I'm little lost was this like a filler before kablooie! Definitely a good fill in but dang I fill like a cat that can't catch the string. Waiting on the next chapter

Its reading nice. I hope they have a child before she ends up with sesshomaru. Anyway I love how you've kept the personalities simular. It's a great story

It just seems so weird.  Things just don't change in a snap.  It certainly does nothing to erase all that happened.  Its just weird.

I'm very curious about that girl that wanted to talk to him.  Did he have some sort of relationship with him that he's hiding?  

I rather wonder if that hotel is going to pay a part in this.  Can't wait to find out 

Inuyasha can do something really stupid to mess the relationship up. 

Loved it! The way Takai acts is so fun to read, he is such an interesting mix of conflict. His Dad's expectations and personality, mixed with the fact that he is a child still, that he wants a mom even if he hasnt said so, and that he isnt sure who he will be makes it interesting to read as he changes. (:

It was great to get to know Sango's family more too, getting a clearer idea of the kids, and of the now teenaged Shippo was cool.

I look forward to more!

The mysterious woman who moved to village with her father a year ago smells like trouble.  She came to see Inuyasha and her stuttering might count for her nervousness and shyness, which tells me she might have a crush.  Since this is a Sessh/Kag fic I bet Inuyasha is going to screw up by cheating.

Really good story, I'm just eager to see the start of Sessh and Kags relationship.

It's cool to see some of Kagura's lineage in him. Even if we know its there he is nothing like her in personality, having some of her powers is a nice touch (:

Yeah leading more into the story I like it can't stand all the cliff it's but a good story has them can wait for the update..... sooner please

Yes good chap

This was a very interesting chapter. If Katai is the equivalent of a six or seven year old, why is Sessho preparing to send him out on his own at such a young age. I would think he would as least keep him until he reaches adult age or has reached his maturity. In this story is Sessho still Lord of the west and should'nt he be teaching Katai the duties of being a Lord if he is his heir? I don't quite understand why he is rushing his child to grow up, it's almost like he wants to get rid of him. Katai still has a lot to learn about life. I get the impression that Sessho wants Kagome to take over being a mother to Katai for some reason.

Great job, looking forward to the next chapter. Love the story.

Gooooo Kataiii you can do it...

Well..... Inuyasha fcked up only in one chapter... That goes his chances...

Still waiting for the sesskag fluffiness and kagtai parental kawaii interactions...

Keep writing!!!

P.S. Is it possible that you are planning to make kagome pregnant by being with sesshy when he is in heat or she is in heat? If you do... Then make it a girl....

Just random thoughts 0w0)b 

Un altro capitolo bellissimo, scrivi molto bene mi piacerebbe che aggiorni al più prestò. 

He's such a chibi version of Sesshoumaru. Love it.

Wonder if Kagome is feeling her relationship with Inu is off to a rocky redtart.

What exactly did he mean by her being in danger? Is he talking about her being suicidal or is something else going on? I hope to find out soon! 

I'm thrown off!  How slow was their dissent to the falls that Kagome's now in danger?  

That was a very good chapter. I was a bit confused at the end though. I thought Katai stripped to go in the water. However the story went from him in the water to pulling a feather from his sleeve and going to Kagome. Either way I am lookibg forward to the next chapter. I want to know what has happened. Kagome seemed much happier and stable at the beginning of the chapter.

Really good chapter! I like the glimpse of Sesshomaru parenting and thir interactions. Inuyasha continues to be an ass that no one should want to.spend their life with. Judging by the end of the chapter, his presence already can't be tolerated...the next chapters will be very interesting I think. 

Wow