I would love to see Kagome upend Moon towers and Inuyasha and give them a good shake.
Love how she went at him. And she still hadn't gotten the truth from him before Sesshoumaru interrupted. If the handle demon employees, and this is supposed to stay a company secret, why wouldn't they tell her? Can't wait to see what happens next.
I hope you follow through with this story I'm loving it already!!!! Keep up the good work. I'm glad you didn't have kagome believe that crap from inuyasha.
I am interested in seeing where you take your story. It seems intriguing. It is nicely written but I see this mistake in a lot of fanfiction stories: woman is singular for one lady and women is plural for more than one or several ladies. Good start and a job well done. Looking forward to more chapters and I hope you do not abandon this story but keep it going.
Interesting start. Can't wait to see how he expands not stopping by to say hello.
Super excited for the next chapter.
Nallely (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Sep 2016
New story yey! Nice chapter. Hope you keep going.
Toni (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Sep 2016
Great can't wait for the next chapter
Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Sep 2016
It's woman singular and women plural. It kept bugging me like a mosquito. You use women when it should be woman one female kagome. In rest good job. Curious for more.
Latoya (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Sep 2016
Good first chapter, I like how you evolved Kagome's character. Going back to school and instead of failing but exceling in school. I look forward to the next chapter.
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