I can't imagine as things sit, being in the village will be a healthy situation for Kagome. She will leave as soon as possible and try again until she succeeds or has a reason to live. I'm really enjoying Katai.
Oh wow, Kagome is dealing with some seriously depressing stuff. No wonder she has given up on life. I do hope she soon finds a reason to live. Katai seems like a perfect reason to me. I do hope she also finds love again. She desperately needs it.
So far I am loving this story and I can wait to read more. Its nice to know its already finished as well. I look forward to the next update. I really want to know what Inuyasha's reaction to the news of Kagome will be.
Great chap
Mona (Chapter 3) - Fri 26 Aug 2016
I wish you could update sooner.
Marie (Chapter 3) - Fri 26 Aug 2016
Aaaaaahhhhhh! An entire week,u don't need that much time to update. Gggrrr! Fine ill wait, I guess, lol!
Lorena (Chapter 3) - Fri 26 Aug 2016
Oh man, this is so chaotic! I want so many things to happen! Naturally, if Kagome tries to get better that would be great, but it seems the dynamic has changed and I can't picture it in my 1d imagination. I'm not sure why buy I felt bad when Kagome got angry at Katai, it seemed like if she stayed he could embrace her like a mother figure. Anyways, I look forward to the next chapter!
Chapters two and three was very nicely written. They were fascinating and insightful into the dynamics behind the relationship between Sessho and Kagura; also the feelings of Katai were brought out. I like how Katai is developing feelings for Kagome in the hopes of having a mother and son relationship. Since this is a S/K site, I hope that Kagome and Sessho will eventually start developing feelings for one another and that they can mate and have a set of full blood youkai twins, a boy and a girl with incredible powers (I know...so cliche'). Anyway that will take time and I enjoy reading this story.
Excellent job and looking forward to future chapters on this fascinating tale.
I'm obsessed with this story. Please update soon!
Please hurry and update (rubbing hands together) lol ^_^
Sparkle (Chapter 2) - Fri 12 Aug 2016
Great second chapter. Eager to read the next installment.
Lorena (Chapter 2) - Fri 12 Aug 2016
Wow! I see he has his mind made up on Kagome, b but I wonder what Sesshomaru has in store for her. I forgot the time difference, socially speaking, up until Kagome brought up why she is so depressed/suicidal... I wish her ending will not be so soon
Lorena (Chapter 2) - Fri 12 Aug 2016
Wow! I see he has his mind made up on Kagome, b but I wonder what Sesshomaru has in store for her. I forgot the time difference, socially speaking, up until Kagome brought up why she is so depressed/suicidal... I wish her ending will not be so soon
Eva (Chapter 2) - Fri 12 Aug 2016
I'm really enjoying this story. The three of them need each other more than they realise. I'm looking forward to reading more when you have time.
Vey good story. Unique and entralling. So Kagura tricked Sessho into impregnating her. For what she did and tried to do she got what she deserved. To sleep with someone that was created by something as vile as Naraku would have freaked me out and disgusted me. She had the blood of Naraku in her, that would mean that Katai would have some of Naraku's blood in him. Gross but then the child never chooses who his parents would be. Katai is not a true inuyoukai then. It seems the only feature he got from Kagura was the red eyes which I never liked...too much like Naraku's. But I like little Katai, he is so much like Sessho in mannerisms.
It looks like Katai is going to latch on to Kagome as a mother figure. How will Sessho and Kagome feel about that? If Inuyasha tossed Kagome away because he is not much of a man and too chicken shit to involve himself with Kagome any more, then he shouldn't care if she finds happiness else where and he also shouldn't care with whom. His loss.
This a very well written story and fell in love with it already. I hope you continue the story and not give it up before finishing it. Looking forward to more chapters soon. Excellent piece of writing thus far.
I'm very excited it's so sad about kagome though. I was so shocked about kagura I never expected that. I can't wait to see how katai hoes about trying to keep kagome around
Mona (Chapter 2) - Thu 11 Aug 2016
I hope you can update again soon, this is a great fanfic so far.
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