Your story is unique. I really enjoy it!

OK first is kagome the boys mother? If so why doesn't she know?

E una storia  che mi coinvolge  già spero  che aggiorni al piu prestò.

You've got me hooked....

Yes, do please continue! My curiosity has been stirred on WHY Kagome's "friends" should act this way.

And Shippo....his actions made it even more confusing.  

Looking forward to more.

Como desarrollaste la historia es muy interesante.

Sesshomaru tiene un hijo con los ojos rojos.......la mami no es kagura no?.....

Y los amigos de Kagome se comportan raro,,,,,, y ella no podia recordarse del nombre del pequeño yokai?  Que raro?

Que paso realmente en el Rio donde casi muerte si no fuese por nuestro demonio favorito? 

Espero que nos des las respuesta pronto en el desarrollo de la historia......desde este primer kapitulo. ...hasta el capitulo 21?.......que sería el final?????........????

Yo espero con impaciencia que va a pasar,,,,,,,,Ojala pronto!

I wonder what's going on with Kagome. Story started off mysterious and interesting. I like it~

Will be looking out for it weekly.

P.S. You're off to a good start, but maybe get a beta to help organize the paragraphs... or you could do it. Whichever suits your fancy. Take your time with this story! Make us feel the emotions with beautiful words~ lol

Great fanfic but there is only one flaw.  If it's been eight years since Kagome has seen Sesshoumaru, how is that his son resembles a seven year old child, if that's the case he looks older than Shippo who is older.  The youkai in this anime age differently than humans.