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Jacqui (Chapter 13) - Wed 02 May 2018

Awesome Story!! I really do appricate a the time you put into this story!!


Jessica (Chapter 13) - Sun 29 Apr 2018

Oh thank you so much for writing on this. This story is so good I hope you write more soon. 


Jean (Chapter 13) - Fri 27 Apr 2018

What a wonderful story, I love it! Wonderful characters and original plot. I love the detailed writing also. Can't wait to see what will happen next!


Toni (Chapter 13) - Wed 25 Apr 2018

can't wait for the next chapters   great story  


Lady Lynn (Chapter 13) - Tue 24 Apr 2018

I was re reading the chapter and more questions popped up.  First off, how could Kagome's former friends could tell if the reiki blast was Kagome's reiki since Kikyo did kill her. Even their 'story' had holes in it to be believable if the person was in their right mind to question it...but with the circumstances I can see where they failed to question the poisoned tale.

How is Sesshomaru going to handle the fact that InuYasha lied about several things and tied the west to these lies.  Its not going to to help the west or Sesshomaru's reputation at all.  Plus of the fact that Kikyo conveniently left the throne room to save her hide and didn't care in the least about her mate's safety nor Sesshomaru's safety either.

When the dai youkai from Japan finally meet the rest of the surviving youkai...the scrutiny Sesshomaru will face when they really nitpick his 'explanations' of the past and of course InuYasha's mouth isn't going to help  matters either.

 


Darkness living in Hope (Chapter 13) - Mon 23 Apr 2018

OMG! You are an amazing writer. I read your story in a day and lost sleep cause of it but it was so worth it! The way you wrote all your character and how you describe them was very easy to picture them want they would love like. (Saisei is my favourite guardian) I love the way you told of kagomes travels and how she was all over the world. 

I hope you update soon. We all want to know what’s going to happen to inuyasha and kikyou. And how the Japan youkai all handle the information the kagome has given them 


Lady Lynn (Chapter 13) - Sat 21 Apr 2018

InuYasha, you have no idea how much trouble you are in.  Don't except Kikyo to be there to bail you out since she didn't help her or your case by running away from the commotion. 

I wonder if InuYasha realized the huge amount of trouble he put the west in because of his lies.  Sesshomaru should had also put Kikyo under house arrest as well...but her being the dark 0ne's champion it will be difficult.

I hope Sesshomaru does the right thing.

 


Kat (Chapter 13) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

I absolutly love this story please please keep writing!!!!!!


Shayna Hilderbrand (Chapter 13) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

I am so happy you updated this story! I read your newly added chapters pretty much non-stop. I'm excited to read more. It's amazing how it has turned out.  Thank you!!


SmilingFool (Chapter 13) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Oh my gosh just when it was getting good....  You gave a cliffy....  Why oh why????  Boo hoo wanted to read more.  I wonder what Sesshomaru's mother has to say...  Oh by the way when you write youkai it is like writing sheep even if it is more than one you don't write sheeps or sheep's.  The correct spelling is youkai for both single or multiple.  Just wanted you to know, I don't do flamers or anything to that nature but I did want you to know.

Update soon please.


Mishi8 (Chapter 13) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Love your story, I think this is the third time I've re-read it. It's well written and obviously thoroughly thought out which I find refreshing. It's been harder and harder to find good stories lately. I hope you are able to update again soon! Thank you!


channing (Chapter 13) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Damn i want more,   How gone leave it just hang right there.     Man.       More more more,   Really enjoying this story.   Please continue and great work.


Zeelian (Chapter 11) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

A more correct translation for "City of Hope" into a Norse/scandinavian version would probably be "Hoppets Stad".
"Hoppas Stad" would become more like "the jumping's city" (ie sounds pretty redicoulus).
Jump and Hope becomes wery similar as both are "Hopp" in their base form, "Hoppa" is "to jump" while "Hoppet" is both "the hope" and "that jump" (as in that specific jump).
"Hoppets Stad" would mean both "City of Hope" and "That jump's city" but the latter wouldn't make any sense so it wouldn't be interpreted that way.


Cheyanna (Chapter 13) - Wed 18 Apr 2018

I’m super excited!!!! I can’t to read more!!! Thank you for the awesome updates!!! I loved how Kagome just made them all aware of just who they were dealing with! 


Fubuki (Chapter 13) - Wed 18 Apr 2018

Ahhhh! Thankyou, I enjoyed the glut of reading I scored this morning, I noticed a few spelling errors, but in the enjoyment of getting lost in your world, I didn't really care, as I could and did ignore them.  Looking forward to some more somewhat soonish

Fubuki/Rosemarie


Natalia (Chapter 13) - Wed 18 Apr 2018

You'll have to firgfor me for not reviewing every chapter. My phone is weird and I am having problems typing. Also I have one hungry son next to me. 

I enjoyed it a lot and am happy the plot finally reached the present so to say. I am very eager to read more even though you spoiled us with a few chapters at once. I was cracking up at Kagome's speech. This one indeed.

And wonder what the lady mother wants?

Thx for the multiple update.

Glad you feel better. Thanks for still writing despite your struggles.

Take care!


333Tenshi (Chapter 9) - Sun 01 Apr 2018

I would do anything to be able to read more of this story.


SammyJams (Chapter 9) - Sun 25 Mar 2018

Please please update! I need more! This story is amazing!


Dryft (Chapter 9) - Tue 13 Mar 2018

this story is amazing!


Queen Taisho (Chapter 9) - Thu 07 Dec 2017

This. story. is. BOMB!!!!


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