Another good chapter! I am enjoying your story and I like your Kagome although this chapter I felt did her a disservice as she accepted and forgave way to quickly. So anytime he gets angry, hurt or misunderstands he has a free pass to emotionally torment her and consider sleeping with others? For me his answer (read excuse) wasn't good enough to warrant her easy capitulation and the whole situation kinda diminished them for me, especially Kagome. It seems like shes setting herself up again. I know you stated not all is fixed but I thought that a bit too accepting for what she just went through. You certainlly added some drama :). I hope you don't mind me sharing my thoughts. Keep up the good work!
I believe Kagome forgave him too fast!!! I know she has a forgiving nature and all but, that kind of stuff hurts you and stays with you even if you know it was not true, you still remember it. Should have let Sesshou endure a bit more! Not like too much angst or anything but a little wouldn't hurt! Can't wait for the next chapter.
This was amazing. Can't wait for more
Sesshy you imbecile!!!!! Ugh he better not go too far or I swear I will kill him.
I LOVE Inuyasha in this chapter.
Amazlong work and I cannot wait for the update!
I believe it will be Sango because her village was destroyed and she was a true warrior. I do believe Rin will return, though. Who else would mate Shippo?!
Woah that is cool! I know riku is evil but that is a neat ability. Also, love that Guin enjoys both genders. Make for a funny few times!
Wow. I like that she would let them be together. I am really liking sesshy mate!
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i like her.
like a lot.
Inuyasha gonna be her mate now?
This Riku dude is pissing me off. Also, his little slutbag is pathetic, too. I can't wait for them to get what's coming to them!
Oooo where did he get the gem?! Who is he?! LWKNFRWJBF
NEXT CHAPTER!!
HAHA I love the part about Sesshy's hair. Absolutely delightful!
I am SOOOOO pissed about the bear demon's family, though. That is freaking stupid... I understand it's part of the story... but makes me HATE the mikos and monks that did it! DEATH TO THEM!!!!
OWFNRWOIEFERWB
WTF.
Okay I love Miroku being back. I can totally understand where his frustration is coming from... and now I'm sad we won't see Sango or Kohaku or Rin... But where is Kirara? Did she die, too? Also, OW for Shippo's tails. OW. Poor Shippo....
WHO DOES HE HAVE TO ASK?! SESSHY, GET ON WITH IT, ALREADY!!!!
.....daichi's and miroku are going to be a BAD combo lol!!
i love that motoki is back! Loving the story!
Well that is a downright awesome future!!! The nice one, I mean. I am loving this story!!
After rereading the chapter, both Kagome and Sesshomaru made huge assumptions about one another. While it's true relationships do have trail periods from time to time, both need to work communication to make this work.
I still say the riddle from last chapter is talking about Sango. It help Miroku out to be with Sango. I feel like for Rin's riddle...well part of it would go, 'A place where daughter helped heal hear father'...or something like that. I just hope Sesshomaru is able to handle the disappointment if Rin is not the one revived.
For Sesshomaru to call Kagome a whore is asking for trouble. I just hope he doesn't take it future to where it will take a long time to fix it.
Ugh stupid mate. Why can't she just.... Die or something?!
Oh. This is just too awesome!!!
I LOVE Shippo!!!
Hmmmm I wonder what your plans are...
i lovd love the interactions! Amazing!!
Okay this is absolutely hilarious. I am loving it loving it loving it!!!!
I wonder if mokomoko is going to be a hentai part of sesshy. I really rather love it when it can do stuff and sesshy can feel everything it does, too. I believe kags will want to step back just to save daichi from pain because she will think that his mother is close. She won't understand the mother and pup being apart.
Hahahahahahaha im absolutely loving this story!!! A playful hentai sesshy is awesome! daichi's responses are hilarious lol
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