Loved this chapter... what am I saying I love the whole story in general I can't wait to see you what comes next. Cosmetology school good luck. Flash cards are going to be your best friend with all the technical terms you're going to have to learn for the tests and if you're having trouble don't be afraid to talk to your teachers that was my one downfall.

Miss Nikki

First off, good luck with school. Second good luck to Kagome and Sesshoumaru. There may be a thing as too close. I wonder how the transition will go, in more ways than one. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

I need MORE!

Definetly didn't see that coming. Quite the esclation and we still don't know who is doing this or why. I can't wait to see what your mind comes up with next :)

a very heartbroken page..but I really love your kagome portrayal...

It was so hard not to cry while reading this chapter. I was also wondering if you got the idea of sacrificing the unborn child from Game Of Thrones, I hope not bc I don't Sess or the child to die. This story has been to great for them to just die and Kagome to break down from grief. Please update soon

That's lots of someone close though. 2 of them damaged by the posion. If both of them die and then Kagome loses it would be cruel and unusual punishment. I can't wait to see what happens next and how they get through this :) Also good luck with all your stories!

This is so mean... A cliffhanger ??  Hopefully you can update again soon, please.

Why choose definitely give her twins!! Sesshomaru would  beside himself with such a big pack!!! And would explain Kagome ravanise behavior. Aww twins would be so great!!!!!

The poison gets one of them. Oh no! Talk about hitting close to home. As if it could get any closer. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

This was a very sweet chapter. It is sad about Rin and Youta's situation about having children but what would happen if Youta was killed off even though Kagome is now pregnant and she had a son who technically would be heir but would be considered a hanyou because Kagome is human, would this cause problems with the council? Although Kagome would more than likely have a full blooded son, the council would still have issues because of his bloodline because of her humanity.

I think she should have twins either two males or a male first and then a female both full blooded because she is so large now and eating as if she is eating for three. The pup or pups should have her miko powers also to make them even more powerful.

I was thinking about what you said about one of the main characters being poisoned and nothing could be done to cure him or her, if it was Rin and she died, her death would change Youta's personality and affect  the dynamics of the pack in a negative way.

Getting off the track, what has happened to Touga after Inuyasha's death (I probably missed it if you already wrote about it) and same thing if I missed reading it, what makes Kagome different than regular humans like her life span and transformation into a dog?

Excellent writing style and very well written.

Nice family day.thank you

Hmm...its always interesting to find out the villain's motives. Its looking like it'll be a team effort, all hands on deck. For all the good that will do with the reiki. I can't wait to see what happens next and how you get them to approach this issue :)

Am enjoying this very much.

Its going to START getting interesting... I can only imagine. I'm a little surprised that Youta and Rin already mated, but hey when in love. I can't wait to see more so why this new enemy is on their cases. At least she was nice enough to give them this one night. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

I knew she would show up somewhere.

You almost forget about the posionings with the war and it ending so quickly. How are Kagome and Sesshoumaru gonna tag team this problem if he's too worried about her being pregnant. I can't wait to see what happens next and the other children's reactions :)

Great update