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SammyJams (Chapter 43) - Wed 07 Feb 2018

Anxiously awaiting another chapter!

Kanda (Chapter 37) - Tue 30 Jan 2018

sorrow, huh? and before, it was mentioned that sesshoumaru and kagome would go through the devastation. welp, i can only assume that riku would force her to go through an early miscarriage.

Kanda (Chapter 35) - Mon 29 Jan 2018

mmmmm, i get what yer saying, but you also said (well, guinevere anyway) that she would have liked to get to know her son (or raise him) since that would have been the only thing in her life that she would have loved. but i guess since guin and inuyasha bonding, that’s now moot. *shrug* now i just wanna see shippo and kagome bond because right now it just seems he’s just there.

Kanda (Chapter 30) - Mon 29 Jan 2018

ok? but how does guin feel about that? i don’t think i have read her and daichi hashing it out as yet. and then there’s sango and miroku. i really would like to know how they are in their relationship. though we know that theyre married and love each other, what about their feelings on being alive again and their thoughts on their children who are dead but have children of their own that also have children of their own. would it be weird? and shippo! we’ve only been allowed into his head once so far! he’s my second fave character after sess in the series, im kinda disappointed we haven’t seen more of him even though he’s in the pack. but who am i kidding, i haven’t read far enough yet to know what’s up or if you have. i’ll come back to these issues if i notice them missings, however.

Kanda (Chapter 29) - Mon 29 Jan 2018

i mean... i would have preferred guin and shippo, but i guess i’m alright with inuyasha and guin, just that it was a little obvious to see that they would from time they met, lol. it would have been interesting to see shippo and guin’s personalities meshing together, especially all the pranks he would have taught her and she with her sight making them even greater, lmao. anyway, hmmm, i dunno i feel like sess opening up is great but imo, it was kinda quick. then again, the pacing of the story overall is kinda quick (but not in a bad way, so don’t mind me). overall, the story so far is good. keep up the good work, fam.

shalisa davis (Chapter 43) - Tue 03 Oct 2017

I loved the story but the past few chapters have me confused.. I. Thought she considered shippo her son but now it's like he don't exist to her.  And I thought kenta was sesshomaru dad not touga.

Mia (Chapter 42) - Fri 29 Sep 2017

Although I liked this chapter and the emotion it brings, you have not included Shippo. You had him call her mother and her call him son in previous chapters. I think chapter 32 and maybe a small spot in 36 is the last I recall their relationship being referred to. And I have always felt they had a mother/son relationship. Yet, in this chapter he is left out of the family dynamic, that they are a family of 3 becoming 4, when it should be 5. I have enjoyed reading this story though. I just felt it needs a little clarifying on whether he is considered her son and part of their family or not and if he, is than a little of his reaction to Kagome and Maru's news. I'm looking forward to reading new chapters!! ????

Natalia (Chapter 43) - Sat 05 Aug 2017

Congratulations!  Take care of yourself,  and write at your own pacing.  

The for updating. It was nice seeing the full story of satori. 

Leticia (Chapter 43) - Sat 05 Aug 2017

Congratulations on the pregnancy and I hope you start to feel better the further along you get. I'll wait patiently for the next update.

Saphira17 (Chapter 42) - Fri 14 Jul 2017

I really loved this last chapter, as you said, it did seem a little forced but still as good as the rest of the story.  However I can't help but ask, what about Kagome's other adopted son (Shippo)? Wouldn't the inclusion of Shippo make the now family of 4 into the soon to be family of 5? Unless Kagome no longer sees Shippo as her son?  I guess I'm a little confused on that.... What turmoil & punishment awai Inuyasha?  Will it be at the hands of Sesshomaru? Kagome? Or one you wouldn't expect, like maybe Guinevere? Or Daichi? Hope these questions & suggestions help unblock you from your writers block.......



Tajera Deane (Chapter 42) - Mon 03 Jul 2017

I think the chapters are great, I know you think they are forced but it seems good and appropriate for the flow of the story I look forward to the other stories! 

Natalia (Chapter 41) - Sun 18 Jun 2017

The chapter was awesome despite your writer block! I can see improvement in your writing and fighting scenes!  I am curious what will happen next!  One question though,  why guinevere? Why this name I.mean is she from.england? This is somehow unclear to me. The a lot for updating! 

SesshyGome (Chapter 40) - Sat 10 Jun 2017

AHH, so excited that you updated! I'm so glad sesshomaru made the right choice and not bed the first female he saw. Please update soon!

dotti (Chapter 39) - Sat 10 Jun 2017

Welcome back!!!!!!! Please stay encouraged!!!

Diane Peter (Chapter 38) - Wed 28 Dec 2016
I thought you'd updated & was thrilled until I saw that same 1st word error & realized you'd thankfully come back & edited the lines issue. Take the h out of the 1st word in the chapter & it'll be pretty much perfect.

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 38) - Tue 27 Dec 2016

I thought having Kagome meet the concubines first was very clever of him knowing that his mother will try using them against Kagome to make her jealous and turning against Sessho. Now that she knows and have basically met them she will know doubt make friends with them and everything else will be moot.

Satori is trully a bitchy controlling bitch of a dog demon.  The chapter was nice but the formatting was way off making reading it kind of difficult.

KEdakumi (Chapter 38) - Tue 27 Dec 2016

I thought her meeting the concubines was funny. Can't wait to see what the lady mother tries. May not be worth keeping her around for the war.


Leahchan13 (Chapter 37) - Sun 25 Dec 2016

Oh gosh I can feel the drama coming and I'm all caught up! :) Oh I can't wait to see her reaction when she sees that they are mated! XD 

Leahchan13 (Chapter 36) - Sat 24 Dec 2016

I get hiccups like twice a day! Omg it is so annoying lol!

Leahchan13 (Chapter 34) - Sat 24 Dec 2016

Yay! So happy for those guys! I can't wait to see how his mom reacts!

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