Jul 2017

Fantastic chapter. It was very exciting and loved the battle scenes...cannot wait for part two of the battle. Kagome is kicking some ass and that's the way I like it. Gosh I wish Sesshomaru will get back to his normal self soon. What an awesome team the two of them will make...not that they make a great team now but I would like to see them work together while he is in his regular form.

Looking forward to future chapters. Great writing and great job!!!!


cassandra (Chapter 21) - Thu 27 Jul 2017

This chapter is just full of awesomeness! From her talking to the trees and forming her own cloud. I think cloud travel would be an awesome way to get around. The battle is pretty action packed too. I can't wait to see what happens next! 


FireDragon (Chapter 21) - Thu 27 Jul 2017

This is awesome I am really enjoying this story though I am afraid Kagome is becoming too powerful to believe. hopefully we will get an explanation as to why is so powerful. Isn't she human? looking forward to more.


Rambo (Chapter 20) - Sun 23 Jul 2017

So I have been reading your story for hours straight now and was SO disappointed when I realized I've made it to the last chapter. I am very sucked in and was very ready to dedicate my entire day to this story. I love it so much and will be adding this to my faves. Can't wait for the next update!


SammyJams (Chapter 20) - Sat 22 Jul 2017

This is by far my favorite fan fiction - and I've read thousands! I can't wait for more chapters!!!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 20) - Fri 21 Jul 2017

This was an informative and fascinating chapter. It gave more insight into Kagome's powers. If Naraku has been trying to mess with Kagome's mind through her dreams could it be possible that he has been creating those dreams of her and Sessho together...nah I don't think so. He wants to destroy her love for Sessho not help to increase it.

With Kagome's sudden interest in the heart and liver of her kills all of a sudden and her need for raw meat...since she has had finally had sex with Sessho in her dream world, is it possible that she could get pregnant? I know that is sounds silly but their dream world together seems awfully real because there seems to be some after effects during their interactions with one another. I only bring this up because I read a fic where the author used a method that Sessho used to get Kagome pregnant by going into her dreams but he never let himself be known to her (I don't remember the name or author of this story). It seems like an interesting concept. I would love to see this effect happen here...it would be fascinating in this story...it would cause all kinds of misunderstandings and the like...just in my dreams...LOL

Kagome is needed to defeat Naraku so there cannot be that kind of distraction anyway. Besides your story is wonderful the way it is and I's sure you already have it outlined the way you want it to go and end

Loved the chapter and as usual well written. Looking forward to the next update from one of my favorite fic writers.  :)


FireDragon (Chapter 20) - Fri 21 Jul 2017

awesome story so far looking forward to more.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 19) - Thu 13 Jul 2017

Great chapter.  Inuyasha is as stupid as stupid can be. What can he gain by almost killing Kagome? He certainly would not get her to submit, mate her and have pups with her if she is dead...that's why he is so stupid...well he did mate a dead woman so that proves it.

I know that Sessho is at his regular normal size in the dream sequence but do they remember their dreams or what happens in them? I love the scene where Sessho almost gives up his life to save Kagome...now that is real love..will they remember this?

I will be glad when Sessho gets back to his normal size in the real world so that he can claim Kagome and mate her but I suppose that is so far down the road in chaptersville.  lol  Looking forward to that chapter and of course the others to come.

Fantastic writing.!!!

 


FireDragon (Chapter 19) - Thu 13 Jul 2017

What a great update.  I am very much looking forward to more.  Though I am excited about when they are finally going to find Koga.  I am wondering if he will respect her telling him that or if he is going to try and fight her to become her alpha male? and How Sesshoumaru will deal with Koga. This is a good story.  (Though I am growing to hate Inuyasha in this, Kikio too)  One thing about making the woman submitt does sound a lot like rape but I don't think it is meant to?  Maybe it is supposed to show the other how strong they can be a what a good protector they would be but...still it is hard to read that and not think that demons who want to mate must end up raping eachother sometimes? isn't there anything the Female can do if the male is stronger and she still dosn't want to mate?


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 19) - Thu 13 Jul 2017

When will Sesshoumar go back to his regular size? Is it soon? Please!


Dedge (Chapter 19) - Thu 13 Jul 2017

Is he big? Was that scene in a dream? I'm confused but it was hot!!!


KagomeTashio (Chapter 18) - Fri 07 Jul 2017

Loving the stor.  The plot is thrillin.  Howeve, one little comment on who would know more about youK.  Sa go is a hunter of youk, while Miroku is only a monk.  I think she would be the one who might educate the monk more than the other way aroun.


FireDragon (Chapter 18) - Thu 06 Jul 2017

what a sad heart breaking chapter.  I hope Shippou realizes that Kagome was trying to protect him, as far as inuyasha and Kikio are concerned I am kind of getting sick of seeing them. he has betrayed Kagome in the worst way and tried to kill her if he wasn't needed in the final battle with Naraku I would just suggest them both going the way of the Dodo. LOL yah so. can we at least get rid of Kikio? ultimately whatever you decide I am looking forward to more. even if it has more Inu and Kikio.


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