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Koree (Chapter 21) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

AMAZING !! I definitely didn't expect for Kagome to die much less Sesshomaru because he was a Yokai but she lived a long & happy life with more children she could ask for , and Sesshkmaru finally found love they died knowing the other loved them deeply though it wasn't said itvwas  tragically beautiful i really enjoyed your story it was sad ,funny , & beautiful all at once definitely in my top five !! Thank you for sharing such a delight with us & i hope to read another from you soon :)

Eva (Chapter 21) - Sat 04 Mar 2017

Such a beautiful bittersweet end too a lovely story. I can just imagine Kagome trying to hide from an amorous Inu. Thanks for sharing your muse with us.

Zauberer di Vent (Chapter 21) - Tue 28 Feb 2017

When I read this kind of stories, where Sesshoumaru is still taciturn but it is really beautiful to see him as a mate, faithful and protective, a proud father, is touching.


But your story has earned a very special place with this final. I do not know exactly why, I mean, I have read similar stories in that Kagome maintains her same lifetime and he is left alone and with their children. But this final, that part, made me cry.

It was special, it broke my heart, although in a good way. It was bittersweet, but I do not regret having read it and having shed a few tears, it was a perfect ending

Thank you for your story.

Valasaurus (Chapter 21) - Sun 26 Feb 2017

So sad its over!! But I'm beyond happy that they all ended up having such happy lives.

Debra (Chapter 21) - Sat 25 Feb 2017

This was my first time reading your story, and I have to say I loved it! How you had Kagome and Sesshoumaru grow so close and eventually fall in love was beautiful. The ending was sad, but again beautiful in how much he truly loved her.

i do think you made Inuyasha's situation much better then it probably would have been though. Since the village people only came to accept him due to Kagome. People where a lot quicker to "throw stones" then. I imagine that the village would have seen Aya as a whore and the baby a bastard. They most like would have reverted to their dislike of him. I can see Miroku being more accepting, but Sango would not have taken to the woman so quickly, especially after she heard the story. Since she would have seen the woman as a whore.

I mean Aya slept with a drunkard she didn't know anything about supposedly, while she was completely sober. Though she later says she knew the hanyou had a wife, plus everyone already knew of him and his miko through their travel, and this was the Hanyou she was seeking. So I don't think she was actually being honest, and in fact deserved the whore label, but that's just me.

Either way I really enjoyed your story!

Mirage (Chapter 21) - Sat 25 Feb 2017

Omg that made me cry. That was so sad and so beautiful. And I have never seen am ending like that. Omg I love it. T-T

Kanda (Chapter 17) - Wed 22 Feb 2017

can we pleeease have a chapter in Sesshounaru's pov? and hey, what about more of his past? i don't think we ever got to know more about how his father had a connection to the gods and stuff.

Miladyknight (Chapter 21) - Wed 22 Feb 2017

Thank you, ????, I liked it.  Nothing is ever needed unless YOU Truely feel that it is.  

Kanda (Chapter 4) - Wed 22 Feb 2017

I did a loud unintentional "AWWAHUGH" sound when i read how Sesshoumaru hugged Katai after falling. people are sleeping. oops. XD

Kanda (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Feb 2017

as much as i hate kagura, i LOVE katai so much. omfg, he's so adorably and hilariously blunt. XD

Nile (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

Really beautiful story. Well done. 

T (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

I was pleasantly surprised and pleased with this ending. It was very fitting for this story. The fact that Kagome didn't just live forever, Session never said I love you but he died from a broken heart. Well done

Lady Amalthea (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

It's bitterseet, the ending, but if there's always a happy ending, we never really appreciate the love story.  Great read.  Thank you.

Mio-sama (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

Muy linda historia!! Atrapante hasta el final :)

Nicole (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

Beautiful story! The end was great everyone has them living till the present but I think this was perfect for the story. 2 thumbs-up!

Sessygurl (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

Congratulations! I think it was a lovely ending. I love Katai. He was definitely one if my favorites. Kagome definitely didn't lack for children. At least that made her happy. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.

The-infamous-one (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

God ,what a way to end it!  My eyes just won't stop leaking lol.  Beautiful story.   Though I'm sad it's over

Lorena (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

I absolutely did not expect that ending,  but I'm beyond pleased by it. I truly haven't read a clean ending lIke that in a while and despite my sadness that they are both dead,  both the story behind the births and Sesshomaru's bittersweet story made me content enough that I know I can read this multiple times without becoming bored in the future

Darknessdawns (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

Wow hun, you left me in tears yet again. Honestly, you did really well with this entire story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end, even though I'm not a fan of angst. I didn't truly see anything that needs too much work. You have a style of your own and it will change and evolve as you continue writing. That's about the only thing I can tell you. I'm sure there are better writers than I that can give you better advice. Either way you should do what makes you happy and whatever flows best for you. After all, we're all different. 


I would also like to thank you for writing the story. Though, it was sadder than I generally prefer.  The plot was different from any other I have read, and your original characters were well written. I also, truly enjoyed how you ended the story. You wrapped everything up nicely and even brought me to tears again. I do hope you continue to write more for this pairing. Though I hope the next is happier.

MythMagykFae (Chapter 21) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

How beautiful! I've heard of elderly couples like that, when one goes so too will the other. Its as heartbreaking as it is romantic. Great way to end this!

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