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Lady T (Chapter 6) - Fri 02 Sep 2016

Love the character and relationship development. I am hoping that she gets to really lay into her so called friends for betraying her and sesshomaru as well for his comments. In a vengeful kind of way I hope they get what they deserve. She would have been better if Naraku was her "friend" at least he was honest about his evilness.

Excited for an update, love the plot, can the next up date be like the next twenty chapters?....just a thought lol


teresa daniel (Chapter 6) - Thu 25 Aug 2016

HI, I LOVE THE PLOT TO YOUR FANFIC.......DEFINATELY DIFFERENT FROM ANY I HAVE READ BEFORE....KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB YOU HAVE BEEN DOING ITS A VERY INTERESTING READ....I HOPE YOU INTEND TO COMPLETE THE WHOLE STORY.......MANY START AND DONT FINISH.........I HOPE YOU WILL BE UPDATING WEEKLY..........HINT..HINT........LOL SERIOUSLY THOUGH GREAT WRITING INMY OPINION....................................................................CANT WAIT TIL THE NEXT CHAPTER IS UP .................................TDANIEL............................................PS,,,I HOPE...... KIKYO AND INUYASHA,SANGO AND MIROKU ALL PAY FOR THERE BETRAYAL OF THE SHIKON MIKO AND I HOPE...... KAGOME CAN BRING SHIPPO AND KILALA BACK FROM THE DEAD...SINCE IN THE STORY IT SAID SHE CAN BRING PEOPLE BACK FROM THE DEAD........AND I HOPE KILALA SAYS..... SHE WILL STAY WITH KAGOME BECAUSE SANGO AND MIROKU HAD BETRAYED KAGOME ......WHEN KAGOME WAS NOT THE REASON THEY DIED.....IT WAS INUYASHSA ,MIROKU,AND SANGO WHO NEVER OFFERED OR TRIED TO TRAIN KAGOME EVEN WHEN THEY KNEW SHE WAS FROM THE FUTURE AND HAD NEVER BEEN TRAINED SO IT WAS AS MUCH THERE FAULT AS ANYONE ELSES BECAUSE THEY WERE ALWAYS CGASING SHARDS NEVER ALLOWING HER TIME TO REALLY TRAIN.....................................................................................TDANIEL


channing (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Aug 2016

more,more,more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Wed 24 Aug 2016

This was a very good chapter. It was enthralling and Ilike how everyone is starting to bond with Kgome. Loving this story and looking forward to future chapters. There were a few grammatical errors but it did not detract from the story in my opinion. It is well written. Great job!


Violla (Chapter 6) - Wed 24 Aug 2016

Bellissimo spero che aggiorna più presto possibile. Waw  da vero bello. 


Lady Lynn (Chapter 6) - Wed 24 Aug 2016

The plot thickens indeed, what other twist and turns are coming?


roberta. (Chapter 6) - Wed 24 Aug 2016

Quite enjoyable


Lady Lynn (Chapter 5) - Thu 11 Aug 2016

I wonder about the book at the Western Palace, how is she going to attain that with her being wanted for the murders of the 7 villages.  Will she have to fight Sango and Miroku, if they died and are part of the army of the demanded, I bet that will be a huge wake up call for InuYasha.  I can not wait for Kikyo to fail with the attack for the god of the undead.


Miladyknight (Chapter 5) - Mon 01 Aug 2016

New update soon?  I like this story and look forward to more.


teresa daniel (Chapter 5) - Fri 15 Jul 2016

HI , I LOVE THE FANFIC SO FAR........GOOD PLOT FOR THE STORY...............I HOPE YOU WILL BE UPDATING OFTEN...........PEOPLE START AND DONT FINISH FANFICS TO MUCH THESE DAYS..........................HOPE TO SEE MANY MORE NEW CHAPTERS UP REALLY SOON..............................................................................................TDANIEL


Katrina Kee (Chapter 5) - Fri 15 Jul 2016

Wow! Thank you for the chapter! I hope that someone draws a likeness of Kagome in her new outfits as well as her guardians!

I would just like to know if little Rin is allright in this story. Since at least ten years have pased since Kagome first came to India, I am guessing that Rin would be at least 15 years of age, if she started out as a 5 year old in this story. However, I didn't calculate how long Kagome was inside the jewel in the ocean. Of course when she came out of the ocean you mentioned that only a day had passed in the real world so I took that into consideration. As for the present time, 75 years have passed since Kagome left Japan so either Rin is an extremely old woman, mated a demon and got his lifespan, or she has died since then. I am pretty sure that Miroku and Sango have since died, but don't know if they have any decendents. I am just curious if Inuyasha kept in contact with them at all.

 As for the trial that Kagome is in now......I am curious as to how the demons figured out that Kagome caused all of those deaths over 75 years ago. Did she leave behind any traces of herself to account for those deaths? Will there be flashes back to the present while Kagome tells her story to the demon court? Or perhaps there will be flashes of memory during those 75 years from Lord Sesshomaru or the others?

I cannot wait to find out more!!!! Please continue soon! Thanks you so much!!! I am so glad that kagome healed those demons! I am sure that the evil one who is killing them will notice her soon!!! I hope that Japan soesn't suffer from that evil!


KEdakumi (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Jul 2016

This is such an interesting story. I love this background tale.  It makes me wonder how much detail she's going into with the demons that have put her on trial.  Can't wait to see what happens next.


zodiak023 (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Jul 2016

Awe I was so sad when I hit the last chappy and I couldn't go to the next cause there is no more please please *begs* update really soon like now. This is very good!


Mona (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Jul 2016

I hope to read more soon, I'm curious as to Saisei and Misuto's reaction will be of each other.


roberta. (Chapter 5) - Wed 13 Jul 2016

Great story thanks for update..


Fubuki (Chapter 5) - Wed 13 Jul 2016

Do you by any chance know another writer by the name of Fenikkusuken?

I have enjoyed the story so far, please keep it up


Lady Lynn (Chapter 4) - Tue 05 Jul 2016

How is Kagome going to get the other book that is the Western palace?  With Inuyasha's 'claim' that she 'died', it will be interesting to she how she will manage such a feat.


Zinhle (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Jul 2016

This story is captivating thank you. Please make the chapters longer?


Katrina Kee (Chapter 4) - Sun 03 Jul 2016

Gosh I am crying due to Kagome's betrayal by her so-called friends and companions! Did Sesshomaru go along with it as well, or did he just leave before everyone started coming after Kagome for the jewel? I would think that he wouldn't care too much one way or the other except to tell Kagome while she was at the river's edge that if she had stayed in the village with Shippo then he wouldn't have died....he could have just taken the jewel from her then it he really wanted to I guess.

Well, since it has been 75 years I am sure that Sango and Miroku are dead, but is Rin still alive? Unless she mated a demon and, in this fic, can share his lifespan, then I guess she is either very very old or else she has died as well. Too bad. I would think that she wouldn't believe that Kagome indaverently killed Shippo and Kilara. Rather, Inuyasha, by running off to Kikyo in the heat of the battle, killed them and injured Kagome in the process as well. Only nobody accused him of anything.

I cannot wait to read more on this story and see if there is a love interest in Kagome's future in this story. Thanks.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Fri 01 Jul 2016

This story is just getting so intriguing and I am so excited to read more. You're just not putting up the next chapters fast enough for me. lol (just kidding). Seriously I can hardly wait for the next chapter to post. I just so love this tale. I hope you finish it and please don't leave it hanging like so many other authors do but it's understandable. RL happens, priorities change and some just lose interest themselves. But this story is well written and it is something different. Excellent job!


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