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Brenna (Chapter 23) - Thu 03 Nov 2016

Truthfully you need to go back and read chapter 22-23. They don't add up. And they are really confusing. 


andreana (Chapter 27) - Mon 26 Sep 2016

Great story I can't wait for you to finish it and maybe even have a sequel 


Sandra (Chapter 27) - Sun 25 Sep 2016

i star reading your story yesterday and is amaizing! am loving it ! i like the rithym in it and all but please update as soon as you can! you are doing a great job!


QUEEN_Cypher (Chapter 27) - Wed 14 Sep 2016

This is so good. Can't wait for the next update.


roberta. (Chapter 27) - Mon 12 Sep 2016

Very intertaining.


Ree-san (Chapter 27) - Sun 11 Sep 2016

I think this is crucial to them ever having a healthy relationship. Happy that Kagome is taking personal responsibility and doing good reflection. Sesshomaru shouldn't have to walk on egg shells around her. I think if he's going to learn how to let someone else in he has to feel safe in being vulnerable in her presence. 


Blommie8 (Chapter 25) - Fri 09 Sep 2016

snow (Chapter 25) - Wed 07 Sep 2016

yes in a way he is right what others say shouldn't matter but that isn't really what it is. he is legally still mated/married and even if they Sesshoumaru and Guinevere are not in love they are still in a relationship and it's still wrong to fuck someone who is still married/mated if they were not together that's different. Kagome is still old school and still has morals she isn't a lose harlot who fucks anyone.


Lady Lynn (Chapter 25) - Mon 05 Sep 2016

I'm going to quote from the Matrix, "There is the difference between knowing the path and walking the path."  Good points have been talked about and I do hope that Kagome comes out with Sesshomaru.


Mona (Chapter 25) - Mon 05 Sep 2016

I agree with Kagome's word and hope she sticks to her statement.  They should not be intimate while he is mated.


roberta. (Chapter 25) - Mon 05 Sep 2016

Severs kagome right. Now she wants to cry.


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 25) - Mon 05 Sep 2016

Uugghh I want the next chapter already!! Lol can you upload like 3 at a time?? Super long ones???  Plllleeeaaassseeeeee


snow (Chapter 22) - Sat 03 Sep 2016

i wouldn't forgive him so easily, he needs to hurt a little more sorry but forgiving and going back into a relationship so easily he will never learn. you can not take for granted people like that smash their love as if its trash and expect to be forgiven so easily nope sorry that's not how things are Sesshoumaru needs to learn.


Blommie8 (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Aug 2016

roberta. (Chapter 24) - Mon 22 Aug 2016

Great chap


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 24) - Mon 22 Aug 2016

I loved this chapter bringing Sango back. As for Kohaku I think he may deserve a second chance at life but for Rin, she has died to many times and needs to rest. She may not appreciate being brought back; but then again who knows maybe she might, so she can be the daughter that Sessho really misses and gets a another chance being the father he should have been to her.

Great chapter. Loved the way you handled bringing Sango back not having Kagome go unconscience again. And I am also glad to know that she will be growing in power as each seal is broken.

Looking forward to the next adventure.


nicole (Chapter 24) - Mon 22 Aug 2016

You should add a twist near the end of the story and bring rin and kohaku together as a couple


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 23) - Tue 16 Aug 2016

A very insightful chapter giving us a look into the demented monk Riku's mindset. He his very demented and uses fear to get people to follow him. He doesn't have the kind of power to put his plan in motion without Kagome. What he did to that poor girl just proved to some of followers that they may have made a mistake in following him but fear him now. He has dark magic in his reiki and he used it to coat the arrow that he shot at Kagome wounding her. I think that was what he was using to track her like he said but using that young miko girl, I think he infused her reiki with some of his and had her shot it hitting Kagome in the chest so now Kagome has been infused with some his dark reiki. He knew that it wasn't going to hurt her but now he can use it to try to control her and still track her. I think he is going to try and lure Kagome away from the group some kind of way. These are my opinions.

Another great chapter and story I love well written by you. Looking for more chapters ahead. Great job.


Blommie8 (Chapter 23) - Tue 16 Aug 2016

Blommie8 (Chapter 23) - Tue 16 Aug 2016

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