I have read this story before. did you decide to edited an updated it's been a long time I hope you do finish it this time
This was a very touching and emotional chapter concerning Kagome's reunion with Shippo. It was very nicely written.
I like how you are developing Shippo's character. Hm, I wonder what Sessho's trying to hide from Kagome already. I also am wondering if Shippo married Rin??? In the feudal era, Shippo would never had gotten away with talking to Sesshomaru the way he did let alone giving him a vailed threat like the one he just gave. Ah...the plot thickens. lol
Your overall writing style, in my opinion, has been developing nicely. Keep up the excellent work you are putting into your stories. I am enjoying reading this story and can hardly wait for the next chapter to come and the next, and the next and the next, etc., etc. you get my drift...lol :)
Glad that she got to reunite with Shippo. I wonder what they're keeping from her though...
pretty interesting~ I'd like to see where it goes, please update soon!
Oh my gosh! More please!
So Shippo finally makes his appearance. Now the fun begins. I had to start over again from chapter one to catch up. Both chapters two and three were nicely written.
You would think by now, into the 21st century, that Sessho would have some kind of manners and not just drag Kagome off somewhere without telling her where he is taking her. He could have said something like 'I have a suprise for you or there is someone who would like to see you' instead of being a barbarian. I think he did it to get a rise out of her - teasing her. He knows how to push her buttons and deep down he missed and loves her. lol :)
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